SwaRon FF : Alpha's Territory | Chap 8 : Page 133 - Updated 14/12/2013

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Trushna

@swaronland

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#331

You always manage to perform at peak levels 👏👏

Loved the way Swayam irritating Sharon😆😉 & also his bonding with rey😃 hmm.. swayam slowly falling for sharon 😉 can't wait to see her & reached to meet her i'm going mad thinking about next update😉☺️

This ff is a master piece ❤️

pleaaaseee update soon & thanks for pm🤗

p.s. ur note made me😔 & i commented last time but u didn't even hit like😭

Edited by swaronland - 12 years ago

Quote

anandita

@blooming_angel

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#332

OMG OMG OMG..!!😊
finally an update..!!😳
tarsa mara tha aapne...😆

god ...!! fiction queen ab late mat karna...👏

comming to the update ...it was marvelous

after reading it i was jumping and dancing on my bed...😳😆

kya karu control nai honda...

excellent the way u potrayed everything...

their first kiss, their fight, their love and realization everything...
ur actually out of the world..!!
and u leave me wid nothing to say ...
cz everything is actually perfecty...!!

can't wait to read more god poocho mat ur killing me...!!!

UPDATE SOON..^_^

loads of love,
ur anny..!!

Edited by anandita - 12 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

paro1311

@paro1311

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#333

sorry for commenting late. so this one is for the last 2 chapters:)

u gave us a swaron kiss in chapter 3😳

and this ff has one of the best swaron relationships i've read. swayam's mood swing are entertaining and so is his efforts to make up with sharon after irritating her :)

Quote

Piyu

@piyu_swaron

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#334

kitna irritate karta hai swayam sharon ko.. 😆🤣

he broke sharon's car🤣

their nokjhok was hillarious

nd finally swayam cleared misunderstanding

Natasa and sonia part was super hilarious

loved their first kiss nd lil romantic scene too

wow swayam goes to meet sharon.. yaha bhi khidki se😆

update fast next chappy plz

sorry for late comment.. exams the mere

Quote

zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#335

Woah

Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

So much in a single Update

was funn

specially swayam's state

n reyam were funn

Update Soon:)

Quote

priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#336

awesome update

glad that the misunderstanding between swaron is clear

i enjoy the way swayam irritates sharon

swayam scene in his bedroom was so funny

cant wait for the next part

Quote

Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#337

Zara si dil main de jagah tu zara sa apna le bana zara sa khwabon main saja tu zara sa yaadon main basa main chahoon tujhko meri jaan bepanah fida hoon tujhpe meri jaan bepanah..❤️

Quote

Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#338

Ride the night jab dil miley season 1 season 2 alpha-s territory will love you forever time to love wrong guy right love addicted to love season 1 nd 2 smithereens love all swaron ff os ss