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riti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Puja..
How could I not support you on this venture? You must continue Riti.🤗
Very happy that you started your own story, you are indeed a brilliant writer!

🤗🤗

I am so happy to have you here my dear...Aww thank you so much for encouragement and compliment.. 🤗

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riti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: indi52
niiice opening. intriguing, tense. emotional and i love love stories... looking forward. congratulations on taking the big step. you are brave.🤗

🤗 thank you indi di...I am glad u came ..I m just trying to tell a story..and your support is really encouraging..😃

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riti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: mpk2011

Thanks for encouragement madhu jee... On chapters well ..I will see how I can build this up...if more needed..I shall surely add up...😃

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A_Soul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

That are really good one...!

Nice start...

I was little bit confused after reading Prolouge... but then things are clear in my mind... I like the character of shekhar here... though nothing much has been revealed about him yet, still i can feel i can connect with him very easily...!!

so the 5th one will be the one to whom Meera got married...

and he will leave her alone.. Shaker will realize his love for Meera, either when she got married or when his husband lives her...

Waiting for you...

Meera waiting for THAT 5th person &

Shakher waiting for Meera to accept his love for her...

Well this is all my guess after reading till now.. as it is of only 10 chaps i will try to catch it as and when get time... will try to comment too...!!

LOVE THE TITLE... Nice n fresh writting too...!

All the best..!!

P.S. i request you use same font as of prologue.. it is better n clear to read!!

Enjoy

Soul

Edited by A_Soul - 12 years ago

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riti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: amritaa10
Riti..so u started finally..!!

Read it..!Loved it.!!😃Looking frwd to see how it proceeds..!

Thankoos for PM.!!
Yeh lo..meri taarf se...

yes i started...thanks for encouraging amrita..I m glad that u liked it...😊

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riti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: A_Soul
That are really good one...!
Nice start...
I was little bit confused after reading Prolouge... but then things are clear in my mind... I like the character of shekhar here... though nothing much has been revealed about him yet, still i can feel i can connect with him very easily...!!

so the 5th one will be the one to whom Meera got married...
and he will leave her alone.. Shaker will realize his love for Meera, either when she got married or when his husband lives her...

Waiting for you...
Meera waiting for THAT 5th person &
Shakher waiting for Meera to accept his love for her...

Well this is all my guess after reading till now.. as it is of only 10 chaps i will try to catch it as and when get time... will try to comment too...!!

LOVE THE TITLE... Nice n fresh writting too...!
All the best..!!

Enjoy
H
Soul

Thanks for reading and comment soul 😃

You almost guessed the story..Well as I told in prologue...Meera's wait is endless ..so just a spoiler- 5th character -that i will be introducin next was meera's love.. he is dead...thus her wait is endless... but why is she waiting for him...sometimes people live in denial..and refuse to accept the reality...

I guess I revealed too much here..But I hope it clears your doubt. Meera is widow but she is not ready to accept that her husband is dead...On shekhar's part..I will be little cautious to not reveal much... lets unfold the story...😊

Edited- thanks for suggestion of font dear...will keep that in mind...😊

Edited by riti4u - 12 years ago