MAANEET FF JAANE TU YA JAANE NA #10 EPILOGUE PG 40 - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends.Here is the epilogue of my first emotionally romantic FF. I hope you'll will enjoy reading it

EPILOGUE

"Now that I am in your arms...

There is peace and intoxication in my breaths with a blessing of splendor and a new grandeur in my dreams and thoughts

SINCE I KNOW U ARE MINE

You are my religion, my faith, my holy words and my prayer... I found the bliss of sacred love in my life

SINCE I KNOW YOU ARE MINE

I would wind up in you would crumble in your arms would get destroyed for you SINCE I KNOW U ARE MINE

Today; there is a reason to live and to die for SINCE I KNOW YOU ARE MINE"

There was a heavenly blush on her angelic face as Geet moved her fingers on these words that she had penned down in her diary

Today Geet's life was decorated with the shower of happiness, success, satisfaction and most importantly it was filled with the colors of Maan's UNCONDITIONAL AND NEVER ENDING LOVE

The foundation of their relationship was built with the blocks of loyalty and trust to such an extent that none of the rumors or storms related to their superstar status was able to stand in front of the strength of their bond

The only truth that was eternal irrespective of circumstances was from the beginning till the end she was and would remain MAAN'S GEET and he would continue to be GEET'S MAAN

It was 2 years since their marriage and in these days every chapter of her life had been transformed into a perfect majestic fairytale

She was sitting on the throne of blessed success and happiness in both her personal and professional life

Her best friends Prem and Sanju had got married and Adi was now one of the most successful directors of the industry

She was ruling the top actress slot in Hollywood and well as in Bollywood

Maan had climbed the ladder of success in his career and was regarded the king of the glamor industry

He had fulfilled every dream of Geet and had made her his life and the sole purpose of his breaths

Infact Maan had promised to accomplish one of her unvoiced wishes that he claimed to have read through the mirrors of her eyes on their 3rd wedding anniversary which was just about to approach in a day's time

She placed her diary in the bag and marked the completion of her luggage packing process

Maaneet were going on their 3rd honeymoon but the destination was kept a secret by Maan as he had claimed it to be associated with her heart's dream

Geet went to take a quick shower inorder to get ready for their dream trip without any further delay as she knew as soon as her Maan will be back the flight of his blissful romantic embrace will give her the wings of love that will teach her to fly high in the paradise of their never ending beautiful bond

INDEED DREAMS DO COME TRUE

*****

Later that day,

Maan decorated Geet's nape with a series of sensual kisses as he tied the last knot of the blindfold on Geet's eyes to mark the beginning of their wonderful journey

Maan scooped Geet in his arms and carried her inside their private jet

He placed her on his lap as Geet garlanded his neck with the beauty of her arms

Maan: Geet won't you ask me the reason for blindfolding your eyes?

Geet moved her fingers towards Maan's shirt and gave them the authority to unbutton the barriers which were stopping her lips from marking her signature on his well toned chest

With a smile on her face she pressed her wet lips on the canvas of her heart's possession and started gifting Maan with countless passionate smooches

Maan hand combed her hair as he allowed his wife to show her authority of love on him and continued with his question

Maan: Shayari won't you question me about the destination of this journey?

Geet allowed her busy kissing lips to trial the path upto Maan's ear

Geet: You, without telling me take me somewhere... I will find my shore in the path where your arms embrace me. You, without telling me take me somewhere... I will find my destination in the sensual shower of your love that completes me. You, without telling me take me somewhere...I will find myself in the possessive touch of your teasing kisses that adorn me. You, without telling me take me somewhere...

But before Geet could complete her statement Maan sealed her lips by tasting her sweet nector with a passion that kept on increasing with the romantic moments that followed in every moment of their special journey...

PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG :

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E0StrwCkNag


Kondhal vannanai kovalanaai vennai unda va yennin ullam kavarthanae
Kondhal vannanai kovalanaai vennai unda va yennin ullam kavarthanae
Anda kula ne arandha nin amudinai
Anda kuda ne arandha nin amudinai

Kanda kangal mai Thonrinai kaanathey

Maan had taken lots of efforts to find out some unique romantic destinations of the world which were still a secret to a majority of the population and hence there was less than 1% chance for the people of that country to recognize the superstar couple... This was the surprise that he had planned for Geet and it was now time to reveal this secret in front of his beloved wife

Maan: Geet your eyes have let out the secret of your heart that you tried to hide from your own entity... Geet your heart desires to live a life without any restrictions; deep down your soul you wish to lead a life of another ordinary girl who could walk, dance and enjoy her life without the tag of a superstar attached to her name

A tear drop rolled down her cheek as Maan had successfully read the secret wish of her heart

Maan kissed her tear away and cocooned her in the solace of his embrace

Maan: Today on the occasion of our third wedding anniversary your husband has tried his best to fulfill this desire of yours. Allow me to be the wings of your dreams so that I can take you to the heights of the sky wherein you will be the sole angel of the heavenly paradise that the Almighty has carved on this earth


Maan: Let us step into the hidden secrets of the world to welcome the serenity of being an ordinary couple drowned in the ocean of an extraordinary bond of love


Ban ke titli dil uda uda uda hai kahin dur

Maan held her hand and securely tied their bodies with the paragliding set up

Yes it was time to enjoy the freedom of their love he opened Geet's blindfold and together both of them flew like birds in the sky of romance to welcome the first beautiful site of their destination the mesmerizing serenity of Sanqingshan




Ban ke titli dil uda uda uda hai kahin dur
Chalke khushbu se juda juda juda hai kahin dur

This place is considered to be an epitome of sacredness and immortality

By becoming the wings of each other's body Maaneet took a promise and a blessing from the heavens to keep their relationship ETERNAL in all the upcoming lives of destiny

Geet sang the tunes of Maan's love as he drenched her completely in the rain of his love by teasing her senses to the extent of extreme bliss with his unique sensual touches as and when the clouds and mist embraced the love birds with the romantic pleasure of innocent passion


Haadse ye kaise ansune se, jaise

Choome andheron ko koi nor

Geet's musical laughter got dispersed in the majesty of the romantic breeze as the pearls of the beautiful streams that were flowing into pools were sprinkling teasing kisses on her mesmerizing form making this moment indeed spectacular

She rested her head on Maan's chest and gave him access to conquer the arena of her lips to make the promise of their life long commited bond permanently engraved into the beauty of their heartbeats... This kiss of theirs marked the sacred union of their souls that possessed the power to conquer the prowess of destiny



Ban ke titli dil uda uda uda hai kahin dur

Maaneet flew their way to reach another beautiful paradise whose sight made Geet completely awestruck

A beautiful landscape of enormous majesty was spreading the colorful spell of wicked romance by laying a carpet of passion in front of the love birds

Maaneet were witnessing the spectacular sight of the RED BEACH

Geet hugged Maan into a tight embrace as Maan took twirling turns in the sky and allowed their blissful flying arena to kiss the fragrance of a fantasized dream by landing beautifully on the canvas of the passionate land of love


Sirf keh jaaun yaar aasmaan pe likh doon
Teri taareefon mein chashme baddoor


Like a small child who had seen her most favourite toy Geet started chasing the Crowned Cranes once again enjoying the carefree life that was the soul of her past before becoming a superstar

Maan was capturing the angelic antics of his poetry in the folds of his camera as every innocent act of Geet was inculcating a new gust of fresh breath into his soul

Geet was completely engrossed in her innocence and in her excitement by mistake she placed her feet on a moist patch due to which her leg got slipped and she was just about to fall when the breath of her soul protected her by laying the cushion of his protective arms at her service


Ban ke titli dil uda uda uda hai kahin dur
Chalke khushbu se juda juda juda hai kahin dur

The naughty and passionate twinkle in Geet's eyes were ordering Maan to narrate the tale of their zealous blissful romance in this burning desirous spell

Maan placed his head authoratively on the valley of her mesmerizing womanly curves and drowned Geet completely in the breathtaking urgent fire of raw desires as he made her feel proud to be the sole woman of his dreams by gifting her wonderful doses of animalistic nip**e bites and soul searing possessive signature smooches

The love making session of theirs appeared beautifully divine as their souls defined a promise to keep the light of passion alive throughout their journey forever and ever...



[Tamil] Kondhal vannanai kovalanaai vennai unda va yennin ullam kavarthanae
Kondhal vannanai kovalanaai vennai unda va yennin ullam kavarthanae
Anda kula ne arandha nin amudinai
Anda kuda ne arandha nin amudinai
Kanda kangal mai Thonrinai kaanathey[Tamil]

After writing a beautiful chapter in the book of their lives Maaneet left for a new destination that lied in the other part of the world

Two days later Maan and Geet found themselves in the folds of THE TUNNEL OF LOVE


It is believed that if two people are sincere in their love and if they cross the tunnel holding each other's hand successfully their wishes are blessed with the beauty of reality

This destination marked the foundation of Maaneet's relationship as it was decorated with the tunes of loyalty, trust and immense faith on your soulmate




Bhori bhoori aankhein teri, kankiyoon se tez teer kitne chhodein

Maaneet get into their skating shoes as they were all ready to take up this challenging path of love

Maan surprised Geet completely by scooping her in his arms as he skated comfortably throughout the route making it evident as long as Geet was in his arms every difficult journey would get the ease of a perfect destination

The ocean of love and admiration that was getting reflected through Geet's mirrors was making Maan's throat completely dry

Her eyes were narrating the intoxication of this moment and her desire to be cocooned forever in his folds


Dhani dhani baatein teri, udte phirte panchhiyon ke rukh bhi mode


Geet trailed her fingers and entered the arena of his perfect smooth back as she took this opportunity to tease her hubby by crossing all the boundaries of sanity

Maan let out a loud groan as Geet tortured him with desirous urgency of her nails; his single groan was enough to ignite the fire of womanly needs in her heart Maan was very well aware of this and he used this effect of his to counterattack the torture of his beautiful wife


Adhoori thi zara si
Main poori ho rahi hoon
Teri saadgi mein hoke choor..

As Maan skated victoriously through this love tunnel he made Geet realize what her simple nail attack had done to him by positioning her very close to his manhood

Geet let out a satisfactory moan as his hardness kissed her almost wet form

This innocent way of torturing each other took an animalistic form of raw desires as soon as Maaneet reached the end point of the tunnel

They celebrated the triumph of their love by entering into the solace of a breathtaking love making session wherein Maan rocked the sweating form of Geet by entering her and taking her to a ride that added the heavenly blush of Maan's love to her beautiful form THUS MAKING HER COMPLETE IN EVERY TRUE SENSE


Ban ke titli dil uda uda uda hai kaheen dur..
Chal ke khushboo se juda juda juda hai kaheen dur..

After enjoying their time in this love paradise for 3 days Maaneet moved on to their next destination which declared the romantic blush of their relationship; Maaneet were now about to drown themselves in the romantic chill of the Mendenhall Ice caves



Raatein ginke neendein bunke
Cheez kya hai khwaabdari humne jaani

The beautiful rain forests, the waterfalls and the gentle streams were adding a stunning impact to the romantic glacier

But the union of two bodies in this under water romantic setup was successful in setting fire to water


Tere sur ka saaz banke
Hoti kya hai raagdari humne jaani


Maan undressed Geet with utmost care as both of them enjoyed their special romantic bath in the waves of nature

Maan marked his permanent signature on the assets of his beloved wife as he made her completely wild by giving her the most romantic bath that both of them had enjoyed together

The fragrance of her breath and the music of his soul were getting blended into a blissful union of who hearts that shared the same beat


Jo dil ko bha rahi hai
Wo teri shayari hai
Ya koi shayaraana hai fitoor


If the romantic bath was a passionate bliss for Maaneet the next destination of their love nest portrayed an innocent confession from their heart

2 days later Maaneet were ready to walk on the teasing naughtiness of the COTTON CASTLE


Ban ke titli dil uda uda uda hai kaheen dur..
Chal ke khushboo se juda juda juda hai kaheen dur..

Maaneet held each other's hand and started walking bare feet on this beautiful epic of nature allowing their footsteps to kiss the soft cushion of the path


Haadse ye kaise ansune se jaise
Choome andhoro ko koi noor..
Ban ke titli dil uda uda uda hai kaheen dur..

Time seemed to have lost the counts of its seconds as Maaneet continued to walk silently conversing through the medium of their heartbeats

The beauty of their love was such that none of them appeared to be tired as they found solace in each other's company



Sirf keh jaaoon ya asmaan pe likh doon
Teri taareefon mein Chashme baddoor..

Dusk was about to kiss the serenity of the cool waves of nature giving a hint to the love birds that they had indeed travelled a long path in the challenges of their life

Their journey was full of uncertainties; there was a proper mixture of sorrow, anger, hatred yet at the end their love had emerged victorious and today their life was indeed a perfect example of a LIVING FAIRYTALE ROMANCE just because they were together



[Tamil] Kondhal vannanai kovalanaai vennai unda va yennin ullam kavarthanae
Kondhal vannanai kovalanaai vennai unda va yennin ullam kavarthanae
Anda kula ne arandha nin amudinai
Anda kuda ne arandha nin amudinai
Kanda kangal mai Thonrinai kaanathey

As both of them turned around they noticed the imprint of their footsteps on the cotton castle canvas which brought a smile on their face as they confessed

"I don't know how night went by or how morning came by

I don't know how, when and where this series began

This is the limit of madness

Your face is like a poem Oh beloved!

This whole world is like a shadow of yours

I see your face in every face

What sight my eyes now behold!

There is God in each and every part of you

I have occupied you in my heart, body and soul

My eyes have seen my Lord in you; now I don't wish to see anything else...

I LOVED U, I LOVE U AND WILL CONTINUE TO LOVE U TILL THE MUSIC OF MY BREATHS DISPELS"

As Maaneet submitted each other in a soul searing hug destiny proudly declared Storms might come, fate might be cruel, and difficulties might introduce a terrible wound yet their LOVE WILL ALWAYS BE CAPABLE TO ADD THE PERFECT HEALING TOUCH IN ALL SITUATIONS OF LIFE

FAIRYTALES CAN EXIST IN REAL LIFE AS CUPID RENAMED THE MOST EPIC FAIRYTALE AS MAANEET...

TODAY THE JOURNEY MIGHT END BUT IN IN ALL AGES TO COME THE NAME, THE LOVE AND THE MAGIC OF MAANEET WILL REMAIN ETERNAL AS TRUE LOVE LEAVES ITS IMPRINTS IN THE HEART WHICH CAN NEVER FADE...

MAANEET FOREVER...

**************THE END*************

Writer's note


Jaane tu ya jaane na is very close to my heart as this was my first ever attempt to write an emotionally romantic story. It was a challenge for me to make Maan the character that each one us adores and loves beyond any limit extremely rude and selfish. As readers of my stories you'll know Maan of all my Maaneet fanfics is a sweetheart and a person who is actually a dream of every girl. The sole reason behind penning down this tale was to introduce the element of reality into a world of fantasy. Love stories need not always have a perfect start but I personally believe if your love is true it can withstand every storm and difficult situations of life. Personally my favourite character in this FF is Geet as this is what I want every girl to be like strong, independent, brave and a person who possesses a heart which can love as well as teach a person how to love.

Some of you might have expected that Geet will physically torture Maan or emotionally drain him by acting to fall in love with someone else or becoming the replica of selfish Maan in the second half. I might not be wrong if I state that many of u wanted Maan to lose his superstar status and Geet making a mockery of him and taking revenge. Guys this was never the concept of this FF I would like to ask one question if Geet had indeed turned out to be the selfish MSK in the second half then what would have been the difference between Maan and Geet?

This would have been a revenge game and not a journey of epic love which possessed the strength to bind two souls in a rhythm of one heartbeat, isn't it?

True love works like magic and this is what I wanted to prove Maan could not change the past but he could actually beautify her present and her future with his love by becoming the Maan of her dreams and the day this was accomplished Geet's unconditional love was victorious. This was the concept of the story not a perfect start but indeed a perfect end...

I hope you'll have enjoyed this journey. I sincerely thank each one of you for staying with me in this journey and its just coz of your love that I have started a sequel of this FF with a fresh start but again as I said the story will be emotionally romantic

Will start updating "THE RING THAT WASN'T MEANT TO BE MINE" sequel of jaane tu from next week till then a last request pls if possible do give me detailed comments as your suggestions will help me to make the sequel of Jaane tu all the more beautiful

Love- Divya (aka Piya)

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Posted: 12 years ago
Just BEAUTIFUL ⭐️

Maaneet went for their 3rd honeymoon to a place where no one can know their superstar status 😳

Everything sooo beautifully narrated 😃
Superb .!!

This FF is close to my heart too as this was first story i started to read in GF !!

Will be waiting for update of jaane tu season 2 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Once again a beautiful epilogue to a beautiful emotional svtory. Loved it. You are one poetic writer
Eagerly waiting for the finishing of your other FFs
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Divya,
I know that U must be wanting detailed cmnt on the part but trust me coz I m genuine in sayin this,that I so overwhelmed to read d epi,that I really short of words.Maaneet is so close to my heart that smtimes my definition for love is only 'Maaneet'.Ppl call me stupid for being crazy over a fictional couple but I cant help it.

So I wud jst like to quote ur lines coz they only replicte my feelings and I wud 'Thank u' to have written it.

" As Maaneet submitted each other in
a soul searing hug destiny proudly
declared Storms might come, fate
might be cruel, and difficulties
might introduce a terrible wound
yet their LOVE WILL ALWAYS BE
CAPABLE TO ADD THE PERFECT
HEALING TOUCH IN ALL
SITUATIONS OF LIFE.

FAIRYTALES CAN EXIST IN REAL
LIFE AS CUPID RENAMED THE
MOST EPIC FAIRYTALE AS
MAANEET...
TODAY THE JOURNEY MIGHT END
BUT IN IN ALL AGES TO COME THE
NAME, THE LOVE AND THE MAGIC
OF MAANEET WILL REMAIN
ETERNAL AS TRUE LOVE LEAVES
ITS IMPRINTS IN THE HEART
WHICH CAN NEVER FADE...
MAANEET FOREVER..."
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Posted: 12 years ago
love it 3rd anniversary maneet 3rd honeymoon place was beautiful so was pics



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Posted: 12 years ago
Bo hooo...😭my fav fan fic has come to to an end...
Piyu...ye achchi baat nahi hai...moi really gonna miss FF a lot...😭but koi baat nahi we are getting the sequel na...😳I am sure it will as good as this one...😳

BTW the epilogue was a treat ... the opening lines that Geet had penned down in her diary were beautiful...loved the destinations that you had picked for their honeymoon...😳moi never know about these places...😳.their journey has been full of ups and downs...and finally Geet's pure love won in the end...and piyu you are right magic of Maaneet is indeed eternal...

Edited by namita25 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update dear thanks 4 this lovely ff
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful epilogue...Fantastic update👏👏
Maaneet -3rd honeymoon.😳...Loved maan surprise,Geet confession...⭐️ ⭐️
Maaneet moment so romantic and beautifull.😳🤢..Wonderfully written👍🏼
Lovely ending❤️
Thanks for giving beautiful story😳
Waiting for season2
Thanks for pm dear😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Anther beautiful story ended 2day..piya di jane tu is nt only love story bt it is perfect story of sacrifce,divine love,passion ,believe nd madness..poems r too gd in epi,..their hm desti.is v awazing..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum epilogue
u had define d love in most beautiful way
i dnt knw abt love much
bt when i read ur FF i got d definition
thanksss n congraz 4 season 2
😭😊
1ce again this FF was d best
luv u

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