SS:The Seven Sin Series - Thread 2 - Completed!

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aysemLDG

@aysemLDG

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#221

I just come across this SS and read all parts in one go. The toughts that were portrayed from both Khushi and Arnav's point of view were well-written.

In spite of their stubborness and pride, they could confess their love eachother, thanks to perfect trio Akash, Lavanya and Anjali's plan.

Bad news for the single women, all eligible bachelors of Razidas were engaged at the same day.

Thanks for this great story.

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Pearl_Oyster

@Pearl_Oyster

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#222

RES

Unres..!

Hell I just realised I had to Unres this.

I am very sorry mints for delaying this for so long.

It had totally slip out of my memory. 😳

Getting over with the quick apology, I would come to my comment.

This story was truly and truly awesome.

I wouldn't say awesome like Khamoshiyan bcoz both the stories can't be compared...!

Both belong to totally different genres and paint a thoroughly different picture.

yet, I can proudly say this was as good as Khamoshiyaan.

With all the three works of yours I have read so far, I can totally conclude that you have got a good taste and talent at naming your stories (I wish I had the same talent) 😛

Each chapter of this SS was thoroughly entertaining and of course well written.

I am fan of your writing here.

Please keep writing more.

I have received your previous two PMs, one for Peeka-a-boo update and the other for a OS and TS.

I'll read those stories as soon as possible and would leave my comment. 😳

I really appreciate you for sending the PMs.

Thanks a lot. 😊

-Kiran

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mklam

@mklam

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#223

I just stumbled on this SS and was hooked. You'd chosen a great theme to weave a story around the seven deadly sins and done a wonderful job. Several scenes stood out for me whether it was the dance floor (jealousy) or eating jalebis amidst other interesting activities in the kitchen😊 its hard to pick on any one. The journey of three couples with Arnav being the toughest nut to crack was action-packed with just the right dose of romance and humour. You write very well.

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Arhi SS:Love & Marriage

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arnavini

@arnavini

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Perfect... A superb dish of love is prepared with all added ingredients . Its delicious ,mouthwatering evn seeing it.. Its a superb ss i came across. The way dey shared deir passionate moments was brilliant . U wrote it very well. All emotions very well added...

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kurinji

@kurinji

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Quite a good piece of weaving all the sins around the couple.
All the three settled with respective parteners, knocked up Anjali and the Sumer guy is adorable, glad to know he is settled and did that, to bring the couple together.