Suraj hua madham 4 sujal-kash - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
kewl story n a brilliant concept...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
jasmine dear a very nice part... your story has a total different concept...& it is getting very very very intresting from part to part....you write very well...keep up the good work.... 👍🏼 jasmine yeh sujal kashish pe ghussa kyun hotha hain ?? woh kyun yeh baat yaad nahi rakhtha ki kashish is a village girl.. mujhe achcha nahi lagtha jab woh kashish ke saath rudely behave kartha hain...... 🤢
it is good that ab sujal kashish ko city a taur-tarike seekha raha hain... that is seriously very very very niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
👏 👏 ab please jaldi se continue karna.. me will be waiting for the next part..... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
Part-6 Kashish wears a beautiful maroon sari with matching jewellery & walks like a princess.sujal was surprised.
K:how is it?hav I improved?
S:fantastic.I cant believe that u cud change so fast
K smiles:thanku

They both hold hands 2gether & go 4 a party.K behaves 2 every1 normally.S is happy.
They both do romantic dance 2 suraj hua madham{K3G}

K is cooking in the kitchen.S phones:u go buy sum vegetables.it's the time 4 the vegetable seller 2 cum
K:ok
K goes out & goes near the seller & luk at the vegetables.S goes inside the house without her knowledge.He gets inside the kitchen & starts cooking.There was a big crowd around the seller.So K cant even speak 2 him.Later she cud buy veg & goes inside the house.K goes 2 the kitchen & is shocked 2 see food ready.K:how did it happen?I did'nt finish cooking
Sum1 hugs her from back.K screams.S laughs.K was surprised 2 see him there:how cum u here?
S:I came early.u did'nt no that.don't get scared.i only cooked
K:what was the need?
S:it's a husband's duty 2 help his wife
K smiles.

Next day,K thinks:2day is my b'day.why sujal is not wishing me?
K 2 S b4 going 2 office:did u 4get anything?
S:no K:r u sure? G:100% sure
S goes.
K is dull:sujal does'nt think abt me

K was sleeping wen S came back.S smiles.S gets up:u came?sorry,I slept
S:u were very cute while sleeping
K smiles.
S closes K's eyes & takes her 2 another room.he removes his arms from her eyes.K was surprised 2 see a swinging chair.
K:wow!I luv it
K sits there.S swings it
Edited by jasminerahul - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
jasmine too good , too sweet , too cute... seriously the part was toooooooo niceeeeeeeeeeeee...
i liked it very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. 👏
sujal is such a sweetie pie......really a sweetheart....... 😳 it is very good that sujal , kashish her very happy with each other.. i wish unki khushiyo ko kisi ki naraz na lage... 😃 the part totally rocked...keep up the good work... 👍🏼 please continue soon... 😊 😛 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
Part 7
Sujal:how is it?
Kashish:very nice.swinging like a bird…so sweet
S-K smile.
They go 2 the bedroom. K:I never thot u wil gift me such a sweet thing
S keeps his arms on her face:bcoz I luv u
K is shy.They fall on bed.

Morning.sujal-kashish r sleeping on bed.K gets up & opens the door 2 get milk from the milkman.
Then she goes 2 bath.Some1 gets inside their house.That person closes K's bathroom door & S's bedroom.
After bathing,K tries 2 open the door.but she fails.
K:I no sujal closed this 2 make fun
K smiles.Suddenly S opens the door & gets in & luks at K.K is shy.S hugs her.
Suddenly she realizes that it's a dream.
K:sujal,don't try 2 trick me.open the door
S opens his eyes & gets up from the bed. S:which door she's talking abt?
S tries 2 open his door.but he cant.
S:whats this?
He hears K shouting:sujal,I'm losing my patience.open the door
S feels strange:sumthing is wrong
S:kashish,even my door is closed.i'm not joking.sumthing is wrong.sum1 has entered our house
K is shocked:what?
K is scared:Oh my god.sujal,r u ok?
S:yes.don't get scared

WHO'S THAT PERSON?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i guess itz charu....i dunno where i got ths idea 4m...jus a wild guess....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
jasmine dear a very nice part.. i like sujal , kashish together.. they are very sweet when they are together..👍🏼 hmm.. tho sujal ,kashish ke ghar par koi aaya hain i think it's charu & nobody else...charu is having some fun that's all....kyun am'i right ???? 😉 dear woh joh koi bhi ho tum dekhlena ki woh sujal ,kashish ke khushhaal zindagi mein dhakl na de..... 😃 agar kissine ne bhi unki zindahi tabaa karna ki koshish ki tho mujhse bura koi nahi hoga.... 😡 ab please jaldi se continue karna.. me will be waiting... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
hey jasmine please continue soon..me waiting.. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19
jasmine dear where are you ??? please continue me waiting for you to continue... 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
Part-8 Somebody opens sujal's door.S is relived & luks out.he sees no one.
Kashish:open the door plz
K is very nervous.S goes & opens the door.K hugs him:sujal!who's that person?
S:mayb a thief.after stealing,he might've gone
K:Oh my God!
S-K cum out.Sum1 laughs loudly.They r shocked.They turn back & was surprised 2 see charu
C:I'm not any thief
S:whats this tanu?we got scared
C:so a smart guy like u get scared?
K:u r so naughty.why did u do so?
C:just 4 a thrill.wen I cum here 4 the 1st time,I wanted 2 make a blast.i cud succeed.then another thing is that I'm going 2 stay here
K is surprised:really?
C:I'm going 2 do MBA here
S:very gud


Charu enter their bedroom & sees the romantic photos of S-K.
C:wow!eternal cuple.u guys luv each other very much
Kashish:yes.we cant liv without each other
C:God bless u my sweet sister
K smiles:gOd blessed me

Next day,Charu 2 K:di,lets go 4 shopping
K:sorry charu.i've work 2 do.u go with sujal
C is dull. S:why don't u cum with us kashish?
K:next time,I'l also cum

C-S go 2 a shop. S:u buy things.i'l pay.but plz don't tell me 2 help u 2 choose.bcoz I'm bad at selection
C is luking at ornaments.a guy catches her hand. C is shocked

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