SwaRon FF : Alpha's Territory | Chap 8 : Page 133 - Updated 14/12/2013

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Sadaf Khalid

@sadafarsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: -Marium-

Sadaf, babe it is not mistake, right?

You want something, then at least i should get something what i want. I am upset that from last 2 weeks both my story isn't getting satisfying response.

i know yaar i am crying becoz all the people read the work and they dont lyk i hate them😭

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: sadafarsha
i know yaar i am crying becoz all the people read the work and they dont lyk i hate them😭

You hate but i am hurt, deeply! I thought i will always get good response on these two story always but i guess there is a bit history repeating.

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934800

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#293

Charec sketch is mindblasting

[BR i just stard reading

Edited by Swaron.maniac - 12 years ago

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934800

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#294

Just red chap 1

And oh my God
I loved it

Its late at night but am trying to carry on reading as
i cnt wait to read wkt happens

Howcome i was not aware of this ff
Main tu sary swaRon ff padti.hoom

I guess ciz i only joing
A montj and hald before

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Mehvash Naazneen

@dashinggirl

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#295

hey marim im so sorry for late reply

i forget completely about it

hey chapter was awesome 👏

really loved it ❤️

plzzz update soon

waiting from a long time

Dont be upset marium that no one liked or nor commented on your FF it is not liked that ok

everyone loves your FF completely

they r so awesome

so dont be upset and update asap

eagerly waiting to read further

LOVE

MEHVASH

Edited by dashinggirl - 12 years ago

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Soha

@-Soha-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#296

Chapter 2

First of all wohi kahoon gi jo main humesha kehti hoon, Sorry 4 commenting late..😳

Coming up to the chappy..I get a lack of praising words when I read the works authored by Muriam and that too Alpha's Territory, one of my favorite.

I am loving the wolf concept.

Really Amazing!

Sharon saw Swayam and the other girl kissing-Sad!

Swayam cares a lot about his mate-Nice and Fabulous.

Falling in love with your mate happens naturally-So Cool-Fits on SwaRon-Natural Love!

Thanks for bothering my late-comer personality,

Soha!

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nidhi

@nidhi1998

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#297

Mariam

Please update😭😭

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#298

AWESOME

AMAZING

SUPERB

FAB

Swayam n Sharon were Funn

LOVED IT

UPDATE SOON :)

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#299

Marium 🤗
This was by far the most exciting and amazingg update! Naughty Kids 🤣
Well i am normal! Period. 😎
Obviously i mean cumon you write such virtue virgin making out and what not kinda things and you expect me to sit and read this update like a 🤓
Hell not 🤪

Okay kay now i will comment proper.
I liked swayam's mom n dad in the starting, so cool man.
And her sister, lol yo bitches! She shooed them away, brilliant job done soniaaa! 👏
Sharon is such a hard nut 😳
Running, pushing, punching Swayam!
Anyways abhi se soft ho jaygi toh tera FF kaise chlega 😛😆
No hard feelings bro. 🤗
And that virgin virtue line was bang on. I lovved it.
The kiss ☺️ To Be Continued!
Waiting for the nexxt!
This was surely a kick in the ass update 😛😆
Update soon.

I can't wait to read the next one! 🤔