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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Chali gayi. . .
Kutti,
cum se cum batake toh jaati ki mai yaha time pas kerlu ki nai. . . . . .
Abb mein nanhi si jaan kya karu?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Plz aro..
I love all ur works...

Dnt discnt dem... 😭

Nice start... 👍🏼

Seems interesting...😉

Do cont soon...
N do pm me ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
I totally Loved dis OS...
It was such a sweet update..
Kriya is alwys so sweet n Rey so understanding..
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And Aro don't u dare 2 discontinue ur works..
The people who want to read ur works will b really disappointed n believe me m one of dem.
I know I commented late just cuz of burden of studies but trust me u write awesome n not everyone can write like you...So continue ur works 4 d people who want to read dem n don't remove me 4rm ur buddy list...
I LOVE YOUR WORKS...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Kriyansh_jaanu

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Amazing concept aro...

update was awesome...

n we love all ur works...
pleeesh continueee sooon...




m glad that u love this concept
i think this thing is common in india thats
and u will get to know about my final decision soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
[Story Outline]

okay , everyone have so many questions about this story and Kriya and Rey's character .

So here is some clarification about this .
1.Kriya : She passed out 12th recently . So many reader asked me how it's possible that Kriya is 19 and in 12th . So i wanna say it is possible . Because if you read carefully that i mention she turned 19 . Means , she entered in 19 . I hope you all understand . See , i was also 18 when i passed out 12th . So i think this is not serious matter at all 😆.
I can't reveal about Kriya's character more . You will understand when you read future parts of story 😉.

2.Rey : Now big question ? Rey's age ?😆
Chill he is not an old man . He is only 23 . He is young , charming and handsome hunk .Friendly nature , romantic (you will see😉) , hard working , positive person . Handling own business . Fun loving .
This is all about Rey . I think there is no more need to give clarification about his character .

Now about story

You all know these cases are common in our country . I chose this concept because somewhere this is related with my family also . I think basically today every girl suffering from this thing . This is common thing .

When i was creating plot of this story . Firstly i placed myself in this situation . Then i create this story line . I create Kriya's character in that way that you all girls will relate yourself with Kriya . That what i am hoping . Let see *finger crossed* . One thing , basically place yourself in Kriya's situation i think that will help you to connect with Kriya and Rey in short with this story .

Now about Rey's character . Why , so sweet ?😳
If you have look carefully on Rey's character . I think you all understand . Basically every girl want a life partner like Rey . Every girl want handsome , charming , lovebal , romantic , caring and hardworking boy . Every girl wants that her husband will understand her dreams and help her to fulfill them that what i think .


That's all what i think . I hope you all understand my point of view .

So you in third post
luv u
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Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Very nyc story I thought that this os has 1 part but in the end u told Toh m super happy that it has more part gonna luv it and thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
[-Author Note-]
I know everyone gonna bang their head 🤣. Oh no once again author note .
Chill i am not gonna kill you all 😉.
1. First thank you all for lovely comment and i am happy that you all liked this concept . Basically few reader point out few question . I answered all question . Please check first post of this page . I hope hope everyone satisfied with my answer😊 . I am happy first time you guys asked me questions . smart readers and i am glad . 😆
2. I filtered my buddy list and removed few names😊 . But i got to know that few readers are busy in their exam so i am waiting when they will gonna free . After that again i will filter my buddy list . Better inform your friend .😉

3.Okay after filtering my buddy list i am happy😃 . So i am gonna continue my all works . But i am not gonna update daily . As soon my college gonna be start . I am not gonna be careless about my study . so updates will be slow . So you have to wait . Mind it .

4. Last , this OS contain 4-5 part that what i am hoping . So be calm . Please unres your comment other wise next time no PM .Specially , Neeraj bro and chand better unres your comment fast . 😡

5. Present time Rey and Kriya staying in different room as both become friends only . 😆

Okay that's it . Wake up guys😆 . I am done with my blabbering 😛.
Scroll down for chappy 2
luv u
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Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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After breakfast .
Rey's mom called Kriya "Beta get ready you are going to your parents house " On this Kriya's face lighten up . "But why mom" Rey interrupted in between their talk . Rey's mom slightly hit on his head . "Because you both are leaving today evening for Canada" Rey sadly looked toward her mom like his mom snatched his fav toy . "Rey stop behaving like a kid" Rey hugged her mom " Mom i am stil a kid" Her mom laughed ""I know "" He kissed his son on his forehead "Kriya beta get ready' Kriya walked toward her room . Rey sensed that she is sad . So he followed her . As Rey entered in his room he found Kriya standing near closet . "Hey beautiful stop crying" Kriya turned toward Rey and smiled weakly . "This is not your smile which i saw in the morning" he walked toward Kriya . she walked back "I want that smile' He said looking straight into her eyes . Kriya fixed her gaze on floor . "Is there is something on floor" he followed her gaze . Rey bent down on floor and start checking it . But then Rey scream in pain "Ahh" Kriya got worried . "Rey are you okay ? what happened" Kriya said worriedly . Rey looked toward Kriya with baby face ." Ant bite me ? " He showed her his finger like a kid . After hearing Rey's reply Kriya first looked at his face blankly and then at his finger . "Are you serious . ' she sat next to him "Poor ant ." she started laughing hard she was literally rolling on the floor holding her stomach in her small palm . He looks toward her . Her laugh sounds like ripple of water . "Finally you smiled . " he said proudly and he also joined her . "Rey , i need to get ready . " she walks toward closet . "Ya " rey simply slipped his hand in his pocket . Kriya looked in her bag with confused expression .
"May i help you ?" he said politely . "I don't know how to wear sari ." Rey locked her bag . kriya looked toward in confusion . "wear this . " Rey handed her a gift box .

"You are looking beautiful . God bless you " Rey's mom placed her hand on Kriya's head . "Mom i am also going with Kriya" Her mom held her face in her hand . She looked toward rey You-are-impossible look "Okay fine go .' When priya saw Kriya she opened her mouth to say something . But when she noticed Rey along with Kriya she became silent . Rey noticed that as soon as Kriya saw her mom she hold Rey's hand tightly in fear . Fear completely visible in her eyes . Rey took priya's blessing . He hold Kriyas hand and gave her assure look . Raj with teary eyes hugged her daughter tight . "Dad i am also here" Rey faked anger toward Raj . "sorry beta " raj hugged both of them . "Kriya please help me in kitchen" Priya called Kriya . While talking to Raj Rey made excuse "Papa main abhi aya.' Rey peeped into kitchen . He found Priya scolding Kriya upon some thing . Kriya she was looking at floor and tears are flowing from her eyes . "Mom why are you scolding her?" Rey , he is angry now but he tried to supress his anger . "But ' Priya was about to say some thing . But Rey stopped him "No mom , now Kriya is my wife . And i gifted her this dress" with this Rey hugged Kriya . Kriya cuddle herself in his arm . "Mom she is only 19 . Not an old women ." Rey hold Kriya's hand "I think we need go " he said quick good by to Raj . Raj last time hugged both of them . Kriya Cried lot hugging Raj tight . "Rey iska khyal rakhna" Rey hold Kriya's hand "apni jaan sey b yada." He kissed her hand and held it near his heart . But during drive Rey noticed Kriya was calm and silent . "Kriya , take a nap . Because our journey gonna be very long . " as soon as they entered in their room Rey said . "But packing" Rey made her sit on bed "Don't worry about that ." Rey covered her with blanket and she driffet into sleep .

Rey noticed that Kriya becomes really very excited as they entered in international airport . She was looking around excitedly . Jumping like a child . "you know i never saw airport from inside' she kept talking none stop . "Such a battcutter" In her excitement by mistake she twisted her foot "Be careful' Rey hold her from waist . she looked at Rey with those big innocent eyes . "Sorry i was just' and she screamed in pain . "Aram sey" Rey picked her up in her arms and walked toward empty chair . Rey placed her on empty chair . slowly placed her foot on his leg . "she what you did with your foot . Is swollen " he caresses her foot carefully . "Sit her silently okay i will be back after ticket checking ." he again turned toward her ."Sit here " she followed his order like a good kid . As he turned around he smile "My baby' he walked . Kriya also smiled . After 10 min Rey came back . Let's go . Kriya was about to walk "Wait , remember you hurt your foot ." he gathered her in his arms and walked toward plane .Kriya finally made her self comfortable and placed her hand around his neck . People at airport start clapping for them . Rey looked at Kriya from corner of his eye . she was blushing . so she hide her face in her chest .

As they stepped into plan . Rey carefully placed Kriya on seat . As Kriya got window seat she clapped in happiness . Rey he just smiling on her innocence . But suddenly she become sad . this made Rey worried . "what happened baba' she looked at him with hopefull eyes . "mujey khadey ho k plane dekhna hey ander sey achey sey . I never saw it.' Rey think for a while "Okay then here you go' rey again picked her up in his arm and took a round in the plane . all this while she was smiling and other passengers smiling on them . "How cute , I hope you will also do this for me" few womens said this line to their husband . Finally they were back on their seat . Rey helped Kriya with seat belt . "Rey , i am scared' he held her hand "I am here Kriya . just look at me" As plane take off Kriya start looking out side . She was having fun and Rey he was happy as she was enjoying fullest . Because of tiredness she fell in deep sleep . Rey gave her head sport with his shoulder . "You are such a child Kriya . But i love this . You know i just love your cuteness ," Rey also drift into deep sleep .

Rey wake up because of announcement .He looked toward his sleeping beauty . and he smiled . Rey held Kriya as plane gonna land . He don't want to wake her . As plane landed Rey gathered kriya in his arm . She was sleeping like baby . "Hey sweetie" Rey called one hostess . "yes 'she said shyly . "Please help me with my luggage . he looked toward Kriya "I don't wanna wake her up" Kriya snuggled close to him . air hostess smiled and helped Rey . Kriya stretched her hand . Slowly she opens her eyes and found herself in room . She rubbed her sleepy eyes . "Welcome beautiful" she found him sitting on couch with his laptop . "From how long i am sleeping ? " Rey closed his laptop "Almost 20 hours' she said with shock "Really' Rey nodded "dyaan sey abhi b pain hoga foot mey' she placed her foot on floor slowly . "It's fine now' Rey examined her foot "you are right . But still careful baba. Go and get shower . Then hum dinner kregey okay"

Cold shower relaxed her completely . She entered in living room and found Rey preparing dinner . "Umm May i help you ." Rey was finding something from refrigerator . "No , i know you don't know how to cook baba ." Kriya entered in kitchen "Sorry i am really very bad ." Rey he was cutting vegetables . He placed knife on slab and picked Kriya up made her sit on kitchen slab. "Why you are sorry baba ." he again started his work "I will tell you how to cook . One more thing i will do this thing you just focus on your study ." Rey looked toward Kriya "Stop staring me " Kriya opened her mouth in O shape "No , i am not looking at you ." Kriyaansh enjoyed a lot while preparing dinner . Kriya she was playing with Rey's hair . Rey like a good husband i mean mean like a good friend doing his work .
Rey , he is happy that Kriya now comfortable with him . He patted his back "In two days you made her comfortable with you .' "Rey why are you talking to your self . I am also here' she crossed her arms along her chest and made a cute baby face .

"Sorry baba , i was just asking may we share our food in one plate . "
Kriya she didn't answered . She is busy in playing with spoon and fork . So Rey severed food in two plates . He placed Kriya's plate in front of her . "I thought we gonna eat in plate." Rey looked at Kriya "But you didn't answer me ." Kriya pulled her chair near Rey "Actually , when ever i remained silent it mean yes . " Rey placed spoon in her mouth "Oh i see." Kriya nodded her head as her mouth stuffed with food . "You know you are so cute ." and again he fed her . Rey was feeding her and she was eating and nodding whatever he is saying . After they finished eating finally Kriya spoke "It was yummy food ever i eat . " Rey placed plate in dish washer . "Oh i am glade ki you loved it.' "Rey , let me clean the dishes please" She made baby face . "Okay but be careful ." Rey stepped back "I am not gonna break your plates ."
Rey jumped on kitchen counter "I am not talking about plates , baba" Rey he was getting bored so he splashed water on Kriya . "Rey" Kriya also splashed water on him . they started their holi celebration with water . Both of them having great time . They end up hugging each other . Kriya realized their position . "I am sorry Rey.' She moved back . "Don't be uncomfortable Kriya . We are friend right" Kriya nodded . "Go into your room and change."

Kriya run toward her room and locked herself . She collect her all moment with Rey un till now . "He is really very nice ." She blushed a little . She looked at her self in mirror and creased her image in it . She noticed her face is glowing . "i am lucky" and slightly hit her head . She thought something then moved toward bathroom .

"Kriya' Rey knocked at the door . "Ha Rey." Kriya shouted from bathroom . "Do You want one cup of coffee , baba ? ." Rey waited for her answer . HE shift his wait from left leg to right . "Sure , but with lots of cream ." Rey smiled "Why not .'
Rey returned with two mug of coffee . Kriya held her coffee mug . Both seated into window seat . Rey on left side and Kriya in right side .
Kriya's room

window seat

Kriya tasted coffee . "It yummy , you are really very good cook Rey ." Rey smiled as she is complementing her from last one hour . "Thank you , Now tell me about your dreams" Kriya remain silent for few seconds . then she speak "mujey study karna hey ." Rey moved close to her "I know about that , doosrey dreams btao jo tum karna chahti ho ." Her face lighten up "main , i want to do so many things." she tell him about every single thing she want to do . Rey listened her carefully . Both chatted whole night about everything . Basically Kriya is the who speaking all the time .

It was 6am when she slept in Rey's lap . Rey picked her up and laid her on bed and covered her with blanket . "So baby , get ready . Today gonna be best day of your life" he kissed her on head "Good night " slowly he closed the door and walked toward his room .

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-ARMA_RUBHARU-
baad mey mujey mat blame karna😡
Okay this is long enough
u know long update is bad idea
vesey to real part hey
abhi but now u have to wait for next part
kyu ki tum logo mujey bohat tang kar rhey ho ab scoho ki kya hoga next
main nahi btaugi
i want long comments and like mind it warna
update nahi doogi kal
luv u all
all comment of previous updates is replied so check last pages .
typing error sorry

and ha Kriya ko rey ney jo dress girft ki uska link
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-jo6DjweBabc/USNGLURgcUI/AAADC4/4J8VNRLBVrU/s1600/ChickiWiki-Bollywood-Actress-Yami-Gautam.jpg



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Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waaah kya update the...maza aagay!!

loved it...

amazing it is...

btw rey ne kriya ko koi frock gift ki???

acha huya jo rey ne usne uss priya ko jawab diya...

Ahaaan! airport par hi chalu ho gaye...

loving it

p.s meine iss baar bhi 2 liner se zyada comment kiya hai :P


Edited:

baki ka part was wonderful..

hayee rey kitna caring hai...

loving it

waiting fr next...update soon
Edited by lovely7010 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: -ChocoPie-

okay i am NOT gonna talk to you for this thing! huff! i hate you! 🥺



huh what i did
ek to tu ajj kal baat nahi karti na he koi work pey comment karti hey
why hating me maney kiya kya hey 😭

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