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The description of Arnav going towards Khushi's room and towards the collage was very vivid with a deep emotional undertone to it.
It is funny, how during their childhood Arnav wished to do nothing with Khushi.. and now when he finds his photograph in the middle of Khushi's collage, he doesn't have Khushi with him.
The way he says ".. Wapas aa jao.." was so, so heartbreaking.
It is good that Rohan saw Arnav's state. He must have got the proof that Arnav is deeply in love with his sister. So, his interruption was necessary.
I liked the way how Arnav told Rohan that he never wanted to go behind his back.
.. And I loved it when he said that it was no more about Arnav or Rohan, it was all about Khushi.
The brotherly pride which Rohan has for Khushi that his sister is special is Awesome.
I Loved, Loved Arnav's honest confession about his Love for Khushi.
Rohan correcting Arnav's misconception was very much necessary or else he would have drowned in guilt.
The clarity and crispness with which Rohan said that he still doesn't approve of Arnav but he thinks that only Khushi can mend him, was praise-worthy. I like the way how he never minces his words and talks point-blank.
This also means that Arnav got a green signal from Rohan!😉
Now, Rohan and Arnav joined hands to find Khushi. This was the most necessary and sensible thing to do at the moment.
Rohan gave the information that Karan was not at fault.
Rocky peeling the apple and looking at Khushi leeringly, reminded me of the scene in the show, during the kidnapping track, where the sidekick of Shyam was eating food and leered at Khushi.. The two scenes are almost similar!
Karan.. ?
Well, I wasn't expecting this scumbag to be behind the kidnapping.
.. And he is Shyam's cousin. Two lechers at the same place and related by blood.. Rab ne bana di jodi! Haha!
This was seriously shocking.
So, Arnav's intuitions were correct that Karan was behind it.
The whole thing was pre-planned from the beginning. The plan is so elaborate.
In an earlier chapter, Rohan and Akash told Arnav that they would also like to beat Karan up. Now is the chance! I'm sure Rohan and Akash would come running to thrash Karan and Shyam Moron Jha.
The whole scene where Khushi ran towards the bedroom and locked the door was very vivid. Your description was very, very well-written and neat in execution.👏👏
I liked the way how she used her brains and tried to scare them away by telling that her father was a murderer, and she might kill too.
The scene, where she remembered that her mother was in a closed room while she bled to death and she thought that she too, might meet the same fate, was so emotional and heart-breakingly poignant.
The last scene where she called Arnav's name was sad. It has the power to make one cry.
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The description of Arnav going towards Khushi's room and towards the collage was very vivid with a deep emotional undertone to it.
It is funny, how during their childhood Arnav wished to do nothing with Khushi.. and now when he finds his photograph in the middle of Khushi's collage, he doesn't have Khushi with him.
The way he says ".. Wapas aa jao.." was so, so heartbreaking.
It is good that Rohan saw Arnav's state. He must have got the proof that Arnav is deeply in love with his sister. So, his interruption was necessary.
I liked the way how Arnav told Rohan that he never wanted to go behind his back.
.. And I loved it when he said that it was no more about Arnav or Rohan, it was all about Khushi.
The brotherly pride which Rohan has for Khushi that his sister is special is Awesome.
I Loved, Loved Arnav's honest confession about his Love for Khushi.
Rohan correcting Arnav's misconception was very much necessary or else he would have drowned in guilt.
The clarity and crispness with which Rohan said that he still doesn't approve of Arnav but he thinks that only Khushi can mend him, was praise-worthy. I like the way how he never minces his words and talks point-blank.
This also means that Arnav got a green signal from Rohan!😉
Now, Rohan and Arnav joined hands to find Khushi. This was the most necessary and sensible thing to do at the moment.
Rohan gave the information that Karan was not at fault.
Rocky peeling the apple and looking at Khushi leeringly, reminded me of the scene in the show, during the kidnapping track, where the sidekick of Shyam was eating food and leered at Khushi.. The two scenes are almost similar!
Karan.. ?
Well, I wasn't expecting this scumbag to be behind the kidnapping.
.. And he is Shyam's cousin. Two lechers at the same place and related by blood.. Rab ne bana di jodi! Haha!
This was seriously shocking.
So, Arnav's intuitions were correct that Karan was behind it.
The whole thing was pre-planned from the beginning. The plan is so elaborate.
In an earlier chapter, Rohan and Akash told Arnav that they would also like to beat Karan up. Now is the chance! I'm sure Rohan and Akash would come running to thrash Karan and Shyam Moron Jha.
The whole scene where Khushi ran towards the bedroom and locked the door was very vivid. Your description was very, very well-written and neat in execution.👏👏
I liked the way how she used her brains and tried to scare them away by telling that her father was a murderer, and she might kill too.
The scene, where she remembered that her mother was in a closed room while she bled to death and she thought that she too, might meet the same fate, was so emotional and heart-breakingly poignant.
The last scene where she called Arnav's name was sad. It has the power to make one cry.
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