ArHi FF When tables turned-NOTE pg 69

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SaraPhoenix

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

This story is brilliant. I loved it. Please continue this amazing story.

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vann

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Awesome. I am such a sucker for groveling-ASR-earning-his-redemption FICA. This one looks to be rollercoasted. 😊 Sending you a buddy request. Add me to your pm list please

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Madhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Such a fantastic update

I loved it

So emotional

Please continue soon

Thanks for the pm! 😊

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Anamika100

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

This was amazing. You truly were able to articulate the cheekh/screams from Khushi's heart at her BETRAYEL. I am so glad you too wanted redemptions are writing about it.

I wanted redemption in the sense of recognition of Khushi's pain by the Raizada's...specially Arnav and Anjali and always felt that the story was unfinished...oh..in so many ways.

As you have portrayed Arnav, why did he not seek Khushi out when Payal cleared everything...is that a blooper or is there a good reason? Even if he misunderstood at first, what held him back once he found out the truth? If he did not seek Khushi out to apologies and take her back, did they get a divorce...why? If he just let aloof this happen, he is unforgivable...

His redemption comes when he places Khushi above Anjali when it comes to a choice...for a wife...nothing else is acceptable.

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paaskhanna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

This is one concept which we have all wanted to see in IPKKND... Am glad that you are writing this story as you are able to articulate Khusi's feeling of betrayal...very well. Also as the characters stand right now I have no sympathy for Arnav, Anjali and even Raj. Khusi is right when your childhood friend betrays you it hurts the most... We do need more insight into Raj as to why he lied...

Like that you are going to make Arnav suffer and grovel before/if he gets his Khusi back

And the fact that you are in tenth is amazing...keep it up

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bewakoofLadki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

u hav written it so well
loved it
plsss cont sooon

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Amy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Oh god! You have me in tears! I read both chapters at once (emotional over load much!)

Anjali knew that the man she was getting engaged to already had a fianc! Yet she still went ahead and did whatever she damn well pleased; because like Khushi said, she has a brother and a rich family to back her up. Even if the 1st fianc hadn't have been Khushi, she should be ashamed of herself, her husband cheated on her she knows how much it hurts! Yet she let him get away with just "call" the other girl (what if the fianc had been in love with him?). Imagine the stigma the girl would have faced with a broken engagement.

Is Payal at the engagement? Khushi's or Anjali's?(I have to admit I have a weak spot for Payal no matter what people portray her as, especially when she's a fierce mother lion protecting her cub)

I haven't seem to figure out why Rajbir lied...but there has to be something more to the situation. The man's a psychologist for god sakes! (*shudders* doctor patient relationships😕)What 3 lives was he referring to? 'Arnav, Khushi and Anjali' or 'Himself, Anjali and Khushi?'
As for Arnav he's still the same man he was 5 years ago. The min his Di put her hand out to restrain him all though about himself and what is good for EVERYONE involved flew out of his head. He still allows himself to be manipulated and blackmailed by his sister. Did he know that Khushi was in Lucknow? What right does he even have to ask for an apology if he didn't have the guts to go and face her? Its like "oh look Khushi's here, maybe I'll say sorry and see where that gets me. I can't be bothered with tracking down a middle class, no aukat ladki who's life I annihilated and continued to do so on a daily bases! But now that she's here maybe I'll mess around with the feeling that I know she had for me"

ohhh and if the Raizada's knew that the man their golden child was going around with was spoken for, why did they allow for it to happen? Character dheela much Naniji. (Yes I'm bitter about the Lavanya thing; irrelevant though) This whole family can't see beyond their noses (or Anjali in this case) when it come to grief.

Not that the Guptas are any better, they denied Khushi justice just to Payal's life continues to be a bed of roses.

errr sorry, kind of got carried away, hehe😆 looking forward to the next update.