*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11 - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ForLoveofBarun

unfortunately there is no 'super like button' very well written. I almost experienced the surge of desire that ASR felt as well as Khushi's Dhak Dhaks and inner fight or flight sensation. Does that make me weird? In any case look forward to your next update.👏


Weird?😆 That makes two of us!😆
Thank you for the'super like button'😃 Hugs!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cinthiann1758

Wiwy,

this is really an enjoyable read!!! Keep it up. Love the adventurous side of ASR . Cute to include the broken bed. Looking forward to their encounter!
xo cyn


Cynthia thanks for your kind words. Miss you so much! Take care!
Hugs!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow super and nice concept dear...
i read now from start and loved the concept very much...
very different concept...
and superman and dear super...
just loved it...
and both are having some kind of attraction towards the other and khushi heart is going dhak dhak wow very nice dear...
pls continue soon and pls pm me the update...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: indi52

aaah.

he said shut up and get out and that too in the same sentence. he apologised to aman (without saying sorry) for calling him a moron. awww, my dhak dhaks spiral.

and love that girl eating drinking crumbling praying all at once.

white shirt, dark shades. i need to die right now.

wiwy, they are so so real, so asr khushi... love your story, sir.


Awww! Thanks Indi. My captain saying this means a lot to me. I am so happy you liked it. Hugs.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb dear...plzz do continue...n plz pm mr nxt parts too n thnx a lot for d pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arshi_karish

Superb dear...plzz do continue...n plz pm mr nxt parts too n thnx a lot for d pm..


Thanks!😃 Will do.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: march2011

love arnav n aman reaction...its becoming more interestg...loved it...


Yes I just wanted to delve into ASR-Aman relationship a wee bit! Thanks for liking!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely Wiwy! I can't wait for the next part!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sammymas

good work...keep going 👏


Okay! I will!
Thanks!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RebeccaDaphne

Lovely Wiwy! I can't wait for the next part!


Hey Rebecca 🤗

Good to see you

Will try not to keep you waiting too long for the next part!😃

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