SwaRon FF : Alpha's Territory | Chap 8 : Page 133 - Updated 14/12/2013

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Piyu

@piyu_swaron

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#281

superb upadate marium..i liked it😃

kya halat kar di swayam ki sharon ne🤣 she is so strong😉

did she really kiss him😲 wow 😳 end kyu kiya tumne😡

update kar fast..

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rashmi

@morning_dews

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

awesome chapter...!!!

very well written.. :)

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--mystery.me--

@--mystery.me--

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Sorry guys, i couldn't update today though the chapter is completely ready. I was busy in D3's 500 episode celebration thread making so i will update tomorrow.

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Sadaf Khalid

@sadafarsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: --mystery.me--
Sorry guys, i couldn't update today though the chapter is completely ready. I was busy in D3's 500 episode celebration thread making so i will update tomorrow.

no prob dear willbe w8ing 😳

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

So I finally commented, sorry again but like I said I've been very busy and everything but I will try my best to comment regularly :-)
The way you wrote the confrontation thing between SwaRon was beautiful :-)
And I loved the way Swayam took care of Sharon
Aaawww Swayam thought Sharon is cute :D well it's true she is :P
Loved the part between Sharon and her mum :]
The SwaRon conversation was so cute and I loved how Swayam kept getting in her way and the kiss on the cheek was adorable :)
It's so sweet that Swayam wants Sharon to come :]
I loved how Swayam couldn't close his mouth when he saw Sharon and how they were arguing :-) reminded me of earlier days of D3
I hope your better now :-) and sorry once again

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

No more updates from my side till i won't start getting proper 60 likes!

It has been 9 days and there are only 51 likes till now. I am upset.

-Marium

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zk456789

@zk456789

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#287

Guys who didn't like the updates please hit the like button pretty please other wise we didn't get any updates

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: sadafarsha

Sadaf, babe it is not mistake, right?

You want something, then at least i should get something what i want. I am upset that from last 2 weeks both my story isn't getting satisfying response.