IPKKND-ARHI-FF - Gypsy- Chapter 42

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zainza

@zainza

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#861

recently came across your story, its very well written with all the intricate details regarding culture and traditions. I still can't get Khushi's suffering out of my mind, lekin jis ne dard diya hai wohi dawa bhi karega, that's how it is usually in love.

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KKKA

@KKKA

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#862

ANGEL Z ...YOU ARE WRITING A FANTASTIC TALE OF LOST LOVE

A SIMPLE GYPSY GIRL TURNING INTO AN UNWANTED

BRIDE

THE MAHARAJA IS UNAWARE OF HIS OWN FEELING N HERS TOO

HOPE HE UNDERSTANDS HIS HEART BEATS N HER MISSED

HEART BEATS

THANKS

A HAPPY NEW YEAR

KKKA

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ipktouch

@ipktouch

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#863

superb n lovely update..so all the marriage rituals were over n now arshi in their room where they gonna start their life under one roof..this is one of the fun update..kushi was all the more feeling heavy coz of the jewels n ghoonghat..it was funny when arnav had tried to keep distance coz of kushi's indifference but his bride wont leave him for unintentional reasons..finally he obeyed n did as per her order..yeah he had given her space.. From this phase i guess he was going to show his gentleness n act as gentleman..waiting eagerly for the next update..

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#864

loved it.. poor Khushi had to ask Arnav all those things...

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#865

This is sheer torture! Two different set of wheels of the same train traveling in two different paths though the end destination is the same!

Man!what wonderful picturization! Sweet man!

Loved the way you showed it!!

And the ending wow!!brilliant!

Cheers

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#866

Glad that Arnav is taking it slowly because it will still take for khushi to feel comfortable around him.

I'm really looking forward to how their married life will be...I have high hopes for Arnav to treat her in the best possible way!

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#867

Just finish al chapy its butifuly writen u describe whole mairage ceremony so butifuly in initial chap i was vry dispoint on arnav becoz he is my favarite any way that chap where arnav insult kushi before whole tribe and left n after hw tribe people funish her was vry painful hats of u girl for this nw want to c hw arnav heel kushi pain becoz she injured physicaly as wel as imotionaly only arnav can heel her wounds i wonder what arnav reaction when he find kushi wounds hw he deal with that thanx for butiful story n pm cont soon

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sriram52

@sriram52

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#868

Its beautiful.. loved it.. update soon

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addictedx53

@addictedx53

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#869

Surprisingly that went well. Keeping in mind the trauma which Khushi was feeling, the encounter alone was, well...calming. Looking forward to the thawing.