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Posted: 12 years ago
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Finallly i read it
Mints first of ol thanku for ur kind words Btw i didnt tell u my name na My Name is Pooja
I love d update šŸ‘šŸ‘ u really did a fab job in dis ff šŸ‘šŸ‘
U only showed d engagement i was expecting d wedding too 😭😭 Hm kya boolu main ro rhi hu sab achi cheeze itni jaldi q khatm hojati haišŸ˜•šŸ˜•
Cmng back to update it was fab well dis is only cmng out nw šŸ˜†
soo as we ol knw it was a plan fr making arnav reallize his love for khushi wich workd so perfect ahhh i love dat kamina khurana ka mystery finally solve hua arnav ka samne i loved d possiveness of him hhehehehešŸ‘šŸ‘
"Sweetheart, we must get going. Or our crazy families will barge in here." He kissed her lips once more, a sweet lingering kiss and spoke as he broke off, "I promise to continue this soon love." With a wink and a smirk on his face, he dragged a flustered Khushi following him.
i loved d part most
"I know Arnav she is yours. I remember!" And he pulled a beautiful girl from behind him and said, "She is MINE!
dis is nt fair y did u made fun of him he just cared for his love his lyf and everyone made his laugh😲
khushi also did made laugh of him awww my poor arnav ...😭😭
D way khushi pacified himm awww sooo sweett of her
Bt al ends well arnav gt d love of his lyf khushi
heeyyy frgt to mntn i also loved dere passionate moment lolll dat was too much d way arnav made khushi back dress deep neck
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
I am thankful to Vandana for recommending this story to me, else I would have missed reading this beautiful piece of fiction.
Thanks Mints for the dedicztion. Another arm in my arsenal to tease V with.
This epilogue is the perfect ending to this lovely story.
All three couples got engaged and Anjali is pregnant.

Naughty Arnav takes Khushi to the poolside when he wants to be alone with her.šŸ˜‰
And Sumer is married.
Love this Aakash. He is Arnav's brother. He should be smart.
What a plan he concocted. And the fish landed in the net.

Loved this story and your writing, Mints.
Thanks for writing this and starting another one.
Thanks again, V
Edited by 1chilly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow that was a beautiful ending...i just wish u wudnt have ended it here i so want to read more!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: chitrajay

Mints, Vandy!! We did it! We did it! We did it!🄳

The end'.the conclusion of a beautiful story, Mints!! But not quite ' it heralds the beginning of beautiful relationships, in more ways than one''šŸ¤—

We started with a common bond, which was our love for IPK and Arnav and Khushi's love story'so many chats, so many days and nights of discussing a show so close to our hearts. So many thoughts on what could have been improved, what could have been done differently? I am sure every IPK fan has had his or her share of similar moments spent wondering about the what ifs...'and then --- there were THOSE moments, which were truly sublime, some things could not have been improved upon, some things were perfect, just the way they were meant to be ' perfect in their little imperfections, perfect even with every little flaw'.giving us unforgettable memories that we will cherish for a lifetime.😳 A story about relationships, between Arnav and Khushi, their families, between the show and its actors, the show and its fans, the actors and its fans, and between the fans themselves'I mention each of these separately, because this show was unique and every relationship that was formed truly unique. Never before have I seen so many people all in love and hate at the same time ' in this, the show really lived up to its tag line ' mohabbat door jaane na de 'nafrat paas aane na de ' in the end, it was all mohabbat ' it really didn't let us let go of the show, even though we hated so many things ' love overcame everything.😃 I believe it's not just the show and its actors, its all the IPK fans who will remain unforgettable! Their love and loyalty!! Always and forever!šŸ‘

Just look at us, we bonded over the show ending, then moved on to a true connection, a friendship that is unexplainable, considering we all live in different places and have never even met'.moving to writing about our obsession, maybe in some way, paying homage to something precious and truly unforgettable. Trying to find closure in our own little ways '. And today, here we stand, having successfully completed your story, Mints and'' and at the threshold of new beginnings - of beautiful relationships ' for your Arnav and Khushi, for NK and Payal, for Akash and Lavanya ' between you, us and the readers ' we have all discovered something during the course of this journey - through SINS ---šŸ˜† Sinning has never been so rewarding before, Mints ' the reward of friendship being the best of all. Thank you for sharing this journey with us'the end of your first story maybe, but surely just the start of many more. You have set the bar really high, Mints!! I am so so proud of you!!!! šŸ¤—šŸ‘šŸ¼ā­ļøThis story ' this experience is unforgettable!

First of all, let me compliment you on the banners ' with every update, I wait to see what it will be like; somehow you pick the perfect pictures for every emotion, for every sin. Beauuutifulll!!!! (in memory of a caramel soulful gaze, with a "beauuutiful" that spilled out in a bhang induced daze'sigh!!!)

I totally loved how you focused on all three couples. I loved the detailed description of the venue, the invitees and most of all, the grooms and their gorgeous brides!

"NK sprinted towards her almost knocking her down" 'šŸ˜† this brought out a laugh, as I could just imagine a scene like that ' brought to mind, Arnav calling NK clumsy ' I could "see" his sheepish look at doing something so silly'hahaha -lovely imagery, there, Mints!šŸ˜†

Loved the choice of colors for each bride ' you haven't neglected any of them! You gave every bride her rightful due, Mints ' I know that you have a generous heart, and I see it in everything that you write too ' a sense of fairness, justice and a big heart!!! Love you, girl'don't ever change!!!!

And then''Khushi'..in red and green 'I could just imagine a soft "rabba ve "playing ' a song only they could hear, a music only their hearts were attuned to'pure magic! Somehow I always liked this particular color combination on her, the bridal outfit she wore during the first grihapravesh made her look absolutely stunning'in fact I often wondered how Arnav stayed unmoved seeing her ' who would not have melted seeing her ' it went beyond mere beauty, the pain in her eyes, in her entire being seemed to have enhanced her innocence and delicate look.

Oh and Arnav has to show his "haq", huh? Kissing her right there, branding her ' his look and gesture saying "Mine" like nothing else could! šŸ˜†

Again I have to applaud how you showed both their thoughts and emotions.

Your Khushi'she is just so perfect, Mints šŸ‘šŸ¼'.I could FEEL every emotion she must have felt, being teased and flirted with- the girl must have been in a state of absolute blushing confusion'.nervous, excited, anxious ' a little bit in fear, and a lot in anticipation! And then when she walks up feeling like this, all she sees is 'Love"'sigh!!!😳 I stopped reading at this point, you know, because I wanted to savor that moment ' wanted to feel, be there'.khushi ke aansoo, Mints, for that pure feeling of love---that purity of emotion that you managed to convey brilliantly!!!! ā­ļøThank you-once again you gave me something I had longed to see more on the show ' I have always loved how Arnav looks at Khushi- a lost, soft, look that goes beyond love ' something that conveys in words how precious she is to him! (Am I making any sense here????🤪) Mints ' loved it!šŸ‘

And then the "dhak-dhaks' another crazy IPK trademark ' you have used it so beautifully too ' "and she knew the reason for it was not acidity" ' hahaha ' a glimpse of Khushi's cute paagalpan again -who can forget Khushi and her "khatti dakaar". And that next scene...what was that???? Kya tha yeh???(courtesy Anjalidi post teri meri) I could feel "hot lips" on my cheek and "dhak dhaks" in my heart ' how did you manage to create that effect in just two lines, Mints??? Wow!šŸ˜³ā˜ŗļø

Loved the next paragraph where you summarized the engagement preparations and the celebrations and Anjali's role ' doing what she does best ' bonding people together. Angrezi Beat is the perfect song for NK and Payal ' they truly are a cute couple- can imagine them a few years from now, teasing, fighting and as much in love as now. A couple who really are equals ' emotionally and mentally- in tune and in sync with each other😃. Unexpectedly, Akash and Lavanya are the true plotters here, hai na? Haha ' am glad bechara Akash isn't so bechara and has managed to plot and plan in true Raizada fashion! Smart, observant and not one to miss an opportunity when he saw it!! And Lavanya is his perfect match ' had never thought of this unusal pairing until your story, Mints ' but it worked wonderfully for me!šŸ‘

And you did have to bring in our dear vamp Sheetal in here too? Hmmm. I forgive you. Since, she was the catalyst for Khushi to spill her feelings ' loved how you have recapped the story with a blend of the seven sins- nice touch! And Anjali stumbling over her "Chotey" and Khushi being all part of en elaborate ruse ' wow! So then a brother and sister team up, and plot and plan to bring their other brother and his love together. You are right ' they all have reached their destination ' love --and they will continue on a new journey full of love'now and forever. I love happily-ever-afters!!! I hate tragedies!!!

So whilst, Akash and Lavanaya gloat over their plan's success, where have our hero and heroine got to? Of course!! Duh!!! Where else?? And another passionate scene for us all'by the poolside- a place almost sacred to us for all the magical Arnav-Khushi moments we saw there and hoped to see more of'. Arnav and Khushi'you are well and truly lost, aren't you? Moments of bliss, passionate surrender and then her loving confession brings him back to the present'.he becomes aware of the present and the lack of privacy'.

Loved the next bit'every little bit, in fact, the few stolen moments, in which they manage to convey to each other how they feel'.the trust, the longing, the love, the passion all there'.and loved that they managed to get these moments to themselves- making unspoken promises to each other. Then Arnav mentioning their crazy families ----haha Mints - I could not help but remember Arnav thinking about his crazy family during the Mrs. India track ' one of those rare moments of humor, at that crazy time.😃

"You will always be my Chotte" --- Gosh, would any grown man want to hear that??? IšŸ˜† honestly hope and pray that I do not make any such embarrassing gaffes 😳when my son is all grown up'.(pssst'knowing myself, I would probably do it deliberately!!!😈) Jokes, apart, I loved the Anjali in this story'a loving sister, who truly wants nothing more than her brothers' happiness ' and now there is a little bit of sunshine coming into her life too- a new life, a baby ' a gift really precious.

And then, my favorite topic ' Sumer Singh Khurana ' I love this guy!!šŸ˜‰

Loved the entire scenario unfolding next ' a jealous Arnav is dangerous 😃' a fact even Sumer knows, so he sweetly defuses the tension with "I know Arnav she is yours. I remember!" "She is MINE!" šŸ˜†Hahaha ' what a googly!!!! Idanya ' that is such a beautiful name! Am glad you took my HINT seriously and gave Sumer his own Khushi ' his Idanya! šŸ¤—And then comes Arnav's realization that he has been well and truly had!!! Everyone braces for his explosive anger --- but he responds with his lopsided smile and laughter ' indeed so rare for Arnav Singh Raizada ' precious too for all its rarity ' this scene took me back to the golden IPK days ' Sangeet of Payash ' Arnav laughing and smiling at Khushi after her mimicry of him during the "Jiji, tere jethji deewane". Memories!!! Unforgettable memories!!!

And as you so rightly ended, Mints'the perfect recipe of life is lots and lots of love 'garnished with a little bit of everything'that indeed is the true spice of life! Perfecto, my friend! You are outstanding!!!ā­ļøā­ļøā­ļø

That is why I wish to quote a few lines from the song Unforgettable sung by Nat King Cole ' it echoes our sentiments for the IPK the show, for Arnav and Khushi, for the entire experience, for SINs, for all the new friends I have made through this story, for all the old friends I did have here already, and most of all, for our friendship- Vandy, you and I šŸ¤—

Unforgettable, that's what you are
Unforgettable though near or far
Like a song of love that clings to me
How the thought of you does things to me
Never before has someone been more

Unforgettable in every way
And forever more, that's how you'll stay
That's why, darling, it's incredible
That someone so unforgettable
Thinks that I am unforgettable too

Unforgettable in every way
And forever more, that's how you'll stay
That's why, darling, it's incredible
That someone so unforgettable
Thinks that I am unforgettable too

Thank you as always for the dedication and for this wonderful story ' true talent, Mints...that is what you have! šŸ‘

Keep writing''

And waiting to peek in, at another place!

But then, that is another story!!!! (Pun fully intended)!šŸ˜‰


C, you have not missed a thing... Love your style ...it's so personalised and it feels like you are having a casual chat with Mints over coffee...and me too...
Reading it makes me smile and feel ...remembering IPK and all the madness and love...and how we found each other too...
I love how you have totally and perfectly gotten Mints ...she is all that and more...your writing so enjoyable the wit and humour ...I am so loved it...and yes we did it.! It been a great journey...all our plotting and planning and the rush to res...so many memories and lots more to be made., !

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Posted: 12 years ago
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ending can't be more perfect!šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Wow... this was just fabulous and loved the way you gave such a befitting end to all the 3 love stories!
You know when people like Vandana and chitra comment i feel so inadequate to express my thoughts cause not just your story was out of this world so have been their comments.

I just hope you are aware how much i appreciate your efforts with this wonderful series and loved reading them!

And looking forward to read Peek a boo and love the new title !!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: _disha_

Wow... this was just fabulous and loved the way you gave such a befitting end to all the 3 love stories!

You know when people like Vandana and chitra comment i feel so inadequate to express my thoughts cause not just your story was out of this world so have been their comments.

I just hope you are aware how much i appreciate your efforts with this wonderful series and loved reading them!

And looking forward to read Peek a boo and love the new title !!!!



DDD thanks but your comments are pretty great too!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is a mustt read man.I realy miss our Ipk...kya din the!!!!! this was truly a sperb journy of luv,jealousy,envy n everything..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved this story.. Wish there were more sins to continue..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey
came across this ff today only n completed in one go
loved it completely
their journey toward love was just beautiful
keep up with ur good work

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