*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Shimmer_Vani

Oye hoye what a chapter


the last line just took my heart away <3 Lol

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Awww! Vani ! Thankyou so much for the suggestion to change the title! 🤗

My last line took your heart away! Oye hoye! Thanks for liking and commenting!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Wiwy will he kiss her 1st or buy a bed😉 why is he so angry at himself or his emotions very interesting update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Am grinning from ear to ear! Really liked!!

I love the fact that it feels so familiar cos you have retained their essence and yet it's completely fresh...and exciting 👏

Thank you again for the PM. Can't wait to see how the shopping for the bed goes
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Cn i gt a PM ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Wiwy tht was soo sweet 😃 ( i mean the Aman part 😆)

honestly very nice update...i was wonderin why Arnav soo rude towards Aman...glad he told him he isn a moron!!!

so Lavanya is thr too..nice...nd the way you described ASR's entry...white SUV , grey suit...nd trademark smirk...hayee

now both r off to purchase a bed 😉...sweet!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
farak pardta hai damn it...always wanted to say that

bechara aman, he must have had a heart attack when arnav stammered khushi's name

and these two are already attracted with each other...khushi drank his coffee,,,which she apparently hates coffee...and well arnav is having naughty naughty thoughts
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
I'm glad you're continuing with this story. And yes, superman reference was hilarious.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: chalhov

Wiwy will he kiss her 1st or buy a bed😉 why is he so angry at himself or his emotions very interesting update


Maybe he should buy her a bed first, Chalhov! then he can kiss her and more...Ahem! 😆

He is not in control of himself so angry😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: supriya.arshi


Wiwy tht was soo sweet 😃 ( i mean the Aman part 😆)

honestly very nice update...i was wonderin why Arnav soo rude towards Aman...glad he told him he isn a moron!!!

so Lavanya is thr too..nice...nd the way you described ASR's entry...white SUV , grey suit...nd trademark smirk...hayee

now both r off to purchase a bed 😉...sweet!!


Yes, Supi, I liked the Aman part too😆

Ya Di and La are there and Neha mentioned NK...so! The others dont know as I haven't written or thought much about other characters!😆

Okay, I am off to purchase a bed!




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ifsaal044

I'm glad you're continuing with this story. And yes, superman reference was hilarious.


Yes I am...Arnav and Khushi are egging me on! So do keep reading, please!

My friend Durgey will be happy you liked her superman reference!


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