ArHi FF When tables turned-NOTE pg 69

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Shalini

@tvmania

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

came across Ur fiction and it sounds great
Ur writing doesn't seem u to be in tenth grade
please do pm me

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richa1792

@richa1792

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Woww!! That was a fast update.! Yayy..!!

You know what I loved? That Khushi spoke up, and did not behave a sacrificial lamb that she was shown to be in the show.

Arnav is jealous, though I don't think he has any right to be. If he thinks he can just take off from where he left five years ago, by just muttering a simple sorry, then he needs his brains checked.!

And Anjali, aren't thy a bitch? So she feels guilty! Big deal.!!!

She should!! Tell me something, for all her talks of sanskaar and sanctity of relationships, she did go ahead an decided to marry Raj, even after knowing that he was already engaged.

So the rules and honor are discarded when it suits your needs??

Such hypocrisy man!!

She didn't think about his jilted fiance, because she, delicate darling and the paragon of all that was virtue that she was, was getting her happy ever after.

And if my opinion of her sound very bitchy, well I am not at all sorry.!!🤢

Nani feels bad for Khushi. In fact the whole Raizada parivaar feels bad for her. Do they want a standing ovation for that??

See, talk is cheap, actions matter. And I have a feeling, the only action they would take would be to secure their precious Anjali's happiness.

Raj lied that he knew about Anjali. SO he didn't know, but he knows now. But would that mean he would do something about it?

I think he would try to justify Anjali, as everyone has done her entire life.

Bah!! These people make me feel sick.!!

I don't even want to say anything. They don't have a single redeeming quality, as of now.

Please, please give Khushi someone who appreciates her, and not these fools..! I can't believe I am actually asking for Khushi not to end up with Arnav.

See how mad I am?

Can't wait to read more.

Update soon?

Pweeasee??😳

Richa.

Edited by richa1792 - 12 years ago

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richa1792

@richa1792

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: Anupama.
Just two chapters and you have successfully got me enraged. I cant tell you how much pissed off I am with Arnav, Anjali and Rajbir. Here is a situation when I wont have any qualms if Arnav Khushi dont end up together. Arnav doesnt deserve happiness. Spineless coward. He kept quiet and let Khushi bear the brunt alone! What if she had done something to herself later?

Anjali. Not even worth talking about.

And i tell you, I hate Rajbir. I see no difference in him and Shyam. Fine, he didnt tell Khushi that the patient was Anjali. But there is no excuse for what he did.

Arnav. Really hate him. Knowing that the doctor who is seeing his sister is engaged to someone, he selfishly was so happy with Rajbir breaking off. Hypocrite.

Please continue soon.

You completely put in words, what was going through my head.

Five years back, he made all this hue and cry, because it was his sister, whose marriage was breaking.

And now that his sister was getting love, he didn't care that some other woman would be heart broken, and her life ruined.

He hasn't changed at all.

Cold hearted bas***d.

I understand the I,Me,Myself concept. Even encourage it sometimes.

But not to the point, that the world should suffer for my happiness.

Both of the men are spineless, and well, Rajbir deserves Anjali.

Another coward in the coward family.

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xnedra

@xnedra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

wow!!! finally finally a proper redemption ff!!! where anjali and arnav both get a taste of their own medicine!! i loved the jealousy from arnav's side and anjali's reality check was long due!! i actually want arnav and anjali to go through all that and more!! they should realize how it feels when you are wrongly accused of something and even forced to take a prolonged unjust punishment for it!
rajbir is just too sick and no better than shyam in fact none of the raizdas are- including arnav! and the fact that arnav loves khushi and was pining for her loss since all these years is just no excuse for what he did! i want him to suffer and realize his mistakes completely but more that that i want khushi to get the happiness she truly deserves with or without arnav in the scenario! keep it up and please update fast!! looking forward for your next update!!

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Shruti

@...shruti...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

both the updates were amazing sorry for coming in late

i am just confused y did rajbir lie but i think we will know that in later update

great work

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

That was so emotional touch...
made me cry
beautiful update

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ipkknd-fan

@ipkknd-fan

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

wow that is amazing plz pm me the updates :)

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Prapty/Maisha

@..FallAndFly..

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

I hate Anjali sometimes.But I loved your story

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chocodilla

@chocodilla

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

I do not see any difference between Shyam and Rajbir unless he has a hidden motive in doing all this.
Anjali - No words for her🤬. She did the same thing she accused Khushi for, a few years ago.
Arnav- Downright selfish. 😡He wanted Rajbir to break up and let an innocent women go through the same pain his sister went through. Though khushi made a false accusation, Arnav deseves it.

Story with great potential. Intense and very well written.. Can't believe that you are in tenth..😊