*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: ..Anita..

farak pardta hai damn it...always wanted to say that


bechara aman, he must have had a heart attack when arnav stammered khushi's name

and these two are already attracted with each other...khushi drank his coffee,,,which she apparently hates coffee...and well arnav is having naughty naughty thoughts


Hey Anita

What are you doing with yourself, now that your exams are over?😊

Yes I have a nice Aman and a naughty ASR!😆

Mujhe bhi...faraq padta hai damn it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: aniiee

Awesme❤️
Cn i gt a PM ?


Thankyou for liking and comenting!
WilL PM when I update😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: IssPKaur

Am grinning from ear to ear! Really liked!!

I love the fact that it feels so familiar cos you have retained their essence and yet it's completely fresh...and exciting 👏

Thank you again for the PM. Can't wait to see how the shopping for the bed goes
😊



Its a wondrous feeling to be able to bring a smile 😊on a friend's face. And you say you are grinning!😃

Thanks! That made me grin too!😃

Ah! Yes! The shopping for the bed! I must start writing...
Edited by wiwy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Awesome update...

Yay...u made it an SS...

Do continue soon !!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Hey Wiwy,
Thanks for incorporating the superman idea. 😆 Actually, I was watching the trailer of a spiderman movie on tv today and thought that it could also be Spiderman and Peter Parker. 😆
Interesting developments in the story. Aman, poor fellow. 😆 So, he reports to Anjali di regularly. Hmm...
So, the bed buying is next. Eagerly waiting to read their conversation as they choose a bed.
Super sleepy now. Will read again tomorrow and comment further. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: KittenRose

wowwowwow, you should be wowy instead of wiwy, it was such a beautiful and enjoyable update.


And Aman'."

"Yes, sir?"

"You are not a moron," and saying that he disconnected the line. Aman smiled a slow smile on the other end.


This was really awesome😆 and i can't still stop laughing, you know it was quite typical of ASR and we can visualize this very well. nicely done dear.

she placed her hand on her heart trying to retrieve it from her throat where it had suddenly lodged!

@red, ha ha, wow ASR's effect on heart. I liked it very much.

So, both could not yell at each other at the sight of each other, hmm mesmerized.

The update was fantastic wiwy and i liked it so much. You kept it very simple, yet much elegant. I loved it.







AAAWWW!😳 Compliments from you!😃 I am deadwa!🤢

Thankyou so very much.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Superb Update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
ASR Ko Faraq Partha Haiii
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
aaah.

he said shut up and get out and that too in the same sentence. he apologised to aman (without saying sorry) for calling him a moron. awww, my dhak dhaks spiral.

and love that girl eating drinking crumbling praying all at once.

white shirt, dark shades. i need to die right now.

wiwy, they are so so real, so asr khushi... love your story, sir.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Awesome Wiwy 😊,Clark Kent ..way to go Durga and Katlyn ...👏👏👏

Nice one so she is showing him her importance ..hmm.😃..doesn't want to take that bed and he is in a bad mood because of her not paying attention to him...or else.Poor Bed😆

Nice update wiwy ...Thnx for PM😊
Edited by ArshiHamesha - 12 years ago

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