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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
R.
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The description of Arnav going towards Khushi's room and towards the collage was very vivid with a deep emotional undertone to it.

It is funny, how during their childhood Arnav wished to do nothing with Khushi.. and now when he finds his photograph in the middle of Khushi's collage, he doesn't have Khushi with him.

The way he says ".. Wapas aa jao.." was so, so heartbreaking.

It is good that Rohan saw Arnav's state. He must have got the proof that Arnav is deeply in love with his sister. So, his interruption was necessary.

I liked the way how Arnav told Rohan that he never wanted to go behind his back.
.. And I loved it when he said that it was no more about Arnav or Rohan, it was all about Khushi.

The brotherly pride which Rohan has for Khushi that his sister is special is Awesome.

I Loved, Loved Arnav's honest confession about his Love for Khushi.

Rohan correcting Arnav's misconception was very much necessary or else he would have drowned in guilt.

The clarity and crispness with which Rohan said that he still doesn't approve of Arnav but he thinks that only Khushi can mend him, was praise-worthy. I like the way how he never minces his words and talks point-blank.

This also means that Arnav got a green signal from Rohan!😉

Now, Rohan and Arnav joined hands to find Khushi. This was the most necessary and sensible thing to do at the moment.

Rohan gave the information that Karan was not at fault.

Rocky peeling the apple and looking at Khushi leeringly, reminded me of the scene in the show, during the kidnapping track, where the sidekick of Shyam was eating food and leered at Khushi.. The two scenes are almost similar!

Karan.. ?
Well, I wasn't expecting this scumbag to be behind the kidnapping.

.. And he is Shyam's cousin. Two lechers at the same place and related by blood.. Rab ne bana di jodi! Haha!

This was seriously shocking.

So, Arnav's intuitions were correct that Karan was behind it.

The whole thing was pre-planned from the beginning. The plan is so elaborate.

In an earlier chapter, Rohan and Akash told Arnav that they would also like to beat Karan up. Now is the chance! I'm sure Rohan and Akash would come running to thrash Karan and Shyam Moron Jha.

The whole scene where Khushi ran towards the bedroom and locked the door was very vivid. Your description was very, very well-written and neat in execution.👏👏

I liked the way how she used her brains and tried to scare them away by telling that her father was a murderer, and she might kill too.

The scene, where she remembered that her mother was in a closed room while she bled to death and she thought that she too, might meet the same fate, was so emotional and heart-breakingly poignant.

The last scene where she called Arnav's name was sad. It has the power to make one cry.
Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Precap

Precap is hopeful.
Precap is the silver lining to the dark cloud that is looming over.
So, finally Lavanya thought of helping her friend. Thats good for her.

Aman is so efficient. He found out the addresses of all the Jha estates.
But after Lavanya's phone call, the whole thing will be easier.

Arnav's sharpness is praise-worthy. He identified the voice as Lavanya's. Great!
Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
love ur new banner farah
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Day was an awsum update
i feel lik shooting shyam n karan
arnab n ro had a normal convo
Poor khushi

lvd d update
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful part
thanks for the pm
Twinkle
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You made me cry with Arnav & Rohan. 😭😭 They both are worried for one girl who is sunshine in their lives.
Rohan is ready to give Arnav a chance just because he matters to Khushi.
Shyam and his still handy aid rocky - I hate them. At least everyone knew about Karan but Shyam nobody suspected. I wonder how come the families didn't know that Shyam and Karan are cousins!!!
Shyam & Karan are so monstrous.
I was so scared for Khushi for what they were planning to do with her.
Thankfully she had the courage, it bought her some time.
Arnav please listen to her this time.
Pre-cap is giving me hope now with Lavanya finally spilling beans about her whereabouts even if it was through a phone and it was for the best. Face to face meet this time may have caused more delay.
Aman is one smart chap, I must repeat.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i am not tensed that way as i know it is a sweet love story toh ending would be sweet but still i dont want any thing happen to khushi..hope arnav reaches on time loved the way arnav confess his love to rohan...waiting desperately for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Hiii...congrats on da new thread...Awesome update...Loved it...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey congrats for the new thread...
the update was mind blowing...
shyam and karan are so vile and disgusting...
pls dont let anything happen to khushi...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Great update Farah
Poor Khushi

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