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Its so good to have you back and missed your stories badly. Coming to the updates, I guess both were the best updates of mine till date. Albeit the chapter started with flashbacks from anjali's point of view, it gave us much needed insight to arnav & anjali's past, their troubled childhood. The pain anjali endured as a daughter, as a sister and above all as a woman was penned beautifully with each word striking the right chord. Human relationships were portrayed so beautifully,painted with such tender emotions of love, care, concern, protectiveness, possessiveness, jealously. I am so happy with the way you have depicted the beautiful bond of mathur & jerry, giving their unnamed relationship a name and sealing the bond to love, protect & cherish eachother through out their life. For me mathur and jerry's rakshabandhan celebration took away the entire light. The way you have weaved mathur & khushi's story is really commendable, every time you write about them it leaves me grasping for more. Its good that you had put up a note because even I thought khushi was too forgiving. No doubt that arnav had a awful past which is the reason for whom he is today, he has trust issues but that surely does not justify the way behaved with khushi. For khushi, her new fond relation with mathur is something she cherishes & is proud off which sums up to her lack of counter defense to the accusations arlued at her. I guess this part was necessary for the story (arnav & khushi's relationship) to progress and amidst everything what amazes me the most is the the way khushi has understood him within a small span of time & amount of trust she has on him.
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