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Posted: 12 years ago
That was sooo sweeet
I have commented on the OS... I loved the OS and I love u too 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumu4JayD

Wow! Taieee!!😃
awsumwa update tha!!
Mrs' Rawte & Rathor to matlab...
wo kehte hai na..
Perfect Saas, bahu aur saazish🤣
SameerSa ki to band hi bajgaya mano!
🤣
Lovd the Sam-Annu cnv0.
hayyee!!!! 😳
aww!! Sam's thoughts on Arjun were touching!
waiting 4 the party!!
update s00n Taee!!
❤️

P.S im seriously gonna try to make this "kairichi daal"

Thanks dear 😊
Perfect term... Saas Bahu aur Saazish 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Maa se panga lena bahut mehenga padt hai 😉
Update coming soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Friends,
I'm back with the another Maha-Episode. Hope you all like this.
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On his way back he thinks about all the past incidents.
Sameer: to us kamine ko pehle se shaq tha... aur wo mujhe bina bataye... meri hi setting Annu se karwa raha tha...(smiles) ... ye Rawte bhi na... jaan nikal di thi meri saley ne... par galti meri hi thi... mujhe pehle hi samajh jana chahiye tha... usko koi aur dost to hai hi nahi... mere siva... (get emotional)... ab pata nahi Maa ka kya reaction hoga... pata nahi Maa ko kaise shaq ho gaya (suddenly remembers that Arjun talked to Suman and Savita in the room)... ek minute... kahi Arjun ne hi to Maa ko sab nahi bataya? Aur ye sab usi ki wajah se to nahi hua... ARJUN!!!!!... kamine ne ek baar to mujhe se baat kar li hoti...ek mauka nahi chhodta ye mujhe pareshan karne ka... isko to mai dekh loonga... (annoyed at this thought)
He reaches home by 4:30 since there was not much traffic.
As soon as he reaches home, his mom orders him to get ready for the party and he quietly goes to his room and calls Arjun.
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Arjun is going through a file when his phone rings. He looks at it smirks. Its Sameer calling him.
Arjun: Haan Rathod!!!
Sameer: Arjun... tuney Maa ko bataya?
Arjun: kis barey mein?
Sameer: Dont try my patience... Annu ne mujhe bataya ki tuney hume us din parking mein dekh liya tha... aur mujhe pakka yakeen hai ki tuney hi Ma ke paas jaake chugli ki hogi ... sach bata...
Arjun: Sam, is barey mein hum mil kar baat karenge... abhi mai nikal hi raha hoon office se... Bye..
Arjun disconnects the call before Sameer could say anything more. Sameer is annoyed. He continues with calling up the party organiser for the final preparations and getting ready for the party.
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Arjun comes to the discussion room where everybody is ready to leave.
Arjun: bye team... I'm leaving... tum log bhi nikal rahey ho na?
Everybody nods in "yes".
Arjun: good... Riya... mai tumhe drop kar deta hoon... I'll wait for u in the parking.
Arjun turns and leaves and others pass a naughty smile to Riya teasing her. Riya is embarrassed. She too was looking for a chance to talk to Arjun since the time she saw him talking to Annu at Sameer's place in balcony. So she decides to take this up with him.
Riya gets into Arjun's car. On the way to her home, Arjun strikes the conversation.
Arjun: tumhe shayad ajeeb laga hoga ki maine achanak is tarah tumhe drop karne ka offer kiya... hai na?
Riya(embarrassed): aisa kuch nahi hai sir...
Arjun: jaisa bhi hai... par aaj aisa karne ke peechhe ek wajah hai Riya... mujhe tumse ek bahut important baat karni hai...
Riya: sir mujhe bhi aapse kuch poochhna hai...
Arjun: yehi na ki aaj meri Annu se kya baat huyi?
Riya nods in "yes".
Arjun: mujhe isi barey mein baat karni hai tumse...mai janta hoon tumhare dil mein bahut se sawaal honge...aur isse pehle ki tum kuch poochho... mai khud hi tumhare sawaalon ke jawaab de deta hoon... aur ab mai jo tumhe batane wala hoon... wo bahut dhyaan se sun-na... [Riya gets a little conscious]...Maine Anwesha se baat kar li hai... Maine apne jis dost k barey mein baat ki thi... wo koi aur nahi... Rathod hai...[Riya is surprised]... haan... ACP Sameer Rathod...
Riya: sir... lekin Rathod sir Anwesha di se shadi kyun karenge? mujhe nahi lagta ki aisa ho sakta hai... aur ab to Di bhi apne ek friend ko pasand karti hain... jisne unhe propose kiya hai... [shakes her head] ... nahi... mujhe nahi lagta ki humein ye baat agey badhani chahiye... Rathod sir kya sochenge?
Arjun(grins): Anwesha ne kabhi tumhe apne us friend ka naam bataya?
Riya: nahi ...bataya to nahi... par aap kyun poochh rahey hain?
Arjun: Riya tumhe kuch ajeeb nahi laga? pichhle Thursday aur Friday ko hi Anwesha hospital mein der tak ruki thi kisi friend ki help ke liye aur Saturday ko bhi gayi thi... [Riya is confused]... aur wohi days ko Rathod bhi jaldi ghar gaya tha aur Saturday ko to wo office bhi nahi aaya tha? Aur coincidentally Anwesha ka hospital Rathod ke ghar ke samne hi hai?
Riya: to? is sab ka kya matlab hai?
Arjun: nahi samjhi? samjhaun?
Riya gives him an angry look. She hates it when he says his "Samjhe ya samjhaun"
Arjun: Rathod hi uska wo dost hai Riya... dono ek dusre ko pasand kartey hain... aur wo Rathod hi hai jisne Anwesha ko propose kiya hai...
Riya is shocked.
Riya: aisa kaise ho sakta hai? ye sach nahi hai... Rathod sir... Anwesha Di...Sir ne Di ko propose... meri kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha hai sir... aur aapko ye sab kaise pata?
Arjun: Rathod ko mai saalon se jaanta hoon... hum best friends they...(emotional)... hain...(quickly getting to normal)... yaad nahi... Anwesha k birthday par wo kitna excited tha? kaise bahana bana kar usey lunch par le gaya... apni Maa ke liye Anwesha ki choice ki saree bhi li... aur agar mai galat nahi hoon... to usine Anwesha ko convince kiya hoga ki wo party mein ... aur party ke baad...tumhe hurt na karey... Aur Anwesha ... 3 din tak usi ki help karne jati thi... kyunki uske maa - Papa aane wale they... Aur mera shaq yakeen mein tab badla jab maine un dono ko us din saath mei dekha jab wo log shopping karke lautey they...
Riya remembers all these incidents and the Saree.
Riya: Ohh my god!!!... sir ek baat aur hai... Rathod sir ne us din Di ko gift diya tha na... wo ek bahur sundar aur expensive saree thi... jo usi din unhone Di se zabardasti try karwayi thi aur fir unse chhupa kar li thi... aur yahi nahi... Rathod sir ne Di ko ye bhi kaha ki ... wo chahtey hain... ki Di wo saree unki Maa ke birthday party par pehne...
Arjun(smirks): wow... kaafi tayari kar rakhi hai Chief ne... to ... kaise lagey tumhe tumhare jija ji?
Riya is still in a state of shock. She still couldnt believe it. She is happy, excited and at the same time worried too.
Arjun: fikar mat karo Riya... Rathod ko tum achchhi tarah se janti hi ho... aur aaj uske parents se bhi tum mil hi chuki ho... He is the right person for Anwesha... is mein koi doubt nahi hai...
Riya is in tears.
Arjun: kya hua? tumhe koi problem hai?
Riya(chokes a little): nahi sir... Rathod sir jaisa achchha insaan meri Di ki zindagi mein aaya hai... to fir fikar karne ki kya baat ho sakti hai... wo mai Di ke bare mein soch kar humesha pareshan rehti thi na... par ab sari pareshani door ho gayi hai...mai bahut khush hoon sir... par kabhi kabhi humein itni khushi milti hai ki wo sambhalti nahi hai... aur aansu ban ke chhalak padti hai... (wipes her tears) I'm really happy... Annu Di bahut lucky hain...par kya Rathod sir ke parents ko ye rishta manzoor hoga?
Arjun(looks at her for a moment): unhe Annu pasand hai... (smiles)... par abhi usey ye mat batana ki maine tumhe sab bata diya hai...
Riya(flashing her dimpled smile): bilkul nahi... itna bada secret chhupaya mujhse... itni asaani se nahi chhodungi unko... unko khud ye baat mujhe batani hogi.
They reach her home. Arjun drops her and goes to the lodge.
Riya goes inside and pretends as if she doesn't know anything.
Annu was in a double problem. She also had to face Riya now. She knew that Riya respected Sameer but she was still not sure how would she react to this news. But Riya keeps on blabbering about her office talks and other silly things and doesn't give Annu a chance to speak up.
They get ready for the party. Riya notices that Annu is wearing the same saree that Rathod had given her and completely accessorized her look and is trying to look good, which she never did.
They leave for the party.
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Arjun goes to the lodge, gets ready and leave for Sameer's place.
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Sometime back, two happy souls were enjoying their game of chess and their casual chit chat. This was disturbed by the poking session by the ladies of the house when they targetted Sameer.
All the while when Suman was poking Sameer DSR was feeling sorry for Sameer but when the truuth was revealed he was happy too. And he knew that something is going on in Suman's mind.
He too had observed Anwesha since morning. He found her to be very sweet and simple natured girl. After knowing the truth, he was sure that she is the perfect life partner for Sameer.
After Sameer and Anwesha left, Mr Rathod and Mr Rawte resumed their game of chess. Along with it, DSR thought to talk to Suman about Sameer and Annu.
DSR: kya Suman ji... kyun aisa karti ho? dekha nahi bachchon ka chehra kaise utar gaya tha?
SKR: Haan bhabhi ... pehli baar Sameer ko aise dekha... bechara...kitna pareshan tha... aisi bhi kya narazgi?
Suman(pouts): to??... itni badi baat mujhse chhupayi... itni pyari bahu pasand ki mere liye aur bataya bhi nahi...naaraz nahi houngi mai?
DSR: ohho... surprise dena chahta tha...
Suman(sacrcastically): bada pyar aa raha hai apne laadley par?
DSR: kyun ? tumhara ladla nahi hai wo?
Suman(mellows down a little, but still upset): ye ladka bhi na... pehle bata deta to aaj hi unki sagayi bhi kar deti... mauka hi nahi deti... bhaagne ka aur faisla badalne ka...
DSR: ohho... sagayi nahi to kya... hum sagayi announce kar dete hain... kyun?
Suman's face lights up hearing this.
Savita: Haan Didi... bhai sahab bilkul theek keh rahey hain...
Suman: hmmm... ab dekhti hoon kaise bhagta hai wo... (smiles)
DSR: haaye... kab se aapki ye muskaan dekhne ko aakhein taras gayi thi...ab isi baat par ek chai ho jaye... kyun Rawte?
SKR: bilkul Rathod...
And they get back to their game and their chit chat on politics, current affairs and sports and how things have changed from their times to now.
Suman and Savita smile at the antics of their husbands. They call Mona to join them for tea.

Later Savita tells Suman that Arjun gave her the keys of their apartment. Both the ladies go there and check the apartment for any plumbing air electricity problems. Mr and Mrs Rawte plan to stay in this apartment for few days. They come back at around 4:30 after making some arrangements and Sameer is also back by then. Suman tells him and Mona to get ready.
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A little while back.
She had got her elder brother's love story on track. And after the elders got into their conversation, she quietly moved to guest room and sat thinking about him.

She found him cute, innocent and simple. "Chhotu"... Mona chuckled at his nickname. It was in contrast to his size.
She became friends with other team members but she found Chhotu to be very shy. Everytime she tried to mingle with him, she noticed he was looking at Sameer. She chuckled at this thought too, that Chhotu is scared of chief.
Her chain of thoughts were interrupted when her mom called her for tea. After that she again drift back to his thoughts and later around 4:30 PM, she goes to get ready after reminder from Mom.
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Around same time in ETF office, when Arjun was busy with some old case, Riya was busy updating her reasearch papers and Shree - Navika were busy looking at each other and passing smiles, Chhotu was the only one who was not able to concentrate on his work.
He was thinking about Mona. Though he was scared that Mona turned out to be his Chief's sister but he was very happy that she came forward and talked to him. He felt very funny that she used to notice him at the gym. They were sitting close to each other while having lunch.
He was re-living the moments during the lunch when she was serving him first, whenever she was taking some food for herself. She also offered him water when he choked on some spicy curry. He found her very sweet and caring.
He had seen a sparkle in her eyes when he was talking to her. Her smile her, bubbly nature, her attitude, everything made an impression on him. He was waiting for the party to get a glimpse of her again. Though he was not sure if he should think about going close to her.

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Around 4:45 PM, Mr DSR and Mr SKR were still playing chess and get scolding from their wives and then they get ready.
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All are ready by 5:45 PM and Arjun too come there around the same time.
Suman is wearing the same saree that Annu selected for her.
Before leaving Suman and Savita don't forget to light a diya in front of Roshni's photo in Arjun's apartment. Both the ladies get emotional remembering her.
Sameer glares at Arjun but he gets the call from Party organiser and they have to leave for the venue. He didn't get a chance to talk to Arjun. Arjun smirks at this.
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Everyone reaches at the Party venue by 7:15 PM.
Rathod family, Rawte Family, Riya, Annu, Shree, Navika, Chhotu, Mr and Mrs Coelho and Mr and Mrs Raghu and their families and some other acquaintances.
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Part 19 B

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Party begins with the new banner for the story:
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Party begins.
Suman is still showing some indifference to Sameer and Annu as a couple.
A beautiful cake is brought and Suman cuts it and feed it to DSR, Mona, Sameer and Arjun. They too feed it back to her. She just looks at Annu, who is standing in a corner, But Annu lowers her gaze in embarrassment.
Everybody gives gifts to Suman and younger ones touch her feet and she blesses them. Its Riya and Anwesha's turn to give the gift.

Suman blesses Riya and looks at Anwesha. Anwesha is trying to bring a nervous smile on her gloomy face. Suman puts her hand on Anwesha's head too when Anwesha bends down and touches her feet.

Suman takes the gift and keeps it aside. Anwesha is very tense. She know that Suman will definitely like the gift but she was still skeptical about her decision.
Mr DS Rathod goes on the dais, takes the mic and makes the announcement.
Mr DS Rathod: Dear friends... your attention please... first of all a very very very happy birthday to my dear wife Suman... i really love u sweetheart...(Suman blushes... and others clap)...ye gaana meri taraf se aapke liye... (he starts singing in a bad voice) Humein tumse pyar kitna... ye hum nahi jantey... magar jee nahi saktey ... tumhare bina... hoo...ooo
Everybody chuckles and Suman shoots an angry glare to DSR and he is amused.
DSR: Sorry friends... mai jaanta hoon ki mai bahut bura gaata hoon... par kya karoon... mai apni Suman se pyar hi itna karta hoon...(everybody clap and whistles)... Pata nahi Suman, tum meri life mein nahi hoti to mera kya hota... sach mein... life mein ek achchhe life-partner ko hona bahut zaroori hai... And I am really glad to share a good news with u all... ki mere bete Sameer ne bhi apne liye life-partner chun li hai... (everyone claps...)... aap sab to jantey hain ki Sameer shadi se kitne darta tha (Sameer is embarrassed)... aur ab jab usne khud ye faisla liya hai...So ladies and gentlemen...isse pehle ki wo apna irada fir se badal de... we officially anounce the engagement of my son Sameer with Dr Anwesha... (everyone claps)...
Annu and Sameer are suprised. Suman goes near Annu, smiles and hugs her. Annu is happy and emotional. tears well up in her eyes. Suman wipes her tears. Then she holds her hand and takes her to the dais and signals Sameer to follow them.
Suman and DSR bless the couple. Annu looks at Riya and finds her smiling and clapping. She also notices a tear in her eyes. That means it was not a surprise for her, she knew it. She guesses that Arjun must have told her.
DSR: Waise date and venue abhi decide hona hai engagement aur shadi ka ... (everybody laughs)... but mai abhi se aap sab ko invite karta hoo... so now lets celebrate this good news... (looks at the DJ) music please... is baar mai nahi gaunga... (leaves the stage)
DJ playes the music and all the youngsters start dancing.
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While the announcement was being made:
Shree, Navika and Chhotu are at first amused and happy when DSR announces Sameer's engagement, but this turns into shock when they hear that Sameer is getting engaged to Anwesha and more shocking revealation was that Sameer has chosen Anwesha and she too agreed. They look at Riya and see that she is smiling and has no effect of this news. Riya quickly tells them that Arjun knew about this and he told her in the evening when he dropped her home. All of them get another shock that Arjun did this. It took a few seconds for them to accept this.
They look at Arjun and find him smiling looking at Sameer and Annu.
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Sameer and Annu get down from the dais and Riya sprints towards them and hugs Annu.
Riya: Di... i'm so happy for u... (pouts) par mai naraaz bhi hoon... itni badi baat aapne mujhse chhupayi... is baat k liye mai aapko itni asaani se nahi maaf karungi...
Suman: bilkul Riya beti... karna bhi mat... par sirf Di hi kyun? tumhare jijaji bhi hain...
Riya: nahi... mai apne jiju se kabhi naraaz nahi ho sakti... jis insaan ne meri didi ki muskurahat wapas lautayi hai...unki zindagi mein khushiya dobara laayi hain... unsey mai kaise naraaz ho sakti hoon? (tears well up in her eyes)
Sameer comes forward and hugs Riya and kisses her forehead.
Sameer: Thanks Riya.
Riya: Thanks to mujhe aapko kehna chahiye... (looks at Annu and smiles) Didi sach mein bahut lucky hain ...
Sameer: waise ...tumhe ye baat kisne batayi?
Arjun comes there.
Arjun: Maine batayi...
Sameer is pissed off and clenches his fists.
Sameer: Tujhe to mai dekh loonga... chugalkhor kahin ka...
Suman: aye... mere Arjun ke bare mein kuch mat bol... uski wajah se aaj ye sagayi announce huyi hai... warna tu to itni jaldi batane se raha... aur agar mujhe ye baat aur pehle pata chal jaati na... to aaj hi sagayi karwa deti mai...
Sameer is embarrassed and Arjun smirks.
Sameer: fir bhi... chugalkhor to ye hai...
Suman: par tere bhale ke liye hi bola na usne...
Sameer mellows down a little because he knew she was right. This indeed helped him. Arjun comes forward to hug him. A warm hug and Sameer's anger vanishes. He also smiles. Sameer misses Roshni and feels the same pain in Arjun's eyes.
Riya and Annu are amused and touched to see the equation between them.

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After a while DSR requests for a slow romantic song to be played and he asks all the couples for dance. Sameer - Anwesha, Mr and Mrs Rathod, Mr and Mrs Rawte, Mr and Mrs Coelho and Mr and Mrs Raghu come forward. Chhotu comes and asks Shree if can dance with Navika. Riya and Navika is surprised. Shree tells them that Mona is Chhotu's crush, 11:30 baje wali. Navika and Riya are shocked.
They notice Mona approaching them. Mona comes and asks Chhotu for dance. Chhotu looks at Sameer. Mona senses that he is scared because of Sameer. She assures him that Sameer wont mind. So finally Shree goes for dance with Navika and Chhotu with Mona.
Riya looks at Arjun. She was actually impressed by the way Mona took the lead and asked Chhotu for dance. Taking a cue, Riya approaches Arjun and asks him for dance. Arjun notices Riya closely. She was looking beautiful in a blue Anarkali dress. And her happiness of seeing her sister with Sameer had added to her beauty that day. Though he didnt want to, but he agrees to dance with her.

The song begins and couples sway to the rhythm:
Tu Bin Bataye Mujhe Le Chal Kaheen
Jahan Tu Muskuraye Meri Manzil Wahin
Tu Bin Bataye Mujhe Le Chal Kaheen
Jahan Tu Muskuraye Meri Manzil Wahin
Sameer and Anwesha are lost looking into each others eyes. They were still not able to believe that all this happened so fast. But they were happy.
They didn't have to hide anything from the families now. They had the approval. Sameer slowly snakes his arms around Annu's waist and pull her a little closer.

Annu blushes and lower downs her eyes. Sameer whispers in her ears "I Love you Annu... I can't live without you... humesha aise hi rehna ... mere dil ke paas". Anwesha nods and rests her head on his chest. And Sameer tightens his grip on her.
Meethi Lagi, Chakh Ke Dekhi Abhi
Mishri Ki Dali, Zindagi Ho Chali
Jahan Hain Teri Baahein Mera Sahil Wahin
Arjun and Riya are too slowly acknowledging their feelings within their hearts but trying hard to hide them from each other. Riya was happy for Sameer and Annu and she knew Arjun had taken efforts for them. She was grateful to him. Though she knew it was not easy to make him come out of his shell, she just wanted to be with him.

Arjun, on the other hand, was re-living his moments with her. The time they spent duirng case solving, basket ball practice, when she cried putting her head on his chest, the lunch together. He found himself being comfortable when she was around. He was not oblivious to the concern and respect that she had always shown. He too cared about her. By mistake he stepped twice on Riya's foot.
Tu Bin Bataye Mujhe Le Chal Kaheen
Jahan Tu Muskuraye Meri Manzil Wahin
Senior couples were also enjoying. DSR flirting with Suman and winking at SKR and SKR doing the same. Both Suman and Savita amused at this. All this while, both the couples, deep down in their hearts, were thinking about these many blissful years that they spent together.
Mann Ki Gali Tu Phuharoon Si Aa
Bheeg Jaye Mere Khwabon Ka Kafila
Jise Tu Gungunaye Meri Dhun Hai Wahin
Mona has slowly wrapped her arms around Chhotu's neck and looking into his eyes and Chhotu is happy but looking at Sameer in between, which is annoying Mona.

Navika and Shree are dreaming about their engagement and wedding. They wished for their engagement and marriage to be announced soon.
Tu Bin Bataye Mujhe Le Chal Kaheen
Jahan Tu Muskuraye Meri Manzil Wahin
The song ends and everybody clap.
Then some party songs on which all youngsters dance and enjoy.
Elders disperse and get busy in their general talks.

Arjun goes and stands in a corner
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Part 19 C

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Sameer and Annu stand in a corner holding hands and talking to each other.
Sameer: So Future Mrs Anwesha Rathod... kaisa lag raha hai ab?
Anwesha(blushes): bahut achchha lag raha hai...
Sameer: Maa ne to daraa hi diya tha ... par kya trick thi ... aur tum... kitni jaldi fas gayi Maa ki trick mein (grins)
Anwesha(smiles): Haan... sach...mai to bas aise hi bol gayi... aur baad mein samajha ki maine khud hi confess kar liya ki mai hi aapki wo friend hoon... par maan-na padega meri saasu maa ko ... bahut smart hain wo...
Sameer: aakhir Maa kiski hain (winks)
Anwesha is quiet.
Sameer: kya hua?
Anwesha: kuch nahi... bas Chinki ke barey mein soch rahi thi...
Sameer: uske barey mein kya sochna hai? dekho na kitni khush hai wo...maine kaha tha na... tum khush raogi to wo bhi khush rahegi aur apni zin=dagi mein aagey badh payegi... (they look at Riya who is busy dancing happily with Chhotu, Shree, Navika and Mona)
Anwesha: wo to hai... par ab uski bhi shadi ho jaye to... achchha hoga na...
Sameer(cups her face): don't worry... ab wo humari zimmedari hai... I promise ... jaise tum Maa ki tarah usko sambhalti ho... mai uske sar par uske pita ka saaya ban ke rahunga...
Anwesha is in tears. Sameer wipes her tears and hugs her.
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Arjun is standing in a corner turning his back to everyone. He hears a giggle and he smiles to himself and closes his eyes.

Arjun: mai tumhara hi intezar kar raha tha... mujhe pata tha tum aaj aaogi mujhse milne...

Roshni: kaise nahi aati... kitna bada din hai aaj...bahut khush ho na aaj tum... aur kitni sare logo ko khushi di hai tumne...

Arjun:Haan... aaj finally tumhara Krishna Kanhaiya ka status formally "in-relationship" ho gaya

Roshni:Haan... kitne khush hain dono saath mein... par kya fasaya tumne dono ko...

Arjun: aur nahi to kya? pata nahi kab tak chhupata wo... isliye maine hi jakar pol khol di... aur uska nateeja dekho... uski ke liye achchha hua na...jaldi hi uski shadi ka band baj hi jayega...

Roshni: sab kitne khush hain...

Arjun: haan.. aur tumhe miss kar rahey hain...

Roshni: janti hoon... par tumhe pata hai na... mai unko aise nahi dekh sakti... to ab tumhe hi unhe khush rakhna hoga...unka khayal rakhna hoga... Aai-Baba ko kitni fikar hai tumhari...

Arjun:haan baba... rakhunga unka khayal...

Roshni(smiles): good...par ... ek aur baat kahun?... tum ab bhi rhythm mein dance nahi kar patey... bechari Riya... 2 baar uske pair par apna pair rakh diya...
Arjun(sheepishly): galti se rakh diya... tumhe pata hai ki mai dance kartey waqt kitna uncomfotable aur nervous hota hoon...

Roshni(teasing): to fir gaye kyun they dance karne?

Arjun is quiet.

Roshni: ohho... maine bhi kaisa sawaal poochh liya... iska jawab to mai janti hoon... Riya ne kaha isliye gaye they na... waise bhi usne itne pyar se poochha tha... to "Na" kehne ka to koi chance hi ahi tha...koi usey Na keh bhi kaise sakta hai... wo hai hi itni pyari...
Arjun: Haan !!!! wo bahut achchhi hai...
Roshni:chalo... kam se kam ye accept to kiya ki wo achchhi hai...
Arjun is snapped out when Savita calls him for dinner. He comes out of his trance and sees Roshni was not there. The words were ringing in his mind "chalo... kam se kam ye accept to kiya ki wo achchhi hai..."
He turns back to look at Riya, who was busy dancing with Mona and Navika flashing her dimpled smile. Her happiness was evident in her eyes. He smiled to himself and thought "Haan Riya... tum bahut achchhi ho"
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Around same time Sameer's parents
Suman: aap bhi na... kaisi baatein kar rahey they stage par? bachcho ke saamne... kuch to lihaz kiya kijiye
DSR: arre... kya matlab? apni patni ko I Love U bolne mein kaisi sharam... padosi ki patni ko to nahi bol raha the (winks)
Suman pouts her face.
DSR: ohho... Sorry... aaj ke din aapko naraaz karna theek nahi... par mai kya karun? mujhse raha hi nahi gaya... aapne itna bada kaam kiya... Anwesha aur Sameer se confess karwake... mai to apni khushi ko rok hi nahi paya... dekho na kitne khush hain dono (both look at Sameer and Anwesha) ... ekdum sahi life partner mili hai humare bete ko...
Suman(smiles): haan... wo to hai... humein aur kya chahiye? bachcho ki khushi... ab agar Arjun bhi ... (she is in tears looking at Arjun and her word trail off)
DSR(consoling her): Suman... bharosa rakho... Arjun ka bhi ek din fir se ghar bas jayega... uski zindagi mein bhi khushiyan dobara aayengi
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Around same time Arjun's parents
Savita: kaise bhaagta tha ye Sameer shadi se... ab dekho kitna khush hai...
Suryakant: achchha hi hua na... der se hi sahi ... par kitni pyari ladki mili hai usey... bilkul Roshni jaisi hi hai...
Savita(in tears remembering Roshni): haan... kaash aaj wo hoti... kitni khush hoti wo... (looks at Arjun) ... aur Arjun bhi is tarah se akela nahi hota...
Suryakant: fikar mat karo Savita... humare Arjun ki zindagi mein bhi fir se khushiya aayengi... (he pats her shoulder and she wipes her tears)
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While dancing, Mona was trying her best to be close to Chhotu and he was getting uncomfortable.
Shree and Navika were enjoying themselves.
Riya was dancing but stealing glances at Arjun in between. For a moment she thought she saw him looking at her and smiling but then she thought that she is hallucinating and shrugged it off.
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Later they have dinner and party is over.
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Few days later
Suman checks for a "mahurat" for wedding and gets an auspicious day on 9 July. They have close to 2 months for preparations.
Wedding preparations begin.
Mona becomes friends with Riya and Navika and from them she takes Chhotu's number and tries to be in touch with Chhotu by sending him general "Hi", "Good morning" and Good night" messages and Chhotu too replies her sometimes, but he was scared of Sameer.
Riya and Navika avoid telling her that even Chhotu likes her.
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So how was it?

Please excuse the spelling mistakes 😳
Friends, Next update after 10 days. My parents would be in town and its my cousin's engagement next week. So busy with preparations for that 😛
Pre-cap: Wedding preparations and shopping spree
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Regards,
Bhavna
Edited by bgargate - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
arjun told riya about sam and anu
sam anu wedding announced
loved the couple dance
loved ariya moments
loved arjun rosh convo
waiting for next part
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏AMAZING
AWESOME UPDATE
LOVE IT
👏
Edited by khemanisarita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
phew read it alll and i love it... evry moment is awsome thnx for taking this song pehle se much better hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago
tumse gopalji wala promise kiya tha...poora to karna hi tha...fir bhale hi kisi aur k mobile se hi kyu na ho...

A BIIG SORRY FOR LATE COMMENTING

Part 1

the highlight for this part for me was Arjun and Riya's convo in th SUV

Riya was so happy knwing abt her REAL jiju...bt her fear also was justified...

she cares for her dii na...

also loved th bit of Mona darling's drooling over our Chotu...these two lovestories are th cutest...

Shravika nd Chotu-Mona...

nd moreover our both dad's got dialogues...
Edited by Aisha.Vashishth - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 2

aww...wat a beautifully written part...

nw again this becomes my fav...

Mr.Rathod singing a song for Mrs.Rathod...hw romantic of papa Rathod...lolz...

sweet romantic song vid beautiful couples madly in love vid each other...a perfect blend of a romantic part...wat more can a diehard romance fan like me can wish for...

sach kahu to mai to sirf gaane me aur Sam-Annu me gumm ho gayi thi...

ws listening to th song while reading th part...

awsm feeling...cant even describe it...
Edited by Aisha.Vashishth - 12 years ago

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