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Posted: 12 years ago
hi mints...

my friend vandana...apparently your friend vandana 😃 had recommended this story to me. i had read 2 chapters and had closed my page. i completely forgot about this .i have a habit of reading stories randomly...and sometimes dont keep track...and i forget the name of the story as well as the writer too. thats exactly what happenend this time too. for the past couple of weeks i had been searching for this story ...actually going through all the threads. and i forgot that vandana had asked me to read this.

so finally i decided to ask somebody for help today...and asked dj-arshifan (who according to me reads almost all FF's in this forum)...thankyou dj-arshifan for telling me this is the story i was looking for.😃

so i read all 8 chapters in one go...wow...all the sins expressed in love and attraction. i love arnav...i always love arnav...probably because of barun. but this arnav is much more relaxed than the real ASR. khush too is a strong character. a change from the typical OTT types. i enjoyed reading your story. lavanya too is very sweet. well written and short and sweet.😊

a special mention to vandana's poems...(vandana, wow man...you are really creative)...can you believe it mints...she actually made me read all her poems.😉😆😆 but they are really good. and thankyou vandana for recomending this story.



Edited by naaza_deen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: naaza_deen

hi mints...


my friend vandana...apparently your friend vandana 😃 had recommended this story to me. i had read 2 chapters and had closed my page. i completely forgot about this .i have a habit of reading stories randomly...and sometimes dont keep track...and i forget the name of the story as well as the writer too. thats exactly what happenend this time too. for the past couple of weeks i had been searching for this story ...actually going through all the threads. and i forgot that vandana had asked me to read this.

so finally i decided to ask somebody for help today...and asked dj-arshifan (who according to me reads almost all FF's in this forum)...thankyou dj-arshifan for telling me this is the story i was looking for.😃

so i read all 8 chapters in one go...wow...all the sins expressed in love and attraction. i love arnav...i always love arnav...probably because of barun. but this arnav is much more relaxed than the real ASR. khush too is a strong character. a change from the typical OTT types. i enjoyed reading your story. lavanya too is very sweet. well written and short and sweet.😊

a special mention to vandana's poems...(vandana, wow man...you are really creative)...can you believe it mints...she actually made me read all her poems.😉😆😆 but they are really good. and thankyou vandana for recomending this story.




I am so happy that you commented here. And no, i don't read all stories. Its not my cup of tea, though I used too.
Mints di, Ab season 2 please😉
But after september ends so that I can read it.😃😳

And vandi di - Wow man? I thought you would write woman. Just a joke, no offence😃😆
Edited by dj_arshifan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was a beautiful beautiful story
iam grateful to vandana for giving me the link to mint's works and for the lovely poems after each update - take a bow vandana
lovely story mints - will check the other stories in ur index -
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: naaza_deen

hi mints...


my friend vandana...apparently your friend vandana 😃 had recommended this story to me. i had read 2 chapters and had closed my page. i completely forgot about this .i have a habit of reading stories randomly...and sometimes dont keep track...and i forget the name of the story as well as the writer too. thats exactly what happenend this time too. for the past couple of weeks i had been searching for this story ...actually going through all the threads. and i forgot that vandana had asked me to read this.

so finally i decided to ask somebody for help today...and asked dj-arshifan (who according to me reads almost all FF's in this forum)...thankyou dj-arshifan for telling me this is the story i was looking for.😃

so i read all 8 chapters in one go...wow...all the sins expressed in love and attraction. i love arnav...i always love arnav...probably because of barun. but this arnav is much more relaxed than the real ASR. khush too is a strong character. a change from the typical OTT types. i enjoyed reading your story. lavanya too is very sweet. well written and short and sweet.😊

a special mention to vandana's poems...(vandana, wow man...you are really creative)...can you believe it mints...she actually made me read all her poems.😉😆😆 but they are really good. and thankyou vandana for recomending this story.




Hahaha so much off - screen drama to read this story!! 😆
Thank you so much for going through all the trouble to read it...
I am glad it was worth it and you enjoyed the sinful journey!!

Thanks Dee for sharing the link,...
And Vandy thanks for recommending it... and as for your lovely poems!! 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
It had all but Love. . This is jus damn WONDERFUL ss i came across !
Freaking superb ! Loved it ! !
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Posted: 12 years ago
just read the entire sevenfold sinful story and was drowned in the passion that just oozed out!!! Especially their first kiss and the fashion show scene...Simply loved it dear!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Zehra recommended it in SOTW long back and I had bookmarked it.
Finally found the time today to catch up and here I am.
Your first story and this good!!!!
I loved how the story was in a smooth flow along with the sins you chose for every chapter.
Their meeting, attractions, misunderstanding, jealousy, pride to say first - everything was so well portrayed.
I really loved it for being light but at the same time it didn't lose its charm and logic.
Akash & Lavanya were so cute and smart to pull up the plan.
Arnav-Khushi being caught in that compromising position by anjali & Shyam was so embarrassing!!
Payal & NK - The shy Payal, happy go lucky NK but they were fast enough to announce their love.
Arnav checked on his passion everytime his desire and passion was about to spiral out of control. His love for Khushi is pure.
Loved every update.👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow this was superb story.👍🏼
Awesome 👏
Beautiful😳
Everything was plan of Akash lavanyah and later the group became bigger to bring arnav and Khushi together. And the plan worked perfectly.
👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
The Seven Sins have never been more tempting to me than they do now after reading your series...first of all, let me say this, the concept in my view was brilliant, how aptly you weaved your story around the sins, with every part perfectly molded to fit the supposed sin and yet, yet your story didn't not have any hitches, it flowed perfectly from one sin to another, let's just say, the progression was smooth, for the lack of a better word...and since i read your story in one go, i could see the growth in you as a writer from your very first sin to the epilogue, what a learning experience it must had been for you...I loved your writing so very much, I'm gonna stalk your other stories as well when the time permits!

A huge shoutout to Vandana, for recommending this story to me and for the poems she wrote for every update, Vandana, tussi kamaal ho yaar! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
I L-o-v-ed i-t!
I am at loss of words after reading this SS. Are you sure this is your first work?😲
First things first, so..
Thanks bacchi(dj_arshifan) for suggesting me this story. I must say you have awesome stories to suggest😛

And now to the story, it was a great ride of them committing the seven sins! I must applaud you for the hard work you've put in so that the update fits to the sin. 👏 It was so beautifully penned down & in an apt manner which made it an enjoyable read :)
I loved how the story started, with their ego clashes & fights, which reminded me of our original Arnav & Khushi. Then came the attraction from both sides made them give into their desires, which was then followed by glutton, sloth, greed & Love ❤️.
Perfect ending to the SS. Keep it up. Will read other stories soon😊
Edited by -Lavanya- - 11 years ago

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