Taarey FF- Broken! Part 2---Page 18 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
OMG!! Itna suspense... I'm going crazy ! Where's Taani???? Aur 6 AM ko phone 😲, is she OK?!?!?!?!?!?!
Please please please jaldi update karo the prologue is killing me!
You write REALLY well though! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Itna suspense?! Not fair di!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
interesting😊

The gang worried tanni calling all creates a mast wala suspense 😳

Waiting 4 mre!😃

Plz do pm me



Luv Ani❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
OMG!!!!!
Awsome...
Pls update soon...
Cant tolerate this suspense...
update...
update...
update...
update...
update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Superb start di
Luved reyam convo it was funny
But taani where ever she is??
Hope she is fine
Update soon n PM Me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

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Part 1

They are about to leave when Swayam's mobile rings, he looks down to see the caller ID, and gets a shock, when he sees,

'TAANI CALLING'

Sw: Guys, its Taani

Everyone gets alert when they hear this and breathe a sigh of relief and tell Swayam to pick up the phone and put it on speaker.

Sw (picks up the phone and puts it on speaker): Taani, where are you, you know how worried we all were, its 6am, and you are still not home, where are you?

A male voice starts laughing on the other end of the phone, and the gang looks at each other confused.

Man (laughing): Wow, itni chinta, ek raat kya Taani tumhare saath nahin thi, toh itna darr gaye, agar zindagi bhar ke liye tum se door ho jaaye toh phir kya hoga.

The voice sounded a little familiar, but no one could place it, but everyone gets worried with the man's statement, and are shocked for a second, when finally Rey speaks up.

R: Who is this? Aur Taani kahaan hai?

Man: Ohh Rey, tum bhi wahi ho, actually that's not surprising, let me guess, puri ki puri gang wahaan hai, Sharon, Vicky, Nil, Neha, Simmi, Rini, Amar, Bharat, Aashi, kyun?

The gang is all shocked as to how this person knows them.

Sw: Who is this?

Man: Kya guys, you forgot me already, itni jaldi bhool gaye

That is when Rey puts it together.

R (grinding his teeth): SHIVAM!!

Shiv: Ding ding ding, exactly, sahi jawaab (laughs cynically).

R (angry): Shivam, Taani kahaan hai?

Shiv: Woh wahi hai, jahaan use hona chaiye hai, mere paas.

Sw (angry): Shivam tum apni limit mein raho, aur batao Taani kahaan hai

Shiv: Swayam, now is that any way to talk to your future brother in law.

Rey and Swayam's hands curl into fists, as Shivam continues.

Shiv: Ab dekho na, main Taani se pyaar karta hu, aur Taani mujhse, lekin yeh zaalim duniya, and by that I mean you guys, hum dono ko saath hi nahin rehne deti.

R (with venom in his voice): Taani, tumse pyar nahin karti

Shiv (shouts): KARTI HAI, WOH MUJHSE SIRF MUJHSE PYAAR KARTI HAI! You were just an infatuation Rey, sach mien toh Taani mujhse pyaar karti hai, sirf meri Taani itni achi hai ke woh tumse break up hi nahin kar paa rahi thi, iss liye toh mujhe use bhagana pada, main bhi kya karta.

Sh: Shivam, tum pagal ho gaye ho, you have gone mad.

Shiv (laughs cynically once again): Ab woh pyaar hi kya jis me paagalpan na ho.

Sw: Shivam, agar tumne Taani ko kuch bhi kiya na toh main tumhe..

Shiv (interrupts and angry): No no no no no, no threats, warna main kuch aisa waisa na kar bethoon.

Sh (calming Shivam down): Nahin Shivam, dekho, hume bas ek baar Taani se baat karne do please.

Shiv: Ab tumne itne pyar se please bola hai toh, okay.

Shivam walks over to a chair, where he had Taani tied up to a chair, and a piece of cloth stuffed in her mouth to keep her from screaming. Shivam slowly took out the cloth from her mouth, and put the phone to her ear.

Shiv: Yeh loh honey, apne friends aur bhai se baat karlo.

T (scared and crying, whispers) Bh..Bhai?

Hearing Taani's voice, everyone breathes a sigh of relief, at least she was okay.

Sw: Taani, Taani, tum theek toh ho?

T (in between sobs): Bhai, bhai, mujhe bahot darr lag raha hai, mujhe ghar aana hai

R: Heyyy, sweetheart, tumhe kuch nahin hoga, hum hai na, tumhe pata hai tum kahaan ho

T: Re…Rey.. Rey main..

Before Taani can finish, Shivam takes the phone back.

Shiv: Now that's enough for now.

He puts the cloth back in Taani's mouth, and puts the phone back to his own ear.

Shiv: Happy? Taani se maine baat karwadi, but don't get used to it, main hamesha nhain baat karwane wala, after all I don't like to share what is mine.

R: Shivam, tujhe toh main jaan se maar dalunga.

Shiv: Empty threats Rey, after all I have the most important possession in the world, Taani. What's that saying in hindi, haan, ek teer se do nishane, you know, killing two birds with one stone. Now look, (walks towards Taani and smells her hair, while Taani gives a disgusted look, and tries nudging him away from her) ek toh main Taani se pyaar karta hoon. Aur dusra, joh tum sab ne meri insult ki, uske liye isse better revenge kya ho sakta hai. Jaan hain na Taani tum sab ki, Sharon ki BFF, Swayam ki pyari behena aur Rey, tumhari toh zindagi hai, right? Ab main jab isse tum sab se door le jaunga toh jitna dukh tumhe hoga, utni hi khushi mujhe. Aur ab main aur baat nahin kar sakta, maine meri beautiful Taani ke liye date plan ki hai.

Saying that Shivam hung up the phone. Everyone was shocked as to what to do, no one could believe this was happening in reality. Sharon was the first one to speak up.

Sh: Is this really happening?

R: Im going to kill Shivam

Sw: Me too, How Dare he touch my baby sister

Sh: Guys, first we have to find Taani.

Aas: I think hume police types ko inform kar dena chahiye hai

Sh: you're right, guys we have to get police involved.

Sw: Right, let's go.

With that they all headed to the police station.

Precap: Flashback of Shivam's obsession, and Shivam's next call


Authors Note: Guys, this is nothing against Lavin, It's just that I needed a negative male guy, and there has been no other negative male in this show except for Shivam! But this is nothing against Lavin as I said.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Yipeee..me first ho gayi...coming to the point ..ha toh... Omg this was the reason taani did not reached..n the man who kidnapped was shivam.shivam ye tuney kya kiya..oho..intresting continue soon...
Edited by lavi_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Oh gosh!
I have been waiting for this update since long, di. And wow! That was amazing. Seriously. This was just so so so different. Why did you end it so soon? I wanted more. Please please please update soon. Can't wait to read more. Gosh! Shivam's obsession... 😲 I so neend to know the reason. Waiting for the update, di.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
shivam🤬
plz update soon...
ths stry s really very scary
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Oh my holy lord!! Its Shivam 😲 u dont know since how long ive been waiting for u to update this story.. oh my god.. shivam.. and his OBSESSION?? 😲 omg omg.. me is exited.. please update soon now dii and do pm me.

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