SwaRon FF : Alpha's Territory | Chap 8 : Page 133 - Updated 14/12/2013

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Rose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#391

Wow Loved this update yaar:-D
Haha Swayam is too much...
Superb:-):-)

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Vishaka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#392

finally update mil gaya...!!i m supper happy.
It was really amazing part.. 👏
the way u describe the sharon room was mind blowing 👏it made me actually visuallizing live stuff as exibitional plot...
Nw despiratly waiting for part b
plz marium update it soon this time.

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anandita

@blooming_angel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#393

please didu i want an update jaldi...😭

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Anindita Dhar

@AninditaSwaRon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#394

Wow ^_^ amazing update par galat time pe sab delete hua :/
Pura update khatam karo I just can't wait ..
U penned it well and loved the way u described everything
in sharon's room.
N the story is really interesting

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Shubhangi(shubhi)

@d3fan4eva

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#395

Nice update Marium!!😊

Swayam was so much desperate to meet Sharon..!😆

Update soon pls..!!

P.s my exams r going on..so sorry for short comment..!!

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-spongy-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#396

this was simply beautiful marium

it was really amazing

i am so loving swayam's character

woh sharon ke liye kuch bhi karne ko taiyaar hain..

he doesn't care about the risk..

only 1 moto : HAVE TO MEET SHARON...

lovely..

and shron's room

im in heaven.. mereko bhi aisa room chahiye...

loved the episode

and tu toh likhti hi hain amazing...

Thanks for the PM

please do update soon and do PM me

will read the other one after some time.. 🤔

exams suck !! [x(]

love you 🤗

PS. don't take so much tension

people love your works and likes / comments bhi aa jayenge...

PPS. waiting for your comment on my OS 😉

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Mehvash Naazneen

@dashinggirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#397

Hey Marium 😊

finally u updated

seriously it was like ages

and really reading both of your's FF on same day

made my day it can't be better i m so happy now 😃

coming back to update

it was simply amazing 👏

really loved it ❤️

sharon was so worried about swayam what if her parents sees him

and swayam teasing sharon and how swayam is proud of himself that he came to sharon's house through window nice scenes loved them ❤️

it is penned down very beautifully especially sharon's room description

the description was simply awseome 👍🏼

u r a brilliant writer and i admire your work

so keep up the great going on 👍🏼

plzzz update the B part as soon as possible

eagerly waiting to read further...

thanks for the PM and do PM me

LOVE

MEHVASH

Edited by dashinggirl - 11 years ago

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Shanaya Patel

@shanaya_shanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#398

wow dear u hav updated finally😊

loved this chapter 👏👏

swayam is so eager to meet his mate...wow awesome😳😳

sharon's room ...description is well written😃

oh God!! what swayam gonna do next😆😆

update part b soon dear...cant wait😉😆

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Varada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#399

Will comment after part B!🥱

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darshita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#400

that was a blow on update... means was not scared of her parents dare enter
her room and sharon scream becuase of which her parents shouted to know what happened
in the room and after a talk with swayan she did as he said and disappear but to her receive
a shock as swayan shut her mouth n ot to scream and did something unusable...
do continue soon and pm me