AR FF: TMLS [Chapter 13: Pg.76] 30/7/14

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

nice and cute part.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

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CutiepieHarshad

@CutiepieHarshad

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

awesome part

loved it

sooo cute

plz cont soon

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Mithila

@Mee2

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Hey Rocker... 😃
Firstly congratz 4r dat... 😃
I wonder mein kab Rocker banungi... 😒
Forget dat, comin 2 d update... 😛
Itz beautiful as usual dear... 😊
I love hw every1 is after Kumud, teasin her so bad... 😆
N Asad toh abhi se sidin his future wifey... 😳
So cute it was... 😛
Kumud is upset vt everyone, awww... 😊
Asad gettin mischievious day by day, wonder wat Kumud vl do to him after dat prank of his... 😆
Loved it, n continue soon... 😊
Love yaa... ❤️

Edited by -Mith- - 12 years ago

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Sana70

@Sana70

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Nice part 😊 Beautiful as always dear, loved it😃

Thanks 4 the PM😊

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mrs.armanmallik

@mrs.armanmallik

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#165

TFS

Plz pm me again when u update!

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Prima :D

@Trouble.

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

I have to read all the chapters as I'm clueless about the 5th one/😆

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kandygrover

@kandygrover

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Loved the update. Awesome job.

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891712

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#168

good mawning... Thank god lady kumbkaran jag gayi... Chalo ud ki baat karte hain
... Beautiful as always,... Loved asad wala part ... 😃 and agli bar update boht jyada late karna... 😛 cont soon dear!

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TenTinyBreaths

@TenTinyBreaths

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

750 words ho gayyee??😲 itni jaldii?? oh no!!!🤢
btw, the 1st portion is exactly d same as the latest promo..
u didn't need to type at all juz copy+paste...!!!🤔
u shouldn't hve counted dose wrds.. seriously!!
nd should hve typed a lill more..😔
*sigh*
anyways, i shouldn't be greedy or else u'll agn leave us hanging for god knws hw long!!!🥱
so, here i'm making a happy face 😊 hoping to get nxt update lill early..
is dat possible?? plshh..😆
btw, i juz loved d last line.. "Mission Pour Water On Miss Spitfire"... too gud..
looking forward for some real fun..😃
do update wen it's ok wth u as u're hving exms throughout this month..
t.c dear nd all d best..😊

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helen_of_troy

@helen_of_troy

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#170

hey choti🤗

i read this ff first part long ago when u gave me the link but eventually forgot but now i regret it so much yaar i m simply in luv with this ff u r too gud mann...

Coming to the story it is simply amazing first of it's about kajen n secondly u r writing it so awesome toh hona hi tha

the cute fight btw asmud in the begining is too gud n asad's line u r teacher i wish i too had sucha beautiful teacher is nice😆 asad ko ladki ke saath dekha nahi aur dillu mom ne grilling shuru kar di she is the coolest mom yaar unki secound meeting bhi fix kar dhi that too for 7 months

the cuuutest part of ths ff is khan family i simply luv them so much

bechara asad ko driver bhol diya humari kumud ne

every scene till now depicts the bond btw khan siblings n kumud

ab kya batao i luv ur N's and A's😆

that bed scene was so cuuute n geeting ur self caught with mill's n boon is in my top list of gettiong embarrassed

awesome song selectin for antakshari

finally asmud ne confess kar diya bechari uske sivaay sab ko pata hai

continue soon dear

n do Pm me