Arshi FF ~~ 'Mine' # 3 [Part 19-23]; Thrd # 4 Link-Pg 148 - Page 48

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome. Pls update asap. Vry eager to read mre
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update...love how khushi understood him and reacted like she did...she let things get better with time and she know knows that he trusts her...love it...continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
just the way how u portrayed the trust on this
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb amazing update loved it Loved d Khushi &Aman's relationship ASR is so possessive about Khushi but inturn he hurt her Im waiting fr internship Hope we will see some office romance too Eagerly waiting fr next update Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the chapter!!! U were right when u wrote this chapter! That if u are right then u don't owe anybody explanation let them find out themselves!! That's exactly what khushi did and loves her for it !! Arnav feeling remorse was beautifully written!! Waiting for the next update!! Really good update thank you!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
i had missed ur updates sooo much...
Glad that u r back...
Loved the updates...
I love aman - khushi relationship...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey..u updated..first thanx fr that..
The update was jst amazing..
Arnav misunderstanding khushi..
Behaving roughly wid her was not good..bt still she accepted it..
Loved her point of view of not explaining her relation wid mathur..
Arnav den realizes it..n den apologising was nice..i m glad she understood..i m liking this strong minded khushi..amaxingly written
I hope the internship turns to b good fr both of them..
In all loved the update..
I hope the next part comes soon as this one..
Thanx fr the email..:D

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sruthiif.1710




Hi..

Thank you for commenting.

If you didn't see change in Arnav's behavior in flashbacks and the present, I might doing a bad job in telling my sorry. In all the present updates, he never behaved with her unreasonable. He only held her once when she brought up his sister's topic.

Remember I have not talked about Arnav's childhood and Khushi's in their POV. I just mention how it was . But never in their POV. The way a child grows will make him/her a person.

Khushi lost her parents and then was adopted by a family where she received love and hatred equally. But eventually hatred won. I'll come to that later.

Coming to your questions about Khushi's nature...


She can put a smile and take life as it comes. Its Ok
But the way she expresses excitement about working as a designer under AR doesnt fit well. she shud be unbothered cause.
No problem with khushi being forgiving nature
But why does she become too much excited about working in AR. Sometimes it conveys that she is happy with being mistress and what all that happened.

She worked hard to get a master's degree. Not only in moral point of view but she studied hard for her degree. And AR is an no.1 fashion house. Every hard working student will be excited to work in a famous company in whatever field they are. I don't see she getting excited to work in AR has anything to do with Arnav. And she has a life outside the created. A life for which she worked hard and deserved.
And she does not ask anything of Arnav other than basic necessities. I will remind here that in one of the updates, when she needed a software, she asked Aman but not Arnav. And I told, she feels she has no right over him. And so she asked Aman with whom she has a right.



And arnav sometimes behaves as if he is doing some ehsaan on her letting her work in AR. Moreover during contract arnav had promised whatever she wants will be fulfilled. so even if she wud hv wanted a job in AR he wud hv given.

I really want you to point out where it seemed that Arnav was doing her a favour for letting her work in AR. And you said, if she wanted a job Arnav would have given as per the contract. Are you saying Khushi should asking him favours as she is his mistress?? Even though she studied and is in a position to earn the internship, you are saying she should have just asked for it. I think that will tell more about Khushi than Arnav.

She needs to tone down her over happiness and let the two men see that a girl sacrifices her respect, her ambitions at ecah step just to make others happy. and she has been doing that.
If she is contended and smiling it doesnt mean she is very happy.

Tone down her happiness? Khushi's only escape from this part of her life was only her education and her beautiful relationship with Aman. She just shields herself not to shadow her joy with her past. She has enough experiences to learn to grab the good in life and forget the bad as much as she can. Never in my FF, I mentioned she was happy, I just said she was content in life altogether. She had her bad moments as well as happy moments but overall she was content.

i think he also went for other women thinking Khushi as a cheat..

I did not mention that anywhere so don't make Arnav a even more hideous character. Please. I even explained how Arnav felt about two timing in one the previous updates.

i apologize if you think i am rude but I needed to clear every point in your comment.

Sruthi...




Sruthi, I do not agree with this reader, this the way I read the story:

- about going to other women, you did not mention it, so how can we assume that, and next in the previous you did write how he brushes other women off when she comes to office and Aman see's it. Even though he does not acknowledge he does have strong feelings for her and for him it is only her.

-about her working, she always wanted to work and give back to the family which accepted her when she was an orphan, especially Shashi who fought to put a roof over her head. That led to her taking the decision and accepting his proposal. That was the only option available for her.

-the studies show how much thoughtful she is that she does not want to give everything to this contract of his that she is lost completely in it, she is not aware what awaits her in the future, but this she is sure of that she will be able stand on her own feet with this education and do not have to fear when the education ends.

-she always wanted to work for a reputed company which is number 1 in the fashion field, she did come for that interview in the beginning, and it is like a dream come true for her, like all of us who have a goal and when it is achieved we are happy beyond words, and that's what she is, all the sacrifices, the running brought her to this juncture in life.

-about the contract, it is with his trust issues, he never handles her roughly and the only 2 times he does it now and during his sisters incident. And even then he becomes extremely remorseful. In that chapter, I liked how Anjali's and Khushi's POV matched on how he wud react.

-the contract piece is..., do not want to mention it, it is his journey now to realize his mistake , how much Khushi has given him and continues to give him.

-she founds her happiness in small things, instead of being a bucket lady, and that is what is it being looking towards a bright future, if you do not have that outlook, it is hard to go thru life.


How many times I read this, I read this story along the lines of how I worded the reply, I could go on and on, and even if I continue to read it, I will not be able to agree with this reader
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Posted: 11 years ago

ausim part...I m glad arnav relized his mistake,,,,,,,,,i m glad u r back

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Posted: 11 years ago
Crossed a major hurdle in their relationship. From this misunderstanding they have moved yo the next level in the "relationship". Can wait for the internship...
Glad ur back with a bang...

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