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Posted: 12 years ago
dat was one lovely update dear
thanx fr d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
i love asr the predator! and ganesh is equally opposite and sweet :)))
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Posted: 12 years ago
What a lovely analysis Rashmi...

Sorry for being late...

I have intense feelings of love: "Ardour" for all the works of Smita and their interpretations by you...

Way to go... I love your quotes and the analysis of each update...

Thanks for the PM and once again sorry for the late reply...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for the delay Smita... caught in family visiting...

Love the update as always.. their mehndi gives both the couples a chance to be with each other and show their love in all aspects of their relationship..

The jealousy of Khushi when Arnav wants "C" written on his hand and the scene that follows is bitter sweet and hilarious...

Their love shines out so well in your writing... And the second couple Ganesh and Anamika have also progressed to a level of trust and intimacy.. The trust was always there but this one is more between the two of them alone..

Thanks for such a lovely story and the fabulous interpretations by Rasmi.. Thanks for the PM Rashmi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
BACK AGAIN! I'M ON BREAK FROM IF FOR A MONTH! BUT COME OCCASIONALLY TO CLEAR MY PM BOX! 😆

APOLOGIES FOR THE DELAYS.. PLEASE BARE WITH LATE COMMENTS FOR A MONTH!

HERE'S MY VISHESH TIPPANI on Chapter 40, 41, 42 (1) and 42 (2).


Part 40...

It was hilarious!!! Mami's GHAGRA DANCE! Kya baat hai! 😉 Now Khushi telling Arnav that they're to dance next! 😆

"Are they... are they always so... so mischievous?" Anamika asked Arnav.

Khushi answered for him. "What does Arnavji know? He spends all his time in the office." She smiled at him. He smiled in response. "They can be naughtier than this!" Khushi declared her faith in the never-ending talents of her new family. "And when they join forces with the Guptas... Anamikaji, you have no idea what they can get up to!" she warned.

The other three chuckled.

A TRUE FACT INDEED! 🤣

And the way Khushi broke the News of the Next Dance to be their's was CUTE! 😳

Khushi looked at Arnav's plate. It was still full.

"Arnavji, eat well. It will be our turn to dance now." Khushi cautioned him.

"Excuse me?" Arnav was all wide eyes and raised eyebrows.

"It is no use my excusing you, Arnavji. Buaji, Anjaliji, Naniji, & Mamiji will force us on stage, mark my words. In fact, if they don't, I will cut off my hair!" Khushi was that sure of her family's devious brain.

Anamika & Ganesh hid their smiles at the exchange between the unlikely pair.

"I don't know how to dance." Arnav said shortly.

"Koi baat nahi, Arnavji. You can learn." Khushi smiled as she popped a piece of jalebi in to her mouth.

"Learn? Now?" Arnav asked. "Don't you think we have left it a tad too late to learn, Khushi Kumari Gupta?" Arnav asked mildly.

Khushi pushed a full poori in to his mouth. "It is no use worrying about that, Arnavji. If Ganeshji can dance, you can too."

Ganesh nodded fervently.

Anamika looked at ASR's horrified expression & burst out laughing.

Khushi patted his back as Arnav choked over the food, saying, "It is alright, Arnavji."

Anamika & Ganesh had to look away to stop themselves from howling in laughter.

That was SOOO ADORABLE! ❤️

A FUN-FILLED UPDATE! 👏

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Part 41...

I JUST CANNOT SAY ANYTHING FOR THIS CHAPTER OTHER THAN...

"MESMERIZING, STUNNING, FANTABULOUS"

This was Truly the most Amazing Chapter! I relived everymoment of the 'Teri Meri Dance' of IPKKND Dayz!



Thank you for this TRULY AMAZING CHAPTER!

P.S.: I can't highlight anything in this Chapter, because I LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT! ❤️

But the best past was..

They stood looking at each other, lost to the world, till thunderous applause brought them back to their senses.

"I love you, Khushi." Arnav said in her ear.

"I know." she smiled at him.

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Part 42 (1)...

OMG! Gaurav telling Ganesh to watch movies with Khushi so that he could learn to GATECRASH the Mehendi Function! 🤣

That was AWESOME! 👏 😆

NK's IDEA TO BRING HIS NANNAV HOME WAS FANTASTIC! 👍🏼

"Nannav, it is a shame that you aren't here. Khushiji is here. She is looking beautiful in a green lehenga..." he paused, smiling.

Arnav swallowed.

"She was asking for you, and Di was teasing her, saying that you had left her alone and gone away. But it is OK. You have work to do. How can Nannav Singh Raizada waste half a day staring at his gorgeous bride writing his name on her palm with henna?" NK teased.

Arnav cut the call.

NK looked at his watch. "Nannav will be here in 30 mins. I bet you a packet of Lays."

*Bet you a Packet of Lays* Gosh! NK I LOVE YOU! ❤️

Arnav Mesmerized by Khushi's Beauty once he got home! Well.. Khushi was looking GORGEOUS I must admit! 😳

WHAT?? They plan to send Scooby down??? 😲 😆

Awww.. Nani heard the conversation and invited them to the function! 🤗

"It is a family function, and you needn't be kept out. I told the guests that our family wouldn't be complete without you."

Awww.. The Mehendi Scene was WOW!!! 😃 😳 ☺️ ❤️

But Arnav & Khushi heard none of it. They were looking at each other.

"Are you going to write my name on your palm?" Arnav whispered in her ear.

Khushi smiled. "Why should I write your name, Arnavji? I will write Salman Khanji's name"

Arnav's eyebrows rocketed.

"I am marrying you. Not Salman Khan." he claimed.

"Acha?" the minx asked. "Looks like I will have to settle for you." she sighed.

Arnav glowered.

"Will you write my name on your hand?" Khushi asked, a smile twinkling in her eyes.

"Ofcourse not." Arnav got his own back.

Khushi glared at him, and turned away from him. She told the mehendi lady, "Please write LGR on my hand."

The lady & Arnav stared at her.

"Laad Governor Rakshas." Khushi clarified.

Arnav looked away to hide a smile.

Haaye!!! Mar Jawaan! 😳


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Part 42 (2)...

Aww.. Awww and more Awww!!! ❤️

Arnav teasing Khushi with all her WIERD Names! 😆 😳 Aashiq Singh Raizada is getting Naughtier by the day! 😛 😉

Then The Tom and Jerry Run! 😆 😳

And the BEDROOM ROMANCE! ☺️

HIGHLIGHTS:

Arnav ran into his room, knowing that he could be sure of privacy there. Khushi, unsuspecting, walked into the trap. As soon as she was in the centre of the room, Arnav dashed to the door and locked it.

Khushi stood looking at him, her breath caught in her chest, her breathing suspended. The scheming, devious, crooked…. Arnav Singh Raizada! She could not think of any other derogatory word at that point of time.

He stood looking at her, a predatory look in his eyes, his gaze roaming over her alluring form in the green lehenga & red dupatta. Khushi gulped and tried to cover her waist with the dupatta, trying to move it over herself with nudges of her arms. Her hands were totally useless. She glowered at the mehendi.

Arnav smiled.

Khushi frowned. She mistrusted that smile of his.

As she watched, he began to walk towards her on slow but deliberate feet. Her eyes widened. His left foot… his right… then his left… his right… Khushi looked at her useless hands, and with a huff, turned and ran out of the room through the door that opened to the poolside.

"Khushi…" he called as he ran after her.

She circled the pool, trying to keep maximum distance between them. He Devi Maiyya, He Devi Maiyya, she chanted, as she ran in a clockwise direction. Arnav changed his route, and tried to reach her by taking the anti-clockwise path. She turned and ran away from him.
The edge of the dupatta that had been tucked in the waistband of her lehenga fell away, exposing the slim, creamy lines of her waist.

Arnav swallowed hard.

Khushi grit her teeth. She had 2 useless hands, a lover on the prowl, and a dupatta that refused to stay on her body! How was she to manage? She lowered her eyes to see if there was any way she could repair the damage.

This was the chance he had been waiting for. He moved in for the kill. Before Khushi could say, "Arnavji!", he was close to her. So close that she could feel his breath on her cheek.

She glanced up, startled.

"Now where will you go?" he asked, his voice a mere thread.

Khushi looked into his eyes, her breath coming in choppy waves.

"Arnavji…" she whispered.

"Hhmmm?" he asked, his lips coming closer and closer to her.

Khushi tried to move back, but his black recliner blocked her path.

She tried to slip away, but his hands clasped her shoulders, making it impossible for her to move an inch.

"My hands…." Khushi whispered. "The mehendi…"

"You don't need your hands to kiss me." he whispered back.

Khushi blushed. "I… I am not going to…" she paused.

"No?" Arnav asked. "Then I am afraid you are not going to leave this room." he smirked.

Khushi stared at him.

"Kiss me." he invited in his bedroom voice. Khushi gulped and gasped for air. "Then you can leave. Otherwise…"

Khushi looked into his wicked, chocolate brown eyes. How dare he look at her like that? How could he smile at her like that? He knew it made her knees feel weak and her body tremble. He was deliberately trying to give her a heart attack.

Khushi looked at his lips. The sinfully delicious curves beckoned her. Her own lips trembled.

Slowly, she moved closer to him. Her hot eyes lingered on his lips. He waited, his heart in his mouth, for the sweet touch.

Khushi fell on him, ravaging his defences, plundering his lips, taking her fill of the hard curves, pressing herself against him.

Arnav felt his heart stop, and then race at breakneck speed.

The hunter became the hunted.



EXCELLENT UPDATES! 👏


@Smita: Love you sooo much for the updates... 🤗 Sorry for late comments! Please bare with the delays for another month!



@Rashmi: Thanks for the PMs! 😉 Love you! 🤗 Awesome Interpretation for all the missed chapters!


Continue soon! Desperately waiting for Next Chapter!

Loads of love, ❤️

Mrina 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
okay am really worried nw 😲 no updates for so long...is everythin okay ??
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hope. You both are doing well...take care..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Smitaji kahani ko aage badhaao,
Hamsab ki pyaas bujaao.
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Posted: 12 years ago
At long last end of weekend...we will get an update today...hopefully...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just thought of dropping by...

Any updates coming?

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