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Originally posted by: Arshix144

What an excellent idea to combine the awesome OS series and make it into a full fledged SS and u ask if it is ok with us, are you kidding? It is more than ok I adore all these pre B I K happenings and now known as B I L! What an appropriate tittle! I am excited at the prospect of even more chapters now! You have penned down a heartwarming prologue there! 👏👏

On to chapter 5, wow woman wow what an appropriate title and Gem of an update! Arnav and Khushi were brought together very beautifully by a miracle in their life that is Kashev. You started the chapter so well with the little bub's eyes that reminded Khushi of another pair of eyes that she couldn't seem to get over! Their mutual grief and concern for Anjali pushed them closer more and more and wham comes the very strong finish that is Arnav's confession! You handled that scene brilliantly, I am lost for words and the way I ramble that doesn't happen very often!😆😆 I can hardly wait to read about Khushi's reaction to this beautiful confession!

Originally posted by: fatima2603

ahhh thank goodness anjalis fine.
the scenes between khushi and the baby are heartwarming.
And arnav confessed his love?? yay!

Originally posted by: JCJS

Proloug was nice. Ha they are married. I am happy that u converted it to a ss. Really well written . Thks for the mail dear.

Originally posted by: JCJS

The chapter5 was awesome. It had so many emotions. He can only open up to her and she can only get it to. Keshav is too cute bonded to his mami . Has his mamas eyes. Lovely.
Finally he said those three words yeppi she would cry out of happiness.
Thks for the mail dear.

Originally posted by: massu91

ohhhooo
i'll take d credit...bcz i always told you to continue in one thread...yes now i hav got a thread to stalk...

yyy did u hav to stop at i love uuu.

i wanted a 6th chp too...

continue sooon plsss

jaldi jaldi

Originally posted by: shree10

Loved it. looking forward to part 6.
Thanks for putting all parts together in 1 thread. makes it easier.

Originally posted by: massu91

ohhhooo
i'll take d credit...bcz i always told you to continue in one thread...yes now i hav got a thread to stalk...

yyy did u hav to stop at i love uuu.

i wanted a 6th chp too...

continue sooon plsss

jaldi jaldi

Originally posted by: IronButterfly

Ive been recommended to read this by Shree and i'm so glad that i did.

It'a a beautiful take and very well written.

Good joband looking forward to reading more of this.

Originally posted by: Crazy_soul

Wow Shikha, u reposted it all in a single thread. Great now it would be easy to re-read it. Can u do the same with '50 shades of love?'. I'm sure it will reach multiple threads then.

The update was nice. Although it was emotional with Anjali's accident ,two of our favorites found a way to let their guards down. Finally they had a conversation! rather than usual bickering.

Originally posted by: tabzz

5 Chappiyy in one go and I am dead officially. U write awesome Shikha, I love all U write. As I read I crave more and more.
Thnx for mail