SwaRon FF : Alpha's Territory | Chap 8 : Page 133 - Updated 14/12/2013 - Page 32

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you for finally putting an end to my wait marium kitna tadpaya ladki tune is ff ki update ke liye and tere aage bhi yahi vichaar lag rahe hai it seems from your note..😔.
Coming to the update it was splendid blockbuster as usual..😃.
Their first kiss was magical and I like kinda like the annoying and teasing swayam its fun to read his antics and sharon's reactions are super fun to read hase bina nahi reh sakte..😆.
I liked how swayam immediately became defensive when he came to know natasha and sonia were bitching about sharon though woh sirf ek tactic thi by them to know about swayam's feelins naughty girls I tell you..😛.
I like rey and swayam's bonding dear god rey eats a lot party main bhi khaya inna and ghar aake bhi 3 instant maggie noodles wow body builder dude..🤣.
Ahhh niceee swayam gonna ride sharon to college and he wants to see her getting restless to see her before he sleeps I hope we get a nice swaron moment..😳.
Update soon girl.
Love,
Kashmi🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
res😉😉
unres'd😉

Read all the parts😃

Its an amazing ff which I had ever read before seriously👏👏

Loved the way of your writing😉

Ch 1: Sharon and natasha's teasing convo😆

Sharon's encounter with swayam in the shop😳

Oh she wants him badly and always wants to being with him😉

Ch 2: this part is too amazing ...swayam holding sharon

Taking care of her...cute😳😳

Ch 3: oh God! Getting scoldings from their respective families😆😆

Swayam is damn hot here when he is talking with Sharon😳

Ch 4: Sharon came to the party

And wow swaron's kiss

Ch 5: Sharon is hell angry at swayam for his tactics and he wants to see her...wow!!!😃😃😆

Totally its speechless dear👏👏👏

update next soon😉

Edited by shanaya_shanu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update!!
so swayam finally cleared the mu...!!
how much he annoys sharon!!
some parts were just so hilarious!!
thanks for the pm.
PS why did u change the banner? no more a tanha fan haan?
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is a Fan Fiction worthy to be commented about. I have never commented on this FF because I wanted to silently observe more of this FF and imbibe the essence of swaron displayed throughout your work.👏👍🏼👍🏼
It is a true dedication to Swaron, I really wish to say my lack of commenting is not due to ignorance but due to honesty. I never thought that my words would suffice for this FF and still do think so. These words are but mere statements of my true perceptions of this story. I am truly sorry for not commenting this long so, SORRY!!!!.😊😊
i Hope that you will update this story because no matter who says what, I will forever support this story.
So Pls Pls Pls Update soon!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
unres

wowiee marium
amazing
you know i have really started to love this FF
i mean it is so unique
superb story line yaar
vaise yeh main hazar baar eh chuki hun and ab tu bore bhi ho gayi hogi 😆

im so happy ki finally swayam cleared the MU
i was so sick of it
and swayam broke sharon's car.. 🤣
sharon pakka swayam ko maregi 😆😆
and i really love it when swayam irritates sharon 😳

and swayam at sharon's place 😳😳
kuch hoga kya 😉😉
chal waiting for more
thanks for the PM
update soon
and do PM me 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
the chapter was nice and superb finally all the mess clear up...
and but small argument between both of them... it will get clear soon and
swayan was been tease by all of them related to her mate...
and he could not sleep and want to see her and reach her house and called
her sis to tell him where is sharon room... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Simply awesome!!👏 So, now Swayam too loves Sharon..😳 Their 1st kiss, their heated convo.. Everything was portrayed beautifully.. I was laughing like a maniac reading the leg pulling session of Natasha and Sonia..😆
Swayam wants to see Sharon in the middle of the night!!😳
Can't wait to read what happens next..😲 Update soon n do pm me..😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update!!!
Their 1st kiss was just magical...
Natasa and sonia part was super hilarious..😆
Great work..👏
pls update soon...dying to read the next chapter..
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Posted: 12 years ago
once again awesome update👍🏼..
haha swayam broke sharon's car..
now atleast he told sharon he feel something for her😃
sharon,she is in cloud 9 hearing that from swayam😳
Sonia n natasha teasing swayam part was awesome😃
swayam couldn't sleep hehe..
he lied to his parent just to see sharon😳
what will happen next..
plz update soon..can't wait..
n thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update!!
Aww...poor swayam..both nats n sonia teased the hell out of him!!😆
N also the sleepless nyt!!😉😛
Hope to get an update sooner!!

P.s. umm..actually my exams r starting from tomorrow..so pls try to understand that I won't b able to cmnt..I'll surely read n like ur works as of now..n I promise to cmnt after my exams!
I hope u understand!😔

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