*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11

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Sugi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Superb Start 😊 Continue 😊

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: BarunDiwani

🤣 do you REAALLY need to ask that last question?? you are just as 🤬 as me🤣

"tum kitni paagal ho"

'aur tum kitni cute ho' 😆

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

I already mentioned in the blast anniversary post that this is brilliant.

the concept is innovative, interesting and naughty as well.

And your writing is amazing, never felt that it's your first attempt.

you should continue this story.

Lets' see how Arnav sees her in bed.😉

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-
Excellent!

Hey Mrina,

I am delighted you liked it because I love your style of writing and your concepts! And you liking my story is agreat feeling! Thanks! 😃

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: sohara
I already mentioned in the blast anniversary post that this is brilliant.
the concept is innovative, interesting and naughty as well.
And your writing is amazing, never felt that it's your first attempt.
you should continue this story.
Lets' see how Arnav sees her in bed.😉

Thanks again , Sohara!

Arnav seeing her in bed as in Arnav seeing her in bed 😉, I might save for the last😆

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Putija

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

wiwy I loved how you retained the original character of Arnav/ASR and Khushi and woven it aroung the broken bed scene one of the very cute scenes and building climbing I was totally rofl thinking him as a building climber no doubt the crazy Khushi will think him a thief like the car scene when she puts towel and goes and when Arnav tries to tell her she goes on and on telling him she knew he would insult her and her face and expression later.

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: chalhov
wiwy I loved how you retained the original character of Arnav/ASR and Khushi and woven it aroung the broken bed scene one of the very cute scenes and building climbing I was totally rofl thinking him as a building climber no doubt the crazy Khushi will think him a thief like the car scene when she puts towel and goes and when Arnav tries to tell her she goes on and on telling him she knew he would insult her and her face and expression later.

Chalhov, thankyou, thankyou so much! Yes I want to retain their original character! Arnav's strange hobby , I had read somewhere! The balcony idea is obviously from the epitome of love and romance,Romeo Juliet . It has been subsequently used many times in many movies and other works of art. Maybe it all started with Rapunzel. Indi will be able to enlighten more on that, am sure. yes, the towel scene! I will try to use it! What say chalhov?

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lala rukh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

its very nice and a very different start too :)...would love to read it more :)

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: lalarukh
its very nice and a very different start too :)...would love to read it more :)

Will try to post chap 2 , Monday evening.😃 Thanks for your comments!

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: indi52
hi wiwy, good you posted the story here. was about to pm you. i enjoyed the lithe, fit, masterful man... don't make me wait too long.

Okay Indi, i am more or less ready with our man! Big leap from dangling on the blue curtain in his room to putting words in his mouth! I am geting cold feet again! Hope you will post your update on Monday too, haathe haathe dhori dhori...