ArHi FF! Dante's Labyrinth: Thread 2 [Completed]

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vgedin

@vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Oh God.

*shivers*

Tara was evil incarnate.

And she found her match in Khushi.

They could have destroyed everything together. Which they did. And then they destroyed each other. But Tara was always a step ahead. Sigh.

BarbieRocks. Bas!

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Vee

@reflorated

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

I get this sick feeling in my stomach when I read the update. You are changing the way I look at this world now, RB. I won't be able to make friends in boarding anymore RB, not after this chapter. I don't know what to believe and what not to. My head is aching. Why did they have to ruin that poor man? Why? I'm hating to think Tara has such an effect on these f**ked up individuals, despite being dead. Now I get the feeling that Khushi is nothing more than a pawn in this whole mess Tara created.

Please look into getting yourself published, RB. Please.

But going according to chapter 23, you said Shukla would find out who exactly Khushi was...

I think I'll just go an bury myself in some economics and political science, till I feel a little normal again.

Edited by V323 - 12 years ago

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Gosh ... am shocked beyond words ...

Shukla smiled. "Tara told me, of course."

"Why would she tell you?" Khushi said, her voice raising a little.

Shukla smirked. Khushi stared at him for a whole minute when everything fell into place.

"Tara planned all this." Khushi's voice was soft but Shukla was appalled at the apathy in it.

😲 😲 😲 Tussi great Ho ... RB ...

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akaps

@akaps

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Most unexpected - tara

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Frida

@Frida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

omg, it is getting scary & creepy, but still I love it. Everyone is playing games among each other with a motive. I never thought that people can be so manipulative & be so self-absorbed.

Guess Khushi & Tara have no boundaries to these tasks.. they were testing their limits..

I am wondering who is a bigger player here Khushi/Tara or Shukla?

Eagerly waiting for the next update!!

Thanks for the pm.

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soophie

@soophie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

OMG tara planned all this...unbelievable
u kw this ff is not for weak hearted person...i mean that would not be able to bear all these shocks
but what khushi had done to shukla's family was really very sad...every prank sh hv a limit
looking forward for next update
continue soon
waiting

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sslmay11

@sslmay11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

RB u gave show after show with each update...till last chapter the story was too gripping...God!!! i never managed to read ur characters apart from what u told...keep gussesing till this chapter..the master mind behind all this...Hats off to u...excellent story yaar...please do come up with many more plots...u r a fabuolous writer...God bless u!!! now the wait to know how all will fall in place going to be the longest...waiting...

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Kavyanjali

@kavyanjali08

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Awsom blossom my head is spinning with da whole revealtion session...khushi tara's prank finishd shukla's family...n shit da whole conspiricy is pland by tara which is happning now...but y wud tara plan all dis??? Shit man my had is spinning sombody hold me i'm gonna faint...mwahz yaar awsom story nxt chp sooon...i can't wait...can't u update nodr chp 2day plzzz

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khusiarnav

@khusiarnav

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Just read both the updates... ITS JUST BLEW MY MIND!!
HOLLY f**k!!! SERIOUSLY... UNDELIVERABLE MAN!!
amazing just amazing... i cannot even express how awesome of a writer you are...
Keep up my friend!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👍🏼 👍🏼