SwaRon FF : Alpha's Territory | Chap 8 : Page 133 - Updated 14/12/2013

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Twinkle_d3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Nice update..
This kind of story is very intresting to read ..

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Sunil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

I read both d updates
nd they r awesome

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paro1311

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

thanx for the pm.. i din wanna miss this one :)

honestly i liked tis chapter a lot more than the previous. Im so loving Swayam in alpha mode!!

really looking forward to c how swayam becomes clear abt his feeling for his true mate.

ps: thank u in advance for making weekly updates from now on.

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rashmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

great update...!!!!

long time i read it..so had to read even the first part..! :P

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Marium

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: rhu90
nice update...

Thanks for the comment! 😃

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Marium

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Posted: 12 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: nature2

superb
it was simply awesom...

Thanks for the comment, Neeraj! 😃

I really wish ke kisi year main ja kai tere comments ki length thori si barh jaye! 😆

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Marium

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: manasie23
aaawww I just love this mate, mate thingy... Swayam is one confused soul... a-hole...
update soon

Yeah, i know he is for now an ass-hole!

I will make him a whole without an ass, but still he will be whole of all! 😆

Thanks for the comment! 😃

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austen_TanHa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#158

sharon is a diva here too😆
way to go girl.thank u so much her for making her so spirited,a meek sharon is tough to accept😛
the way Swayam was ordering around it seems as if his confusion is over.he knows she is his mate so hopefully now he'll do something about it.
i must congratulate you on sticking to the word limit.its not an easy thing to do.
now they'll both be grilled by their families,human ho ya wolf this is universal😆
update every thursday...yay!

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darshita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#159

i did not get ur pms ... i do not no why????????
i came through post to comment any swayan was flirt with that simran...
because of which sharon got anger and touch the metal and fall sick...
thank to swayan for save sharon actual mate for each other...
rey and his sister are so care that they do not mess any order from swayan...
and sharon told everything about her where about and reach the place in time...
it get interest to read more... do continue soon and pm me...

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WhisperOfDreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: -Marium-

OHOOO! Ziada nakhre mat dikha tu warna na kher nahi.. i know tu mujhse koi naraz nahi hain.. lekin apko nakhre dekhaye bina tu chaen milna nahi hai.. hai na?😆

Sudhar ja larki! 😛

haw...nakhre😡 itni confident maat baan bhari padega!!

OFC mein sudhar gai toh tu log bore ho jao ke..ofc tuje excluse karke saab as tu toh rehne hi de..!! mujse baat karti!!😆