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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chulbuliannu

Uff main fir late...


lgta hai meri zarurat khatam ho gyi hai aapko...😉 ufff ab apko PRO ki zarurat nhi rhi😭😭

mujhe bhi time nhi mil paa rha aur uska reason aapko pta hi hai...fir bhi main koshish karungi...

pls pls pls mujhe job se mat nikalana😆


coming to the part

shree ek dum sahi line pr jaa raha hai...bacche bade hone lge hai😆😆😆


ye shree bhi naa...pehle din hi itna aage piche ghumega...to kanya kuch galat naa samjh le...

aur ye chotu...iska dimag bhi iske naam jaisa hai...😆😆 batao apna real name bhul gya😆😆😆

aur sir to bechare ko hajam hi nhi hua😆

navika ka background...dowry cases india me aam baat hai...aur ye bhi sach hai inme sazaa bhi nhi milti mostly logo ko...kyunki sabut nhi hota...😡😡 apne bacche ko kharoch aaye to doctor k pass bhagte hai...aur dusre ko bache ko jala kr, zehar de kr marne se nhi darte log...😡😡😡 in reality...ladki k parents ladki k marne k baad case krna bhi zaruri nhi samjhte...aur kai baar ek bahen ko marne k baad...ladki ki dusri behan se uss ladke ki shadi kr dete hai 😡 ufff india me kabhi kuch nhi sudhar skta...log psycho hai yahaan k 😡😡😡




shree ko dekho...sara office aaj hi dikhayega...thoda kal k liye bhi chod de 😆😆😆 ufff shree ki himmat...rathore ko khadus aur hitlar bol rha hai...😡😡 pr bechara wo bhi kya kare...rathore upgradation ki permission jo nhi dete shree ko...to itna haq to banta hai 😆😆

precap interesting hai...khelo ji...basket ball hi khel lo...

No worries... sweety... I know the reason for u being late ... and i'm so happy for u 🤗
And tumhari zarurat bilkul khatam nahi huyi hai... in fact tumhare jiju ke aane ke baad tumhara kaam badh jayega 😉😉 ... mai zyada online nahi aapaungi na 😳😳
Shree ... hua Chhokra jawaan rey... 😉😉😉 ...abhi to wo bas friendly ho raha hai... pehli baar wo apne gadgets ke alawa kisi aur ke barey mein soch raha hai 😉😉
Arrey... Chhotu bechare ko uske real naam se kaun bulata hai office bhala? 😛😛😛
Aur Sir to bechare ko kisi ne bulaya hi nahi aaj tak... 😛... to bechara confuse ho hi jayega na ...😳😳
Navika ka background...yes... bilkul sahi kaha tumne... aisi baatein hoti hain abhi bhi India mein... iske liye ladki ke parents bhi equally zimmedar hotey hain... jab beti rotey huye aati hai... ki mai waha nahi reh sakti ... tab "log kya kahenge", "adjust kar lo, wohi tumhara ghar hai" aisa bol kar usey wapas bhej dete hain... fir ladki marne par rone lagtey hain...AngryAngry
Aise cases mein ladki ke parents ko bhi sazaa honi chahiye...AngryAngryAngry ...
Yaar meri story aagey badhani hai to aaj hi Shree se sara office dikhwa diya ...
Lekin itna sab hone ke baad bhi Shree akhir Shree hi hai na😉 ... kuch bhi ho jaye wo apna portable lie detector kabhi nahi bhool sakta... aur Sam ki dhamki bhi... 😆😆😆😆
agla part bhi aa raha hai 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Pisces_Gurl

Hey Bhavna...
I know I actually got REALLY late..But what to do...was busy...Sorry
I apologized with all my heart...
So here as promise my lamba wala comment...
But before just one word for ur story...
Its fabulous,aewexome n superb...
Ahaann..my one word...hehe..

Prologue and CS..
Great superb..
The couples are so amazing...
and plus u added Priyal n Navika and I liked them both alt..

Part 1
Sameer's character is so sweet...
Riya n Annu sisters love is really good..
Sameer had love at fist sight type of feling seing Annu..Aww ..so adorable..

Part 2
Sameer's parents are so shweet..n his dad is so romantic...
I was smling throughout the whole convo of father-son-mother at phone
Sameer's birthday ...wow..
The "Gajar Ka Halwa" scene was just fab..
He guessed who may have told them n they made...
That was really sweet..
Arjun fulfilled his promesi to both...
Sam-Mone scenes n convo was also soo sweet..
Sameer misses his best friend..
Both wanted to unite..But their egos I guess...Or both wanted another to take first step..
Hope we will see them together soon

Riya upset bcoz of her di.so sad..
L ove that Rathore was joking wih Shree n Chotu...They were so shocked..haha
Riya's words to Rathore was really surprised to him.
And their convo was good..
Sameer pondering her words about their tensed relationship...
That scene was really nyc..

Part 3
Wow...
Flashbacks...
Sam-Arjun scene was sooo good.
Ahaan basketball players...wow..
Sam heard their convo n his reaction was really god awexome..
Sam's fear of teacher..hahah...Soo cute..
Sameer thought of buying home while Aarjun didn't even think..haha..Stupid ARJUN..
but Sam's Main Hoon Na dialogue...thats call fraandship...

Riya's mind clicked somthing and he understands that Rtahore ask Arjun to come to club indirectly...Wow..Clever Riya haan..!
And both seniors amused to see them there..
Riya nacha rhi hia Shree ko..haha..
And then the actual game starts...Shree n Riya bjut played indirectly by Arjun n Sameer..
loved that scene..
But poor them..Sunday spoils by the case

Part 4
And this part is my favourite...Becoz u started the both loves stories in this..
N the banner is soo nyc...like it..
The starting lines of urs about love n life are really beautifull..
All true about the love n life

Arjun-Roshni convo was really good..
The way she maki him understand about his friendship n about Riya was really sweet...
Finally he take a step closer o he first reason of his happiness with Sam..
Well he accepted the second reason for liking Riya..Atleast he realized that he likes her but denied before..
But stll feared n guilty to take any step n Roshni so easily accepted that fact without any hesitation..
Love that..
Sam was so shocked to see that SHE is Riya's sis Annu d...
Bechara...he was soo lost in her...
Their Conv was realy good at that social matter..
Sameer looks at this re-union of sisters and is amused to see the tough cop Riya behaving like a kid....
This was soo cute...
Aww Riya really didn't like the sharing of sweets n Rathore noticed it..Hahah...
Anwesha n Sameer thinking abt each other at night...
Sameer talks with herself was really lil funny n cute..

Part 5
Aahaann..so Dr. Navika is here..
And Shree is lostlooking at that bubbly chirpy cut girl with pink glasses..
Yeh to kaam se..haha
Her talks about the crimes n helps of forensic experts was really impressive..
Aaur Shree to wse hi bht impress hogya us ki profile dekhty hi..


In short...
Love the whole story..
Nad frm here my lamba comment khatam..

Thanks you so much... this is such a big encouragement...😊
Sameer is my hero... I watch the serial for this character only 😉 ... Anwesha was a kind of character that I wanted to see him with the serial 😛 and I made her Riya's sister to get a new bond too ...
Sameer's family... I made it that way because I could identify with it ... reason being me and my brother both were working in different cities and my mom-dad live in my hometown... it was the picture there... when me or my brother couldn't make it to home on some festival... mom-dad used to feel bad 😭😭...
when I used to come back from home after vacation... my mom used to cry 😛... she still does 😉...
Gajar ka Halwa... it actually connected Roshni-Arjun-Sam-Riya-Shree--Chhotu-Anwesha ...every character was associated with that😊...
Sam - Mona... Riya - Annu... siblings bond is always special... they are your first friends... 😊
Sam-Arjun... both miss each other... they just needed a push... and Riya gave that push in the form of basket ball game...
And after such a long cold war, it was not possible for me to make them play directly... so Riya - Shree had to suffer...😉
Flashback part is my favourite too 😛 ... this was the kind of friendship I wanted to see in the serial...😊
Little Sameer... wo bhi to kabhi bachcha tha na 😉...
Love stories... I had to start them in YC style 😉 ...
Roshni is actually Arjun's happy mind voice... ye sari baatein khud arjun ko realize ho rahi hain... 😊
Sam-Annu... meri main love story... hmmm... ab ek tough cop kaise ek teenager ki tara ladki patayega... ye dekhna hai 😆😆😆
Riya is a sweety pie... Riya of my story is actually a combination of old Riya and current Aisha... 😳 innocent and sweet and at the same time tough and determined as a cop...
Hmmm... ab to Shree bhi bada ho gaya hai... hua Chhokra jawaan rey... 😉...
I have tried to make some social issues part of my stories... Delhi Rape case, Dowry Death...and a few more to come... because all this is happening around us...
And tried to make my story more open and modern... and having made Sameer's family supportive towards their daughter... the way the trust their son, they have equal faith in their daughter...😊😊😊
I'm glad that you liked it and I hope I don't disappoint you with the future updates...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sips_crazy

Navika Looks cute as forensic expert!!

Shree toh First sight main hi fida ho gaya !!!
Database par profile ...and baaton se impressed 😉😆

Thanks... Shree ab bada ho gaya hai... ab wo bhi shadi ki umar dhalne tak ka wait kyun karey... usko to abhi hi ladki mil gayi 😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Friends,

I'm back with Part 6. It is a small one and a kind of a filler. Since I have to move the story forward, there will be short leap and some fast forwards in this part. Thought it might not look convincing but please don't look for any logic in it 😉 ... it Dillogical again 😛
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For next 1 week, life continues with Anwesha's project work progressing and ETF getting busy in the cases.
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Saturday, 9 March

11:00 AM
Riya goes to Arjun.
Riya: sir...
Arjun: bolo
Riya: sir wo basket ball practice... kal sunday hai... to subah aapke paas time hai?
Arjun has almost forgotten about it
Arjun: Ohh i'm sorry mai bilkul bhool gaya tha... theek hai... par tumhari didi aayi huyi hai... tumhe unke saath time nahi spend karna?
Riya: sir karna to hai... par subah thodi der practice ke liye aa sakti hoon... fir baaki ka din unke saath rahungi...
Arjun: theek hai... subah 9 se 10:30 theek rahega?
Riya: haan sir... theek rahega... mai subah 9 baje pahunch jaungi... Thank u sir...
Later she informs Sameer about this and leaves.
Navika was in Sameer's cabin giving him some details about an old case to help him prepare for the court hearing. And Shree was lost looking at her from his desk.

Riya comes to Shree and makes noise whiles clearing her throat. Shree is disturbed and glares at her.
Shree(annoyed): galaa kharab hai? kaho to dabaa doon?
Riya(gives him a sarcastic look): nahi... uski koi zarurat nahi... mai to tumhe ye batane aayi thi ki kal se mai Arjun sir se basket ball seekhne wali hoon... subah 9 se 10:30...
Shree is embarrassed. He almost forgot about this.
Riya: tumne baat ki Rathod sir se?
Shree(sheepishly): nahi... ki to nahi hai... par kar loonga...(trying to send her away) tum jao na... mujhe mera kaam karne do
Riya(sarcastically): I know... bahut important kaam kar rahey ho...(winks)
Chhotu joins them.
Chhotu: Haan Riya! aaj kal Shree kuch zyada hi important kaamo mein busy rehne laga hai... aur aajkal to usey hum dosto ki yaad bhi nahi aati...
Riya: Chhotu... usey ab hum purane dosto ki yaad kyun aayegi ... ab to uski life mein sab kuch naya naya hai na...
Chhotu: naya nahi Riya!!! Nayi... Nayi Nayi Navika...
Shree's eyes are wide open and ready to pop out of his spectacles (a little bit of exaggeration)

Shree (stammering): k...k...k...kya matlab...? w..w..wo bhi to...t...t...tum dono ki t...t...tarah... hi m..m..m..meri f...f...friend hai
Riya and Chhotu are not ready to accept this explanation and look at him with raised eye-brows... Shree is nervous and looking a way to avoid this confrontation.
Shree: Jao na tum dono...
Navika comes there.
Navika: Arrey... Riya, Chhotu... kahan jaa rahe ho tum dono? ab to lunch time hai... chalo lunch kar lete hain... kyun Shree?
Shree: haan!!!! mai bhi wohi keh raha tha in dono se ki lunch kar lete hain... isi liye mai in dono se keh raha tha ki ye dono canteen mein jaayein...
Riya and Chhotu glare at him.
Navika: aur tum Shree?
Shree: wo mai tumhara intezar kar raha tha na...(a sweet romantic tone) socha tum aogi to hum dono saath chalenge...(smiling at Navika)
Navika notices this change in tone and blushes a little... Riya and Chhotu are quick to notice this too
Shree(back to normal): ab tum aa gayi ho to saath mein chaltey hain... hai na riya, Chhotu...
Shree sprints forward and Navika looks at Riya nad Chhotu who are now looking at her with raised eye-brows. She blushes a little and follows Shree to the canteen.
Riya and Chhotu burst into laughter and give each other a hi 5 before going for lunch.

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After lunch, while going back to his cabin, Sameer comes to Shree's desk.
Sameer: Shree wo pichhle case ke sare records tumne compile karke rakh diye hai na?
Shree: yes sir... rakh diye hain... bas password hi encrypt kara raha tha... abhi bhejta hoon apko thodi der mein...
Sameer(poking him): good... to? aaj nahi jaana tumhe jaldi?
Shree(embarrased): jaana to hai... par... its ok... kuch kaam ho to bata dijiye...
Sameer(smiles): nahi...kaam to nahi hai par tumhari basket ball ki practice kab shuru karen? kaho to abhi shaam ko chalein club house?
Shree was planning to ask Navika for coffee in the evening.
Shree: sir aaj?
Sameer: haan... i mean hum saturday evening mein practice kar saktey hain... Riya ne bataya mujhe ki wo aur Arjun Sunday morning mein practice karenge...isliye maine socha ki hum saturday shaam ko hi kar lenge... to kyun na aaj se hi shuru kiya jaaye?
Shree was in no mood, but was not possible to say "no" to Sameer. Sameer was persistent. He gave up.
Shree : ok sir chaltey hain...
Sameer: great... abhi 1:30 baj raha hai... 4 baje nikaltey hain... theek hai?
Shree: right sir (smiles thinking that he has some time to think of an excuse to avoid going)
Chhotu looks at Shree and understands what Shree is upto and plans to foils his effort to avoid going.
At 3:50 PM
Sameer: Chalein Shree?
Shree: haan sir... (shows as if he forgot something)ohhh... mai to bhool gaya... mujhe bank jana tha... cheque deposit karwane...
Chhotu: Shree... bank to Saturday ko 2 baje tak hi khuli rehti hai... tu kaunse bank jayega abhi?
Shree(angrily looking at Chhotu)(try to hide his intention): arre haan...
Chhotu: aur waise bhi tu cheque to ATM drop box mein bhi deposit kar sakta hai... 5 mins lagenge... baad mein kar dena... abhi club house chal... mai bhi chalta hoon aap dono ke saath...
Sameer also understood Shree's intentions and smiles controlling his laughter. Both Sameer and Chhotu don't give him another chance to back off.
Shree upset with Chhotu for foiling his efforts. He had no choice but to go. Chhotu and Sameer were virtually dragging him there.

Navika, Riya and Arjun too leave. Riya has got her car today so she drops Navika to her home.

Shree, Chhotu and Sameer reach club house by 4:30 PM, make their entries and Sameer goes into the court with Shree and Shree acts very lazily.
Sameer(sternly): kya kar rahey ho Shree? dhyaan kaha hai tumhara... theek se dekho mai kya kar raha hoon... aur waise karne ki koshish karo...
Shree half heartedly follow his instructions for almost 20 mins. Then they take a small break and Sameer again drags him to the court. Chhotu also joins them to boost up Shree's morale.
They play till 6:00 PM. Then Shree is tired.
Shree (gasping for breath): sir...bas... ab aur nahi... (almost crying face).. aaj ke liye itna kafi hai... please sir...
Sameer(smiles): Theek hai... par please next saturday koi bahana mat banana... jaise aaj bana rahey they...
Shree is embarrassed.
Shree: Sorry sir...

Sameer (smiles): chalo 6 baj gaye hain... mai nikalta hoon... tum log bhi jakar enjoy karo... bye..
Sameer leaves.
Shree(mimicking Sameer): Enjoy karo...(to his natural voice annoyed) itney pair dard kar rahey hain... aur sir bol ke gaye enjoy karo... jaan le li bachche ki... (almost crying) kyun maine us din josh mein aakar sir se kaha ki mere basket ball coach ban jayein... kyun?
Chhotu: arre Shree... dekh na... sir kitna dil se sikha rahey they tujhe... sir kitne passionate hain is game ko lekar... he is the best coach... aur tu aise bol raha hai... Sir ko dekh kitne fit hain...aur agar tujhe gym jaane ki aadat hoti to tujhe itna dard nahi hota...
Shree pouts his face.
Chhotu: abhi chal... ghar chaltey hain... thoda aaram kar ley... waise bhi kal sunday hai... koi case nahi aaya to tu poora din aaram kar sakta hai...
Shree: koi case aaya to bhi mai ghar se hi sari information doonga... (makes angry face)
Shree was already mad at Chhotu but right now it was only Chhotu who would take him home and get dinner for him. So he quietly followed hwt Chhotu said.
They reach Shree's place. They have dinner together and then Chhotu goes home.
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Riya went shopping with her sister and she asks Navika to join them. Navika bonds well with Mukherjee sisters on a personal level; Anwesha remind her of her own
sister. They have dinner together and Riya drops Navika. Riya and Anwesha come home and sleep.
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Sunday, 10 March
8:50 AM
Riya reaches clubhouse and Arjun too comes. They go inside and start practicing. Riya is tired catching up with Arjun's swiftness in the court, but she doesn't give up.

Arjun is impressed with this "never give up" attitude of Riya. He knew that she is brave and intelligent officer. But while playing the game he notices these other
qualities in her like she is mentally tough, has a stong determination, doesn't easily give up, she is passionate, focussed and perfect listener as she was listening and following his instruction and not just hearing what he said.
Suddenly Arjun sees a familiar face, some old colleague waving at him. He tells Riya to continue practicing while he goes to meet that person.
He goes and talks to that person for 10 mins.
When he comes back, he sees Riya practicing with passion. He keeps looking at her face. This was for the first time he was noticing a girl after Roshni. She was sweating and tired. Her face had become pink but she still continued.
She was completely opposite of Roshni but she had a different charm. Her determination, persistence and confidence added to her beauty. She was fit and had a good figure(men will be men 😉). Arjun was amazed that why he was looking at her like this but didn't have an answer. He couldn't take his eyes off her.
It was almost 10:30 AM now. He forced himself to call her.
Arjun: bas Riya... aaj ke liye itna kaafi hai... next Sunday ko continue kartey hain...
Riya was hoping for some good comment from him but she knew that "Khadoos" Rawte doesn't praise anyone like that.
Riya(gasping for breath): ok sir... Thank you...
Both of them leave.
While leaving.
Arjun: Well played Riya!
Riya(shocked): Thank you sir!

Riya reaches home at around 11:30 where Anwesha has kept lunch ready for her, because she knew Riya would be coming home tired and would be hungry.
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The routine continues.
Sameer as Shree's basketball coach on saturday evenings and Arjun as Riya's on sunday mornings.

Anwesha continuing her project work and managing Riya's home and taking her care just like her mother.

Because of basket ball discussions sometimes in office, the ice between Sameer and Arjun too starts melting slowly. At least they are not indulging in hurling direct
insults at each other.
Also, Arjun and Riya seem to be coming closer.
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Navika has gained a special place in the team with her valuble contribution investigation of cases. Sameer and Arjun both appreciated her for her great analytical skills.

With that she has also become part of the masti gang in office joining Shree, Riya and Chhotu.
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Navika has begun to understand Shree's care towards her. She had noticed his special treatment and Riya and and Chhotu's teasing comments on both of them. She too cares for him and respects him. She admires Shree for his technical skills. But still she is not sure about her feelings.
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27th March Holi
Its Holi and our officers are in office. On such festive occassions there are more chances of an emergency, so our ETF has to be prepared for any such situation.

Their Holi is limited to a small teeka of Gulaal to everyone. Surprisingly, Sameer and Arjun too put a teeka to each other. Entire team
is in a shock.
Luckily, there were no major cases reported in the city so the local police took care of them and ETF was not required.
But still the team had to be present in office.
Riya, Shree, Navika and Chhotu are busy with their regular chit chatting.
Arjun and Sameer sitting in their respective cabins as they knew that their presence will restrict the team's fun. After all they always give their best when on duty, so they deserve some relaxed moments when there is no work.
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While passing outside Sameer's cabin Arjun looked at him. Sameer seemed to be typing something in his mobile phone, but within a minute he stopped typing, locked the mobile and kept it on the table. Then he tried to distract himself looking here and there but again his attention went to the mobile. He kept staring at it and then later picked up a file to read, but couldn't concentrate on reading.
After 5 mins he picked up the mobile again. This time he didnt type anything but seemed to be scrolling through the screen, may be the contact list. He stopped at one point, kept looking at the screen. His finger went to the screen again, but he backed off again, locked the screen and again kept the phone back.
Arjun was noticing Sameer for a couple of days. When working he was normal. But when there was no work, Sameer was behaving weird. He kept on playing with his cell phone. Exactly what he noticed today again. It was nothing in particular. And all the time Sameer had a confused and tense look on his face.
For a first few days Arjun ignored it but this became Sameer's habit.
Arjun was waiting for the right time to talk to him about that.
While leaving Sameer remembers something and informs Shree that they will not be having basket ball practice on Saturday 30th March.
After a peaceful day, all of them head to their respective homes.
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The routine continues for next 2 days.
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Saturday 30 March
Roshni's death anniversary... Sameer blames Arjun for Roshni's death in the heat of the moment. And it looked like the ice that was melting between them suddenly
froze again.
But later both of them realize that the way they behaved with each other was not right. And they resolve to bridge this gap between them for Roshni.
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So how was it?
Please excuse the spelling mistakes...
Let me know your views...
No prize for guessing what Sameer was trying to do 😉
Pre-cap : A little bit of Mahabharat - Agar Arjun hai to Mahabharat bhi hai aur agar Mahabharat hai to uske hero Krishna bhi hain... and but obvious meri story ka hero Sameer hai, to wohi yaha Krishna hai 😉 ... Arjun ka saarthi ... 😊
Sameer and Arjun realise their mistake and miss each other. The major flashback of same incident with Roshni from POV of both.
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Bhavna

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Posted: 12 years ago
Unres
di ye kya tha samjun bro lad bhi liye n galti bi realise ho gyi 🤣
Wokies...
navika :p
blush blushwa
haye shree mera chota sa bhai bache ki jan loge kya 🤣
Wow ...sam bro weird bhaiya phone me kiya h wink wink..
haye chiya tease shree
n wat ariya moving fast forwda...
maje aa gye di 🤣
Di holi ayi pta bi ni chla :p
in btw awesum tha
lov it
in btw precap rosh di thoda clear krna lol
🤗
tc
ps. me first!
phew sry i forget di it was ...mindblowing...
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🤣 🤣

It was FUNtastic scene between Shree, Riya, Chotu & Navika! Very well written & as natural as it gets👏 I love how they welcome newcomers into their fold.First Arjun, then Aisha, Liza, Saks & now Navika in your story. Its not so in the real world. Or so I have seen.Everything in the book is done to alienate you further & its takes forever to break the ice.Groupism at its rottentest🤢 Girls are the worst.That's why love that Riya also finds it in herself to include Navika in her outing with her Di.😳 So sweet!

Shree-Sameer practise session was howlarious.But why do I feel Shree is going to get even very soon?😉😈😆

Arjun checking out Riya?😲 And I thought you were my friend!😭 "Figure" waala line toh avoid kar hi sakti thi😒

Eh? Why the shradh confrontation scene so thanda?😕 I know u didnt want to repeat the show scene but I wanted to know a bit more about why they were fighting.But it'll come soon I know😊

Awesome! Waiting for more...
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oh god this shree😆 is like dekh k tumko hosh mein aana bhool gaye yaad rahe tum aur zamana bhool gaye😉 ab navika ka jadu aisa chal gaya hai ki shree ka dil kya kare😉

shree not fair yaar ladki ki aate hi dosto ko bhool gaya😆 think abt riya and chotu
lolz shree wanted to take her out fr a coffee...ahem ahem bt sam ne plan ki band baja di😆
arjun-riya are coming closer ,arjun is impressed wid her...slowly slowly making place in his heart😊
bt ye sameer kisko call karne ki koshish kar raha tha i guess anwesha ko😉

nice precap i hope both sam-arjun will forgive each other fr wat happened. and will bcum frnds again like eariler they used to be...😊
awesum update di...waiting fr the next part...ab sam-annu and ariya scene dono chahiye (just a req.)


Edited by shona14 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shona14

ye res karne ka competition chal raha hai kya ...to chalo m also in😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
that was such a brilliant update :) loved it
shree again lost in navika :)
kaho to daba doon 😆 poor shree was really so annoyed
love the way riya and chotu were teasing shree 😆
and loved shree's reaction when chotu said nayi nayi navika 🤣
awww navika was blushing :)
oh no sam spoiled shree's plan 😆
and then love the way chotu was answering shree
and rathore understood shree's intentions as well 😆 poor shree
glad that navika sees her elder sister in anwesha :)
awww riya didn't give up and arjun was impressed <3
wow he was noticing riya's other qualities too :)
yayyy arjun complimented riya and poor riya was so shocked hearing it :)
glad that sam and arjun's relationship is getting better
and arjun and riya are getting closer <3
awww navika cares for shree and also understood shree's care for her :)
arjun and rathore again had a little on roshni's death anniversary
but glad they realized that their behavior towards each other was wrong
precap seems interesting
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm
continue soon
Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago

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