*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Yay you are writing something too!!!!!!
I loved the start
The title made me think. About the time they broke the bed in the show and I thought it was based on that...but I totally love the concept
And that collage is intriguing
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
wow the title of the FF is first of all interesting


Arnav a building climber !!!!!!!!!!


Broke Kushi's bed 😃

ha ha ha great meet


would love to read more

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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Chapter 2

Khushi was standing in her balcony, craning her neck, looking down as far as she could, when her friend Neha, returned from her job at the call centre. Seeing Khushi in a precarious condition, she flung her duplicate key of the apartment on the broken bed and ran towards Khushi , pulling her back from the balcony. Neha shouted alarmingly, "What are you trying to do, Khushi? You might lose your balance and fall down ten stories!"

"No, I won't. Anything he can do, I can do better." Khushi said in a voice full of rage, her eyes flashing dangerously.

"Hey cool down, girl! Why are you so mad? Who is he? And what can he do better? And why is your bed broken?" Neha said in a concerned voice, bombarding her friend with questions.

Khushi let out a huge sigh. Over a hot cup of tea, she narrated the incidents of the morning to Neha agitatedly. After she had finished her tale (and tea!), she flopped down on the couch muttering Devi Maiyyas name nineteen to a dozen, chewing on her lips and making faces.

Neha burst out laughing, clutching at her sides. Her friend's reaction enraged Khushi. "What is so funny?" she demanded to know, stamping her feet.

Neha giggled, "You are telling me a guy alighted in our balcony like Superman and left dressed as Clark Kent?** Ha! Ha! Wow! He must have been strong enough to break a bed, Khushi! Was he hot and sexy too? Ha! Ha! Does NK know about this?" Neha winked at Khushi.

Really Neha! You have a one track mind! I was attacked by him! He did not even apologize to me for trespassing! Can't you understand?"

Neha grinned."Sure I can. But don't forget Khushi, he took care of you when you were in shock and even made a cup of coffee for you! And how come you drank the coffee when you hate coffee? This guy has affected you real bad, Khushi! Tu to gayi! Ha! Ha! Anyways, he is right about this show on BBC on Climbing Great Buildings. My office guys are hooked on it. He must be a new entrant for the contest next month. So relax, Khushi. Take a chill pill! By the way, you can share my bed till he meets you on another one like he has promised!" Giggling, Neha ducked down as Khushi threw a cushion her way!

Arnav Singh Raizada reached his chamber and flung his laptop bag on his swivel chair, pulled at his tie angrily and banged his fist on the office desk! Aman, his right hand man looked towards the roof and rolled his eyes! "ASR, the meeting was not so bad, seriously" he whimpered.

"Sure it was not bad Aman, it was fully, totally crap!" ASR retorted sarcastically.

"But'" Aman tried to pacify his boss again.

"What the Aman! Shut up and Get out!" roared ASR. Aman made a quiet exit. He dropped down on his chair in his chamber and mopped his brow. Something is amiss with ASR he mused. His boss was known for his short fuse but today he was acting weirder than ever before!

After nearly an hour, ASR buzzed Aman to come to his room. As soon as Aman walked in, ASR said,

"Aman, Go buy a bed!"

"A bed, Sir?" said a crestfallen Aman

ASR's temper soared again."What the! Are you short of hearing, Aman? Just do what I say. Call up this female and ask her what kind of bed she wants!"

"Oh! Lavanya Kashyap, Sir? I get it! " said Aman referring to ASR's girlfriend.

"No, you don't get it, you moron! This'this' Kh'Kh...Kh'Khushi Kumari Gupta. Take her address and phone number and get lost!" said ASR roughly, handing Aman a piece of paper.

Aman gaped at his boss for a few seconds. The bed thing was understandable! But since when had ASR started stammering over a woman's name, he wondered ! Astounding!

Before Aman left the room ASR stopped him saying, "And Aman. let me know what she said." Aman nodded thoughtfully. He must talk to Anjalidi. After all she had requested him to act as her Chottey's.guardian angel in office. A guardian angel who is going to be fired over a bed, for sure, he thought ruefully!

Next day, Anjali too noticed that her Chottey was not in the best of moods. Arnav refused to take his usual breakfast of toast and juice, and muttering a "Leave me alone, Di!" stormed out of the Raizada Mansion. He was driving his white SUV, when Aman called him.

"Sir, I contacted Khushiji as you told me. At first she was very angry and refused to have you buy a bed for her. But later she relented on the condition that she will choose the bed and that it has to be an inexpensive one. Is that fine with you sir?"

ASR put on the brakes suddenly and the vehicle screeched to a halt. He gritted his teeth and barked into the phone, "Dammit ! That girl will lay conditions on me will she? When are you meeting her?"

"In half an hour, below her building" Aman replied.

"You go to the office," ASR ordered, "I will pick her up."

" And Aman'."

"Yes, sir?"

"You are not a moron," and saying that he disconnected the line. Aman smiled a slow smile on the other end.

Taking the lift to the groundfloor, Khushi made a mental note to tell this persuasive Aman fellow that his boss was not doing her any favour. She would have nothing to do with that'.that Laad Governor, once she purchased the bed. She would kick that pscho who victimized unsuspecting innocents by barging into their homes at odd hours, out of her life' and thoughts, forever!

But all thoughts of giving him the boot vanished into thin air when she saw him emerging out of a white SUV in black shades, a pristine white shirt, a charcoal grey suit and his trademark smirk!

Her heart went dhak! Was he this good looking when I saw him yesterday, she gasped! Unknowingly, she placed her hand on her heart trying to retrieve it from her throat where it had suddenly lodged! Hayye Devi Maiyya, raksha karo! Yeh kya ho raha hai!(Protect me DM! What is happening!)

What was he doing here? Where was that nice sounding Aman chap? Her nose turned red and she gulped embarrassedly, taking a few steps back as he walked towards her.

Arnav stared at her as she emerged from the lift. She looked more beautiful than ever! He couldn't take his eyes off the vision in white! Her dupatta, white and soft, just like the skin he had touched, was waving in the breeze beckoning him and he forgot that a few minutes ago he wanted to shout at her for defying him!


No he did not want to scream at her. He wanted to grab her by her slim waist, pull her close to him and hold her soft body in his arms, again! Then tucking that errant strand of hair behind her ear, he wanted to cup her face and kiss her hard and thorough'.till her pink luscious lips moaned his name in pleasure!***

Suddenly jolting out of his reverie, he thought, this is ridiculous! I can't be having these uncontrollable thoughts! Arnav Singh Raizada ko kisi ladki se koi faraq nahi padta! (ASR does not care about any girl!)

😃

Hope you guys liked it.😃

I will be thrilled if you leave a comment, good or bad! 😃

** Credit for this Superman and Clark Kent idea goes to my Blaster friend, Durga S. (Thanks Durgey! šŸ¤—)

***Credit for this desire to kiss her at first sight goes to my Blaster friend, Katelyn (Thanks Kate! šŸ¤—)

Edited by wiwy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
res...

lovely chapter...
khushi trying to do what arnav did as wants to prove that she can do everything better than himšŸ˜†
ASR what did u do to our khushi?? i think exactly what khushi has did to him...
both are behaving abnormally...ASR stammering, khushi having coffee which she abhors...
i like aman...he thought arnav was talking about lavanya when asked him to buy new bedšŸ˜†
khushi n her conditions...ASR himself went to her building...
omg he was thinking of kissing her senselessly...wow ASR having wanton thoughts just looking at khushi...
waiting for arnav to stop thinking and start doing😳
thnx for the pm:)
continue soon

PS: ur not only a gr8 teacher but also an amazing writer😃
Edited by cheesemad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
aww its such a sweet update ,loved it :)...uff arnav in his shades and wow khushi in her white dupatta..beautifully written dear :)
Edited by lalarukh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: cheesemad

res...


will edit it in a while:)


Waiting eagerly for your comment, Komal!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: lalarukh

aww its such a sweet update ,loved it :)...uff arnav in his shades and wow khushi in her white dupatta..beautifully written dear :)


Thanks for liking and commenting and finding it sweet!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
wowwowwow, you should be wowy instead of wiwy, it was such a beautiful and enjoyable update.

And Aman'."

"Yes, sir?"

"You are not a moron," and saying that he disconnected the line. Aman smiled a slow smile on the other end.


This was really awesomešŸ˜† and i can't still stop laughing, you know it was quite typical of ASR and we can visualize this very well. nicely done dear.

she placed her hand on her heart trying to retrieve it from her throat where it had suddenly lodged!

@red, ha ha, wow ASR's effect on heart. I liked it very much.

So, both could not yell at each other at the sight of each other, hmm mesmerized.

The update was fantastic wiwy and i liked it so much. You kept it very simple, yet much elegant. I loved it.






Edited by KittenRose - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: honey-sweety

Wonderful Update.šŸ‘


Thanks! ā˜ŗļø
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Poor Aman...I think he narrowly escape a heart attack when Arnav was stammering Khushi's name and want to buy a bed for her...
Arnav may think that whatever he is feeling for Khushi is an infatuation but soon enough this girl will make a place in his heart.

Thanks for an awesome update and PM

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