Virman SS----Bachpan ki Dosti COMPLETED Note pg 36 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
HAAAWW VIRMAN MISUNDERSTANDING 😭😭
BT I LUVEDD UPDTE
CONTINUEEE SOON 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
nice update she feel jeolous
when she see him with some else
how both will tell there feeling each other
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Here is Chapter 7. I adore the Devar Bhabhi and Jeeju Sali bond the show has which is why I had this part in the story. Thank you so much for all the comments and hope you like the update. 😊 There is a darker end to this update, please read the warning before it.

Chapter 7: Past Unraveled

Virat refused to talk to anyone. Viren tried talking to him but Virat just kept pushing him away. Virat always revered Viren as a fatherly figure and a friend and talked to him about everything, but Viren did not know the complete truth about Maya. Virat knew Viren was very protective of him and would have her in jail. While he knew what Maya did was wrong he wanted to be nice and give her a second chance at life. He didn't want to send her rotting in jail for the rest of her life. After a while Jeevika was done placing a small bandage on Virat's head, she asked Viren if she could talk to Virat alone. She understood how hurt Virat was since she knew exactly what happened with Maya. Viren looked at his brother and then at Jeevika who nodded her head yes assuring him she would handle it as he reluctantly left, and Virat just looked at Jeevika and just fell in her lap completely broken as soon as Viren shut the door.

Virat: Di, I know I made a mistake with Maya. Would you want me to get together with someone like her again too? Di am I really that bad that I only deserve girls like Maya and Tanya that deceive you for money and then don't even care if you live you die? I don't know what Manvi told you, but mein uski kasam kha ke kheti hum ki Tanya forced herself on me, it's not my fault" he said frustrated that Manvi refused to even listen to his side of the story.

Jeevika just looked at him confused since Manvi had not mentioned the Tanya part of the story and undersood that Manvi was jelous now, and that was the real problem not the made up fight Manvi told her.

Jeevika "Virat dekho, I know what happened with Maya and never in a million years would want you anywhere near someone as dangerous as her.. Virat she tried to kill you to get after you proposed to marry her just to get your money and property (After Virat and Viren's dad died, Dadaji passed on their dad's property and money to Virat and Viren once they started college as he thought that was only fair). That is not your fault. I am just glad Manvi found out before Maya succeded with her plan. Girls like her don't deserve you and never will. Now to Manvi, us ki gusa ko to janti hi ho tum, as it goes as quick as it comes she said shaking her head at her sister's jelousy and anger. Us ne jo kaha guse mein kaha, if she really wanted you to go back to a Maya, then why would she have helped you so much to get over Maya. I have known my sister since birth Virat and you have known her for just as long too, she is just jealous, but her anger will subside soon I promise. Aab rahi baat Tanya ki, jab tumhara dil mere behen ki paas hai, to yeh Tanya kaha se aaye she said wiping his tears and pulling him up.

Virat: "Di, aap ko kaise pata, maine to aap ko bataya bhi nahi," he said feeling much better after talking to Jeevika but shocked that she knew his feelings. Jeevika just smiled at him and pulled his ear.

Jeevika: "Virat Maanvi is not the only one that grew up with you, yeh to maat bhulo ki tum meri bhi bachpan ki dost ho. Whenever you and Manvi are together, you look so happy Virat. After Maya I was so worried for you but after Manvi helped you get out of that depression state, I realized Manvi means more than a friend to you and I couldn't be happier for you. Manvi se achi tumhari liye koi match nahi hai, aur Maanvi ko bhi tumse aacha ladka to mil hi nahi sakta" she said smiling and Virat gave Jeevika a big hug. "Ab chalo, tumhe dinner bhi nahi kiya. I have your favorite, kulfi. Your brother had proposed to me and I brought it back from the restaurant as a treat for you two but seeing your state I didn't have the heart to tell you then but now that you are a little better, aaj bhabhi ki haato se khana nahi kahogi" she said teasingly tyring to lighten the mood.

She was about to get the kulfi when Virat asked her to give Maanvi her half first since it was her favorite too. Jeevika smiled and just prayed to god that Virman would solve their problems and confess to each other soon. When she took it to Maanvi, she answered the same thing making Jeevika just shake her head at the two. She walked into Virat's room and fed him some rasma and rice and then kulfi. She gave his pain killers and forced him to go to sleep as she left the room. Jeevika walked over to Maanvi's room to find Viren and Maanvi talking. She decided to let them finish as she knew Maanvi would actually listen to Viren and went downstairs to finish the dishes.

Viren: Maanvi dekho, tum bachpan se Virat ko jante ho. You know how much he likes joking around. Agar khel khel mein kuch bol diya ho to please gusa maat hona. (Maanvi had only told them what she said to Virat not the entire situation from the club as she didn't want to bring up the fact that she liked Virat) I know you would never hurt him intentionally with what you said. He must have said something to you first," he said defending her completely.

Maanvi looked at him amd her eyes began to water as the guilt creeped up on her. How could she have been so heartless to tell him to go back to Maya. She knew how much Maya had hurt him and she had worked so hard to get him out of the pain that Maya gave him, how could she just throw all that pain back to him.

Maanvi: Bhaiya, I didn't want to hurt him. Please mujhe maaf kardo I really didn't mean to say that to him. Its just when I saw Tanya I broke, I was jealous that some other girl was that close to him. I love him. I really love him, why can't he understand that she blurted out in frustration forgetting that Viren was in front of her. She finally admited to herself that she had fell in love with Virat and couldn't stay without talking to him. Viren looked at her and smiled at her confession.

Viren: Maanvi, is this is all about? I had a feeling that fight you told us about was made up he said shaking his head at her silliness. I can give you a 100% guarantee that there is nothing between Tanya and Virat. Tum use bachpan se to jante ho Manvi, there is nothing that he would hide from you. Agar uski aur Tanya ki beech kuch bhi hota, toh woh Tanya ko chod kar tumko dekhne club se kyun aata. I promise Manvi, tumhe Virat milegi, he is a little stubborn but he will realize soon, aab rona band karo." Seeing Manvi's state, Viren wanted to tell Maanvi about Virat's feelings and comfort her but he knew Maanvi needed to hear it from Virat not him so he decided to just let it be and give her a hug. He took the kulfi and forced her to eat his on his behalf as a treat to her for becoming his Sali today.

Viren walked downstairs to see Jeevika putting the dishes away. Viren gave her a hug from behind and kiss on the forehead and thanked her for talking to Virat. She thanked him for the proposal and was happy to hear that Manvi had ate the kulfi and was now asleep.

*****2 Days Later*****

Virman now felt better after Virika talked to them, but let their egos get the better of them. They refused to talk unitl the other apologized. Virika were sad that they couldn't enjoy together but knew how stubborn their siblings were and let them be, but Viren and Maanvi came back one day with Karan an old friend of Virman and Virika. Karan was Maya's brother and while they were reluctant to talk to him, they didn't want to be rude and invited him for lunch. Jeevika and Virat just looked at Manvi shocked. During lunch he asked Maanvi out to dinner to which Virat glared at him, but couldn't say anything as he was still not talking to Maanvi. Karan had always had a strong dislike for Maanvi and her bond with Virat as he felt that she was the reason Virat left his sister and wanted his revenge on her. Maanvi on the other hand wanted to get Virat jealous and immediately accepted dinner. She began flirting with him to intice Virat's anger more, much to Jeevika and Virat's displeasure. She got ready and at 8 she came down wearing a revealing green dress that came down to her just her thighs.


Virat coughed on the water he was drinking and just looked at her shocked and Jeevika just slapped her head and looked down as she knew this would have no good outcome. Virat knew what Manvi was up to but refused to give in to his jealousy and appolgize to her. He looked at Karan again and knew his intentions couldn't be good. He sighed and looked down trying to decide what to do when Manvi said bye to Jeevika. Despite wanting to stop her Virat let her go and fumed with jelousy as Karan placed his hand around her open back dress. He couldn't even watch them for a second looked in the other direction angrily.

***Later after Dinner***

Warning: Mature Content, A Darker Part of The Story Too. Strictly 18+

Karan took her to his apartment for a movie is what he told her. Once they got in roughly tied her hands behind her back and tied her legs together too. Maanvi was shocked. He looked at her in anger and laughed.

Karan: So MISS MAANVI, you thought you could steal my sister's happiness huh he said grabbing her br***** roughly and squeezing them till Maanvi screamed in agony. You are going to pay for every single tear she cried.

Maanvi: KARAN LET ME GO she screamed not able to take the pain anymore.

Karan threw her on the sofa and abruptly removed his pants shirt and underwear and started doing the same to Maanvi's clothes. He pulled her dress down and removed abruptly grasped her br**** He took off her b** and bit them hard making Maanvi scream. He placed his lips on her skin and kept biting and sucking vengefully. He then went down to remove the last piece of clothing that she had on. Maanvi kicked him and begged him to stop, but Karan was determined on getting his revenge today. Maanvi closed her eyes crying and gluped as she knew what would happen next.

Edited by nimi00 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
me first...dancing..
nice update...
hate that dog karan...
plz virat ko bhejo manvi ko bachane.. .
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
the update was really good plus it was kinda quick hoping for the part to be updated more quick than this 😉
the jiju saali and decar bhabhi bonding i just adore it specially the jiju saali its my fav ...
virat's past was shocking ...
soo they confessed their love bt nit to eachother am sure woh bhi jaldi ho jayega ...
tht karan gosh he is an animal someone murder him...
update next part soon hoping virat or viren to reach there on time ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Superbly superb update...
Awesome one...
Continue soon...plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
hope virat gets there on time to save her and beats the crap out him continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
NICE UPDATE.
AT LAST NOT NICE.
HOW DARE THAT KARAN. I HOPE VIRAT WILL REACH THERE ON TIME.
THANKS FOR PM.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
nice update..
It hate tis karan man
plz viru save manu yaa
cntinue soon plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
KAran ko toh virat batayega😡😡😡
hahah awesume
update sooon 😛

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