TR ff:10 reasons not to die link for #2 added - Page 43

Originally posted by: --taareylove---

awesome update pari loved it so much taarey part was superb and swayam and his mom scene was so awesome loved it pari

Originally posted by: TAAREY786

lovely its superb dearrr

Originally posted by: azkii

heehee...mazza aagya..too good...👏

Originally posted by: Shanae_Diamonds

<font color="#9900cc">OMG!! another amazing chap!! loved the whole update!!</font>

<font color="#9900cc">especially the kitchen scene!!! ❤️ it was hilarious! when the flour went on Rey's face i was ROFL'ing!</font>

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<font color="#9900cc">and aww... also loved Rey's family scene! hehehe... and swayam and Rey's mom are so sweet and caring! loved them alot!</font>

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<font color="#9900cc">and the 3rd reason not to die was awesome!! can't wait for the next chap!!!<img src="http://www.laymarks.com/l/m/m121.gif" alt="" /></font>

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<font color="#9900cc">update soon please!!</font>

<font color="#9900cc">i'll be waiting :)</font>

Originally posted by: .-Arpita-.

superb update👏👏

loved it😳

update soon

Originally posted by: --coco--

Holla Di,
I loved your story, the concept is different and amazing.
OK so,
Chapter 1:
Disha is just so adorable I loved all that jam thingee...😳
<font color="#663399">"Die?" I cut him off, laughing bitterly. "You can say that.
I mean, come on, Reyaansh. I'm turning eighteen in a year. No one is
going to want to adopt a seventeen year old teen. I'm going to get kicked
out of this place once I turn an adult, and what happens then? I can't
afford college, or a place to stay in that matter. I'm going to end up on
the streets and die slowly and
painfully. Might as well get it over
with sooner than later, yeah?"</font>
<font color="#000000">This is so not right , but I love Rey's optimism...😊</font>

Originally posted by: --coco--

Chap 2:
Rey is so sweet n caring hayeee 😳
A mobile as a gift, so that they can talk always, so smart 😆
And the dance was what pulled off the entire chapter ...
Awesome...

Originally posted by: --coco--

Chap 3:
Hehe bakery ka battleground bana diya 😆
<font color="#6666CC">"rey whar were u doing??why he scold u??"ask taani
"i was just staring at u..."rey's tounge slipped...</font>
<font color="#000000">Hehe chori pakdi gayi </font>😆
Loved Rey's Uncle and AWww Swayam is chotu ...

Originally posted by: Ayesha05

awsum nd sorry again yaar for late cmmnt

kya h na ghar pe hu to zara sa late ho gaya