~ Tum hi Ho ~ A TaaRey OS ( Dared )

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Mehek Asaria

@Sweet.Sarcastic

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Res via cell..
Will unres after ek do janam

Lol..

gal.. u nailed it..

perfect!!!!

mind blowing brilliant excellent..

kyan bolu ma shivi...

u just made me.. umm.. i dnt know what to say..

u made me mad with ur os..😃

ya that sounds good..😆

okk from beginning..

maa kasam it was so simple and emotional..

then taayam..

girl u wont leave tannu and swayam anywhere na..😆🤣

that bro-sis convo was cute..

and then taani thinking shes lucky 2 get such a sweet bro..😳

and unfortunate not to get someone who loves her..

that was beautiful..

then after leaving the college..

i was like how did she get wet if she had an umbrella..🤣

but then u told some minutes ago.

that was nice..

really a good way..

then rey anger and concern and taanis frustration..👏

really awesome..😃

well written gal..👏

the romance was super cute..😳

and yes.. i loved this line alot..it was marvelous..

very philosophical..

They cried silently, together. Although for others, tears and the rain drops wouldn't have been distinguishable, but both Taani and Rey knew that they were crying. After all, Rain can hide your tears, but not your pain, and your pain would be only visible to the one who loves you truly, with all their heart.

in all i loved it..👍🏼

hmm i dnt take 2-3 janam to unres see..😛

and yes..

now im sure until u n shreya are there monkeys cant lose..😛😃
cheers to the writer..😳😃

cheers to the reader as well..😛🤣

SO.. MONKEY ROCK!!!!

Love..

ur mad fellow monkey..😛😆

maggie..❤️

Edited by mehek_luvD3nTBP - 12 years ago

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Pooja

@Rhea18

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

awwhh it is so cut and emotional...😊

cheerss for the writer... i must say u r a great writer...😃

just loved it!!!!!👏👏

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Nidhi Chauhan

@Nidhivdlover

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

amazing ... i just luved it.

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Mihika

@Legilimens.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

I have read only two of your works until now.. But from what I have read, I'll say that you are a flawless writer. Very creative... Good thing you have this talent within you.

Coming to this OS, are you CRAZY?? You call that a poor ending? This was one of the most painful yet amazingly written endings!! Man, you have this talent inbuilt in you!!

I don't read TaaRey works often, except for whatever intrigues me and comes in my PM inbox (also time is an essential factor because I suck at utilizing my time 😆).. But I'm sure I'll read all your works from now on!! One shots ofcourse but I'll surely not give them a miss.

This OS was painfully beautiful! I loved the whole tum hi ho sequence and the way it was conceptualized. It was written amazingly... And mind you, the ending was perfect. It's not necessary for every write up to have a happy ending right? 😛

Also, the one shot went very well with the current scenario of TR.. The song.. it's one of my favorites. The scene was very well depicted and written flawlessly. It didn't have any error!! 😳

The ending.. I loved it. You dare not call it a messed up one.

You described their pain very well. I liked it! Awesome job!!

All in all, a beautiful OS! One of the best one shots I have ever read!!

Edited by tanha29 - 12 years ago