Smitar's: Finding Khushi #10 Link to #11 on Pg 1

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Aww that was one beautiful update, everything was laughing, dancing, having lots of fun, just superb. Thanks for the PM rashmi, your interpretations made the update more fun to read, very nice!

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Hetal

@Divyahet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Kya damdaar and dhinchak Item pesh ki hai maa badaulat aapne Smitaji!

well maine bhi iss updatewa ko aapn sine se laga liya hai...kya hai ki yeh Smitaji ka jod hai aasani se chhutega nahi...

truly an awesome update...
the entry of Buaji and Amma ...
angdaai if Buaji...
their thumkaas and latkaas...oh my God...well your writing skills always give me such a pleasure that I can't be able to put the right words ...

The entry,the stage,the crowd, the expression of each person and the dance ...you wrote it very well that I can visualize the whole scene and believe me I was there ...in the dream land enjoying the Sangeet of Arshi.The Dance...😛

the best parts of this update...

Arnav was unable to hold his pleasure and chuckled...
His heart was in his eyes when Khushi was enjoying her Amma and buaji's dance and she clapped loudly with the shrill whistle.

Anamika and Ganesh's dance and their nakhraas...how lovely..
All the members were dancing with them...
Akash could not believe his eyes what he see...
Gaurav and Scooby...also joined...

"Ganeshji can dance?I never knew, Arnavji."
"I am sure he too didn't know."
and the last line.."Mohini Mami's ghagra on Delhi shehar."
"Delhi shehar maan maaro ghagro jo ghumyon!" this is the song I guess!

well eagerly waiting for another superb update.

Reshu the interpretation of this update was beautiful yes it's "OHANA"
I am loving it.

thank you so much for the pms dear.
take care both of you.

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sujata5

@sujata5

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Super amazing fun-tastic update Smita!!!!

Was in splits imagining Buaji and Amma dancing on"Fevicol Se"...

Their love encompasses all in their fold... Even the Mighty Diva of the fashion world is not immune to their charm...as their new bond are formed and strengthened...

Waiting for the next fun-tastic update Smita...

Thanks for the PM Rashmi...

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sujata5

@sujata5

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

What a wonderful analysis Rashmi!!!!

You have captured and expanded the true meaning of family..."ohana" which is portrayed in these updates...Bravo!!!!

"It is a part of Hawaiian culture. Ohana means family in an extended sense of the term including blood-related, adoptive or intentional. It can also refer to a close group of friends or class that resembles a family."

Ganesh, Anamika with Gaurav and Scooby have become an intrinsic part of the Guptas and the Raizadas.. Where one begins and ends is anyone's guess...

Thanks for the PM.. Waiting to more ..