FF: Jaane Doh Naa Epilogue Pg 55 [Sept 12,'13] - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
That was rocking!!!!!!!!!! Finally!!!!! Finally they are at peace and with each other!!!! Ayesha's trick worked!!!!!
Wonderful update Archi!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just read the last chapter...poor Khushi, but Ayesha had the right of the situation. These two needed a push! Jealousy always causes something to happen. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congratulations for the New Thread!

Thank you so much for replying.😊

.. And Thanks for the PM.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
This chapter started off as being extremely emotional and then ended in a romantic and passionate note.

I wished that the Chapter didn't end.

Firstly, Khushi was nothing short of demented. She overlooked all the times when Arnav's Love was so evident. But chose to see all those moments where she "assumed" that Arnav felt nothing for her.

The worth of the water is known when the well runs dry.

She finally understood that she pushed him away. And she wanted him back.

You described her pain, grief and a misplaced sense of being betrayed very, very beautifully. It was so vivid. But I don't sympathise with her because all these emotional suffering is her creation, this time. She preaches about trusting the one you love. But she herself couldn't trust Arnav when she saw him with Ayesha. Truth is, she likes to blame Arnav for anything and everything, while she sits back and behaves like an innocent suffering saint who is crying rivers. Huh!

I liked how Arnav tried to clear her misunderstanding. But the thoughts of letting her go stopped him everytime to confess that he Loves her.

Ayesha's plan worked out only because of Arnav's efforts.

The blasted phone always rings/buzzes at the wrong moment. But it was good of Arnav to ignore it.

Finally, they became man and wife in the truest meaning of the term.

I'm excited for the next chapter.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
yeee Ayesha's plan has worked well... i find khushi's outburst cute and finally kisses😳😳😳 just love it.Arshi carry on your romance😉😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
finally they spoke and not bolted their feelings inside.. it was done so well.. perfectly as I had expected Khushi and Arnav to speak.. not at all out of character..

their indirectly had their fears in front of each other
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
finally therebcommunicating their feelings...loved the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
awesome.finally they decide to avoid their stubborness
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Though I din't like Ayesha's plan but it did bring the necessary outcome...😊
Now which idiot was calling to disturb their moment of happiness??...seriously everyone wants to call Arnav at the wrong time and place...
Waiting for more!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was such an emotion packed chapter!!

An outburst from both Arnav and Khushi...
It was time they spoke to each other about their insecurities, about their indifference,
about their true feelings, about how they really felt for each other...

I am glad finally Arnav decided to break his silence...
It was very much needed, it was driving Khushi up the wall...
she was not being able to figure out his behaviour...sometimes friendly & sometimes cold...

So Ayesha's trick totally worked!! Good job girl!!
But I really hope after they wake up in the morning they stick to their stand
and not go 10 steps back...

Your writing is truly beautiful... it makes me feel both of their emotions...
Thank you for such a lovely story! 😊

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