SwaRon FF : Alpha's Territory | Chap 8 : Page 133 - Updated 14/12/2013

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@pehlanasha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: Twinkle_d3
Nice update..
This kind of story is very interesting to read ..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: Suni1986
I read both d updates
nd they r awesome

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Sunil, what happened to the length of your comments? Stop liking my updates kya ab? 😕

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@pehlanasha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: paro1311
thanx for the pm.. i din wanna miss this one :)
honestly i liked tis chapter a lot more than the previous. Im so loving Swayam in alpha mode!!
really looking forward to c how swayam becomes clear abt his feeling for his true mate.

ps: thank u in advance for making weekly updates from now on.

Reply of PS : My pleasure! 😳

And thanks tons for this lovely comment! Keep them coming in future as well! 😃

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@pehlanasha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: rashmi24sya
great update...!!!!
long time i read it..so had to read even the first part..! :P

yeah, i have decided to update this on every Thursday from now on! 😳

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@pehlanasha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: austen4ever
sharon is a diva here too😆
way to go girl.thank u so much her for making her so spirited,a meek sharon is tough to accept😛
the way Swayam was ordering around it seems as if his confusion is over.he knows she is his mate so hopefully now he'll do something about it.
i must congratulate you on sticking to the word limit.its not an easy thing to do.
now they'll both be grilled by their families,human ho ya wolf this is universal😆
update every thursday...yay!

He already knows that she is his mate and however he tries to hide that he do loves her but it is impossible as this mate thing is almost like soul bonding and no wolf can resist it but he is confused and not fully confident do he is trying to run away from it.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien
i did not get ur pms ... i do not no why????????
i came through post to comment any swayan was flirt with that simran...
because of which sharon got anger and touch the metal and fall sick...
thank to swayan for save sharon actual mate for each other...
rey and his sister are so care that they do not mess any order from swayan...
and sharon told everything about her where about and reach the place in time...
it get interest to read more... do continue soon and pm me...

What? You didn't get PM!? 😲

Aisa ho hi nahi sakhta yaar... you have added that mystery.me wali id na so how come you don't get the PM because i carefully send updates from that id to everyone in the buddy list. 😳

Yes, as i said no on can raise voice over an Alpha not an Alpha's parents themselves! So how can Rey and Swayam's sister can... 😎

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@pehlanasha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: piyu1990
i'm late😔
Im so loving Swayam in alpha mode
he is so cute but wo itna confused kyu hai apne feelings ko lekar
are sharon ko to strong hi hona chahiye wo sharon hai THE DIVA
loved it😃 waiting for next update

Arre sari confusion jald hi end ho jayegi you dun need to take tension! 😛

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: sanstina
Awesome update 😊
Swayam took care of Sharon

Sanskruti, thanks a lot yaar that you are commenting without any reservations! 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: dmegha
Superb update buddy!!!
I enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for the PM.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#180

Hey fairy :D
I know I am super duper late but I didn't get chance/time to read any stories since a month or so :(
Anyways finally I am here :)
Coming to ur concept
It reminds me of one of my favorite stories 'twilight' 😳
It's nice and unique on IF :D
Hmmm I must say u described all the stuff related to wolf well in the first few posts. It made it a lot easier to read the 1st chap :)
Counting to the 1st chapter
Well I was confuse in the beginning not cause of concept but was thinking who is Sharon's mate
Was hoping that's it's no one other than swayam
And yaay it is swayam only
Liked how u described Sharon's sadness and pain
Loved swaron shop scene it was cute 😳
Awe he was guilty for making her cry
Poor Sharon saw swayam with someone else :O :'(
Good job 👏
Before I end my comment I have to say that you are a great writer and I loved ur writing since the day I first read your JDM S1 ❤️