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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#541

RES

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Happy sighs K since i am completely going to blank out the fact that this is the end.

There is something so magical about reading an epilogue, a quick glance into the land of hamesha and a reassurance of the fact that they lived happily ever after, dealing together with all the challenges that life threw their way. (Juhiji has made me a sucker for an epilogue..bas)

You have no idea as to how happy i am that i got the privilege of being part of this fantastic journey.

A journey of realisation for Arnav and khushi.

A journey of rediscovering what they are capable of doing and achieving all by themselves.

A journey of picking up your life and starting afresh when everything seems lost and fearful.

A journey of accepting your failures and trying to make all the wrongs right.

Though this was a sapno ki duniya it was written so realistically that we couldn't help but become so emotionally involved with the story and the characters.

I have wanted to hit arnav for being a self centred jerk, hold khushi when she broke down, applaud arnav for the man that he became and console arnav & khushi when life kept throwing one hurdle after another.

I am glad that you started the epilogue with La, just a sneak peak that maybe everything is going to be fine for her eventually. Cause poor thing she just didn't deserve what she got, all that hurt for falling in love with a man who could not stand up for her.

And finally for Arnav and khushi to realise that what matters in the end is that they love each other and they are there for one another. Everything else just doesn't matter in the big frame of life.

I loved reading about a Arnav who wants to start a family with khushi if she is agreeable cause i remember reading about a Arnav who had wanted a family with La Dogs included and that kept bothering me quite a bit.

A happy wedding Anniversary to you and your Arnavji...😊

Thank god for CD and boomerang else i would have been drowning in a sea of tears.

P.S:

1) Time for an index NBji.

2) Insignificant but can't help, whats with this khushi always wanting to take a shower after making love to Arnav. 😛

Edited by kondhili - 12 years ago

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siamesecat

@siamesecat

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#542

Res
unres
Wonderful conclusion. Well done.

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#543

Humara bhi res !😳

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Thank You K for the note!And also wish you a very happy wedding anniversary!😃

This story from start to finish for me has been as close and honest to real life as i see couples around me .Though i love all those SKD type stories this one is a stark contrast to them yet has appealed on so many levels.

Where on one hand i admired Khushi ...yet it was Arnav who i was eager to see grow.

This story is more his than Khushi's and with marriage as the lifeline that again is a remarkable feat to see it from a man's pov.

It was truly gratifying to see Arnav turn his life around for the positive.

Thanks K for the regular updates and the end which couldn't have been more apt where we see a closure bought to all the characters and not only Arnav and Khushi .

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Hawa1997

@Hawa1997

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#544

Res😉

-----unres----

That was an amazing ending !!!

Happy that Lavanya moved on and happy where she is at..

Arnav and Khushi came so far from where they where and now happy with each other..

Arnav is now open about having children and if it was ok with Khushi.

Love arrangement of Arnav cooking..

So everything turned out for the better...everyone is happy ...

Enjoyed being on this journey with you with this SS and constant cliff hanger that you gave kept us on the edge of the seat...Magnificently written,from the start to finish loved each every part of it..

Hat off to you!!!👏

Looking forward to the new journey of boomerang and continuing journey of chasing dreams...

Happy Anniversary to you and you hubby, may you have many more and live with happiness and health...👏

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Penny

@penny25

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#545

res...for d last tym for dis stry..:)

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#546

ok i will admit that i am a little confused. arnav and khushi have moved to delhi and he is planning to open up a new venture in delhi or in mumbai? the one bedroom flat referenced in the update is arnav's old flat in delhi?

akash is running AR, i guess. they are in delhi for their third anniversary, i guess.

glad to see Lavanya get a life of her own with meaning.

glad to see arnav cooking. that is something that is rare and to be treasured. loved their planning for the future too.

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#547

Res

I wanted to be able to give this the time and the words a fitting end to this story deserves and so the late unres but here I am.

First - congratulations on successfully completing a story that touched so many hearts and lives. I don't know how many writers or readers here appreciate it but to me a story well finished is a big deal - it means the closure of a beautiful loop that was started with so much promise and ended on a high that the promise hinted at.

Second - thank you for the special mention in your note. I always knew that you will do wonders whenever you write and now I am glad that I don't have to say it anymore. 4 threads, hundreds of comments and every word of appreciation that you receive is proof that you should be doing more of this :)

And now the story itself. What can I say about a story that managed to remain real and yet managed to invoke every emotion possible in me. I hated Arnav, I wept for him, I felt sorry for him and yet in the end he managed to be a man who traveled a great distance with the intention of wanting to do right to the ones he loved.

I wept for Khushi, I was angry with her for being stubborn, I swelled with pride when I saw her achieve what she did despite all odds and yet, in the end, she was the perfect foil for Arnav - insecure and naive and yet just the girl with the golden and yet practical heart that wants to do what is right for herself and for others around her.

You did a wonderful job of creating a story about two people who were forced into a corner, who made the mistakes you and I would make and yet, chose to find happiness in anyway they could. After all that is what life is about, isn't it?

Bravo, K. I wish you so many more words so that you can continue to spin such tales of such purity of heart and emotion.

Keep writing and muah!

Cheers

Meera

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laap

@laap

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#548

Sorry sorry for d horribly delayed unres.

Thanku so much NB for parinay...beautiful story n so fabulously written by u.lovvved it.
Now will b with u on chasing dreams. 😊 n Boomerang.

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#549

Iam also here 😉
Beautiful ending! But iam more happy for Lavaniya! She finally found something for her!

A very Happy Wedding Anniversary to you! Have a very wonderful day!

Edited by opsyellow - 12 years ago