Maahiya , Sathiya Kr os - Page 7

Originally posted by: kriapatel

Love this kria ki mom ko kya problem he kria se. kitna rudely behave karti he kria ke satha rey is so understanding wo to paheli nazar mehi kria pe latoo ho gaya hayyy so sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: aishu3003

res

unres

finally m back😃 wel come back😆

d os was simply amazingg👏 thanku *bow*

and kria married to rey at d age of 19😲 ha rey but see Rey k saath 😉

but rey s damn sweet😳 i know ...Rey ka character maney khud k dream boy ko dyaan mey rakh k create kiya hey to sweet to hoga he

i hate kria's mom though ha ...rey m also hating her

m waiting for d nxt part😊 kar ney wali hoo thorey time mey

and don discontinue ur works re😭 not exactly it like that on hold😊

m sry for not commenting 😭 its okay

was havin my xams best of luck

now m active😊 welcome back

wil comment regularly on ur updates i know😉

but don discontinueee🥺 okay😊

Originally posted by: Madhukumari

Wow. . .awsome OS aro. . . . .
I realy realy lovd it. . .
Poor kriya. .
Yeh kriya ki mom ki prob kya h?
She is behaving as if kriya unpe boojh h. .i so hate her. .bt,i m thank ful to her 2,coz uske wajah se kr got married. . . .
I realy lovd d character of rey,so sweet and so understanding. .just love him. .:-D
waiting 4 more kriyaansh scenes to cum. .
Jaldi nxt part update ker. .

Originally posted by: chand91

i hate u .

mari fev ss ko discont kr dia

😭

Originally posted by: Roxxy47

Di your NOT a bad writer , apke sare work inne different and Amazing hote hain , sachi wale... aww m glad hum ney kabhi baat nahi ki but still i know u r so sweet and thanku😊

About first point , that's so not fair , ap inne loho ko PM bhejo n get only these likes ... ha rey koi nahi maney apni list ek baar filter kar li ab doobara karney wali hoo 😉

Won't force u but still han do continue writing 😳... chill jaldi pta chal jayega tum logo ko 😉

Okay now about this new work of your's... jaldi 😆

Ek dum mast hai 😎... aww thank u bacha m glad

Different from rest of your works and awesome concept 😃... haha main apna dimmaag jha wha doorati rehti hoo 😆

Kria ne 12th khatam ki he ke uski Mom ne uski shaadi karwadi ...

So not done... but it is reality main apney note mey mention kroogi is concept ko kyu choos kiya

Uske dad ne actually usse suggest kiya to Run Away 😲.. ha ... he is so nice😛

Bare cool dad hain... merey papa ki trha 😎

But still how can she do this , after all she's a Girl 🤔...

Kria ki kismat achi hai jo usse Rey mil gaya.. ha kismat wali hey 😳

Kitna understanding hai N willing to complete all her wishes , how sweet ... this is the main key of this story and rey's character 😊

Already loving the story ❤️... thank u

Isse toh plz continue karna... in few hours updating 😉

N thanks for the pm 😊. no need bacha

Originally posted by: ShemliArsha

first of all sorry for not commenting on ur works...its not bcoz u are a bad writer its just that am not that active on IF now ... sorry dear...but now on wards i will definitely take my time to read ur grt works😊

well coming to this OS, i just loved it...kria's mom is really bad..how can she do this to her daughter...19 is the age for enjoying ur life and acheiving ur dreams...i just hate her mom...actually am not...bcoz she choose the perfect one for her daughter "Rey"😛...

waiting to see this kriyaansh...

Originally posted by: crazysky

hey

its awesome

i really liked it

loved it

please update soon

Originally posted by: lovely7010

res

mrin unres nhi karungi...meine tere liye 1 week wait kiya ijazat post karrne se pehle taki teko first res mile aur tu 1 day wait nhi kar saki...katti.. haha i said sorry main bhool gyi thi but is baar tera first res hey yaad hey na 😆

me unres karing .. thank u


amazing start.. really patner hugs

isko os nhi ss hona chahiye i know iskey 5 part hey i hope yada ho gye to ss kar doogi mera kya yata hey 😆

i loved it .. m glad

dare not u dis continue it.. no way i will update this one soon 😉

and u are a superb writer...so plz apne works continue kar.. sure patner apka hukar sar ankho per 😛

haww yeh priya kya pagal hai? ha poori trha sey

hayee rey already fell fr kriya... heheh he is such a sweet heart 😆

update soon wahi karney wali ho

Originally posted by: aroma.arsha

itna lamba😲

shcok lag gya kyu ki tu always do line mey comment marti hey
esa long comment diya kar na patner i loved it
u r so cute u know na 😉
love u update jaldi milegi *bear hugs*
aroma/-

Originally posted by: dazzlingmanavi

super awsm

this os is really nice

will love to read it further

and for the note i would like to tell you that you are a fab writer and i love your writing skills...i think i have not read your some works but i will surely tryna read them...bas khi se link mill jaye

update this soon and pm me