Twin souls... part 17 page 82 (KR SS)

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moumita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

nice one...

all the update for ur exam...😊

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

well bored with studies... so giving a break of 30 mins??

Part-3

" kya hua usse?? "swetha's mom asked she came out.

"dekhiye ...as I said before usse khush rakhiye!! jitna hosake utna!! we are giving our best... mai apni poori koshish karoongi to save her. "she said with a small smile .

But Rey had known her by a whole week now...he can atleast read her eyes that they are worried. He silently followed her to her cabin. He waited outside for sometime making up himself to hear the worst and slowly opened the door. He saw her sitting rubbing her forehead a little worried.

"Kriya!"he called her as she looked at him startled.

"uh..huh -rey??"she asked.

"mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai , can I ??"he asked as she nodded.

" kriya swetha kaisi hai?? "he asked sitting beside her on the couch.

"As I said rey we have to just hope for the best..keep her happy!!" she said sighing.

"kriya agar mai sirf tumhara friend hota aur swetha ko jaanta tak nahi aur tab mei poochta toh tab bhi yahi bologi??"he looked at her hopefully!!

she sighed "Rey!! sach mei we have to hope for the best , as I said you earlier swetha ki case mei possibilities 50-50 hai... abhi tak aisi koi stable stage pe nahi pohunchi wo ki mai tumhe poora bharosa dedun ki she will..."she stopped.

"I am giving my best rey!! I really don't want anything happen to her, kehte hai doctors ko patient se lagav nahi rakhna chahiye and all... par har doctor ko ye toh rahega ki jiski treatment kare wo ekdam fit uske paas aake thanks bole. You know it feels so good. I know tum logon ko jyaada chinta hoti hai swetha ki but mujhe bhi... I don't know rey, mere 4 patients abhi critical conditions mei hai !! mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaraha, maine bohut saare doctors se baat kiya but jab tak swetha meri experiments ko respond nahi karti neither I can move further now I can say anything confirmed. *sigh* mujhe toh darr hai ki wo hope loose na kare...its very difficult for her to move..she is struggle every moment!!! I just wish wo thoda respond kare ... mai baaki sab dekhloongi. "she said and rested her chin on her palm.

She looked at him as she sensed him taking her hand. he slowly came on knees before her.

"Kriya I can understand, trust me mai aur koshish karoonga taaki uski koi responce aajaye!! I know tumhe bohut bura lag raha hai..everything will be fine. I trust my love and I trust your talent!! for two mis just close your eyes...you too need rest!! " rey said looking at her.

She smiled at him.. "it feels good to have a friend!! "she smiled

"don't you have one except me??" he frowned!!

"well no!! you see I irritate people a lot and I prefer to be alone by myself!!"she said honestly.

"koi baat nahi now I am here .. aaj se mai tumhara one and only friend!! matlab friend aur best friend donon mai!!"he said with a wink . In last one week she helped him a lot to build confidence!!

"Rey!! don't..dar lagta hai agar swetha ke case mei kuch hua toh I can't face you!! patients aur unki family ko dekh sakti hun but once I give them a place in my life I can't see them crying or week...may that's the reason I prefer to be alone. "he pleaded with her eyes...

He looked down squeezing her hands!!
"Kriya agar hona hai toh tumhari lakh koshish karne ke baad bhi hoga, don't blame youself for anything...you know you always give your best in your work!! aur mujhe face karne ki baat... I know it will be difficult!! but I never wish but agar swetha ko kuch hua then I really want a strong support which I am sure you can give !! "he said looking at her.

"I don't know rey!! ab tum swetha ke paas jao ..mujhe doosre patient ko dekhne jaana hai!! "she said as she stood up!!. He held her hand,

"itna tension matlo... tumne hi bola tha mujhe...a smile can wipe many worries, now smile and go, I will go to swetha!!"he said and went away!

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"I want the truth!! sach batao kaisi hai??"rey asked as soon as she came out of the OT.

"I failed rey!!"she said looking down. His world stopped in that one second!! his whole world crashed and he felt his head heavy!! he gulped hard and looked up at her who is looking down and slightly tears welling up, he took a deep breathe . everyone were just too shocked to say anything.

He took her hands in his.. "you did your best Kriya!! I know that... it s my bad luck..can...can I see her??" he asked.

She nodded her head as he rushed into the cabin next second. He dragged his feet with much difficulty!! He collapsed on the chair beside the bed and took her palm into his.

"you said just 6 days, 6 din hume dor rehna padega aur fir hamesha keliye ek hojayenge ... you broke your promise swetha!!! you broke my heart!! "he said without emotion!! he felt a hand on his shoulder..he looked back to find kriya..he hugged her waist.

"she broke her promise kriya..she left me all alone!! aise kaise kar sakti hai wo?? kaise karsakti hai??"he kept on crying hugging her tight as she simply caressed his hair back . She is feeling very bad , but she would never cry!! not in front of anyone...and anyone means NO one!!

"Rey!! she loves you a lot!! don't cry for her... keep loving her, never forget her its the best way you can make her happy!! your smile means a lot to her Rey!! before taking her last breathe she just wished you are happy Rey!! tumhe bulane hi wali thi par"she trailed off..

Rey kept crying cluthing swetha's hand as kriya hugged him his head resting on her stomach and caressed his hair comforting him.

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" naani aaj meri do do patients.. "she burst out coming home.

"Kriya tumhari kaam waisa hai beta" her naani caressed her hair.. everytime she fails to save someone she breaks down!!

" kyun naani !! maine toh uss din doctor pe itna chillaya ki unhone mom dad ko nahi bachaya... aur ab mai bhi!!" she cried.

"Kriya!! beta ...samhalo... somethings are just not meant to be! agar aise weak hojaogi toh baaki patients ka treatment koun karega??"her naana came and sat beside her caressing her hair.

She wiped her tears.. "haa naanu!! waise mujhe thoda chai milega?? "she asked

"khana??" her naani asked

"naani Dr. Kapoor se ek case ke baare mei baat karne ke baad khaungi!!"she said

they nodded as she went in.

here Rey was in the corner of the hall looking at her dead body .

Only destiny knows what is gonna happen with them!!

will Rey be able to ever move on?? or will he crushes himself remembering his love??

will Kriya be able to face Rey ever??

hehe I know stupid qsns!!! enjoy the part..

again this was written just to energise me!! bye ..off to reading!!

-Deetha😃

Edited by deetha - 12 years ago

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

pehle toh ...

kya neeche inna sama baandh rhi thi pagli? aise hi fokat yahan vahan karing...

haan so i love ur quickie updates... ;)

they cool.. and sweet..

and ekdum to the point...

bhagwaan kare tere exams har wakt rhe... 😉 😆 *ready to dodge whar u r gonna thro at me after reading this line*

so really loved how you showed the doctor side of it...

and the emotion build up..

pretty amazing...

loved the emotions u portrayed.. amazingly written... :D

chal ab jaldi se tqin souls pe aa ja... ;)

Edited by -Vaish- - 12 years ago

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

res

unres

swetha died😲

loovveed d way how KR supported each other👏

this s gettin more interesting😃

waiting for d nxt part😳

and sry for d late unres😳

Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago

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sanjana

@sanju_arsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

res
unres
awesome update..
Kriya supports very much..
I hope rey will move on..
Update soon

Edited by sanju_arsha - 12 years ago

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Princess_Devil

@Princess_Devil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

res

unres...

awesome update...

loved kriyaansh's bond...

rey had made himself really strng, sab kriya ki wajah se...

kriya dint fail, destiny mai jo likha wo hoga...

felt very bad for rey 😭

really kriya is very sensitive but shows that she's a strng person...

love kriya helping nature...

waiting for update...

Edited by nikkreyarshafan - 12 years ago

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Sanskriti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Awesome update 😊

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shalini saroha

@shalini_arsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

doctors ki life is not easy nd u portrayed it vry well... I jst loved it... I wish i can live that life... Bt nevr mind...i m in lov wid dis ss... Their bonding is increasing day by day... Loved d update... Nd yaa last m tre ques. Sachi m bakwas the...:p offcourse he'll mov on...

Edited by shalini_arsha - 12 years ago