Arshi SS: BLO(Shitall Track)#2 FINAL NOTE PG43 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
touchy updt😭


can't sto reading it'''


updt soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
amazing updTE
FEEL LIKE CRYING
PLEASE CONTINUE SOON
THnks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
hi pallavi,
awesome.
so intense and my god, how many angles you covered from the same incident s when arnav ignored khushi, good that you covered the point when he broke their picture, khushi was absolutely right, their life together is like this. For Arnav, it was always about him, he and his selfish attitude, he thinks that can hurt khushi whenever he wants and ask sorry, so that she will give in, in the show, it was shown that she does not have any self respect, will take all the shit from him and come back love him more and more,

i am so delighted to see something which I never got to see in the show. thanks for this wonderful fiction, please pm me the OS link also that you mentioned at the note.

till the chapter 8 comes, i dont know how many times I will read this chapter, because each chapter has been read by me more umpty number of times.

loved it and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Yesss...I loved how Khushi voiced all her feelings...every hurtful behavior she received from Arnav. It's such a relief to see Khushi expressing her emotions instead of just hiding those with forced smiles and Jelabis.

Please give me the link of your new OS.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Hey dear how r u ?
thanks ton for pm ...
awesome update just love it ... U did a justice to khushi's character ... Arnav should understand her nd soon take some step ... Well i still want arshi to petchup soon n live happily ever after with their child ... Waiting for next part ...
yar plz update UB soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
pallavi,

i dont want you to finish the story in rush, like you can take the story as you have planned its further plot and pace, till now you have done 100% justice to every character, giving their POV irrespective of right or wrong.

I have complete faith in your plot and story further, so do as you have planned to end this story.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Feel so sorry for both of them. Please make their suffering go away
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
emotional update heart breaking poor Khushi but truth full she should have spoken up instead of taking the crap she should have told him her insecurities he kept asking and she kept brushing it aside i feel bad for her but she should have demanded her right spoken to him should him what was happening instead of being a self sacrificing and stifling all her pain i feel sorry for both of them both ,both are miserable apart they need each other to heal and Arnav is getting sick away from her both dying in their own way awesome update thanks for the pm emotional update beautifully done

MAN RULES

AT LAST A GUY HAS TAKEN THE TIME TO WRITE THIS ALL DOWN
FINALLY, the guys' side of the story. ( I MUST ADMIT, IT'S PRETTY GOOD.)

WE ALWAYS HEAR 'THE RULES' FROM THE FEMALE SIDE
NOW HERE ARE THE RULES FROM THE MALE SIDE

THESE ARE OUR RULES!

PLEASE NOTE. THESE ARE ALL NUMBERED #1 ON PURPOSE!

1. MEN ARE NOT MIND READERS.

1. LEARN TO WORK THE TOILET SEAT. YOU'RE A BIG GIRL. IF IT'S UP, PUT IT DOWN. WE NEED IT UP, YOU NEED IT DOWN. YOU DON'T HEAR US COMPLAINING ABOUT YOU LEAVING IT DOWN.

1. CRYING IS BLACKMAIL.

1. ASK FOR WHAT YOU WANT. LET US BE CLEAR ON THIS ONE:

SUBTLE HINTS DO NOT WORK!
STRONG HINTS DO NOT WORK!
OBVIOUS HINTS DO NOT WORK!
JUST SAY IT!

1. YES AND NO ARE PERFECTLY ACCEPTABLE ANSWERS TO ALMOST EVERY QUESTION.

1.. COME TO US WITH A PROBLEM ONLY IF YOU WANT HELP SOLVING IT. THAT'S WHAT WE DO. SYMPATHY IS WHAT YOUR GIRLFRIENDS ARE FOR.

1. ANYTHING WE SAID 6 MONTHS AGO IS INADMISSIBLE IN AN ARGUMENT. IN FACT, ALL COMMENTS BECOME NULL AND VOID AFTER 7 DAYS.

1. IF YOU THINK YOU'RE FAT, YOU PROBABLY ARE. DON'T ASK US.

1. IF SOMETHING WE SAID CAN BE INTERPRETED TWO WAYS AND ONE OF THE WAYS MAKES YOU SAD OR ANGRY, WE MEANT THE OTHER ONE.

1. YOU CAN EITHER ASK US TO DO SOMETHING OR TELL US HOW YOU WANT IT DONE. NOT BOTH.
IF YOU ALREADY KNOW BEST HOW TO DO IT, JUST DO IT YOURSELF.

1. WHENEVER POSSIBLE, PLEASE SAY WHATEVER YOU HAVE TO SAY DURING COMMERCIALS.

1. CHRISTOPHER COLUMBUS DID NOT NEED DIRECTIONS AND NEITHER DO WE...

1. ALL MEN SEE IN ONLY 16 COLORS, LIKE WINDOWS DEFAULT SETTINGS..
PEACH, FOR EXAMPLE, IS A FRUIT, NOT A COLOR. PUMPKIN IS ALSO A FRUIT. WE HAVE NO IDEA WHAT MAUVE IS.

1. IF WE ASK WHAT IS WRONG AND YOU SAY 'NOTHING,' WE WILL ACT LIKE NOTHING'S WRONG. WE KNOW YOU ARE LYING, BUT IT IS JUST NOT WORTH THE HASSLE.

1. IF YOU ASK A QUESTION YOU DON'T WANT AN ANSWER TO, EXPECT AN ANSWER YOU DON'T WANT TO HEAR..

1. WHEN WE HAVE TO GO SOMEWHERE, ABSOLUTELY ANYTHING YOU WEAR IS FINE...REALLY.

1.. DON'T ASK US WHAT WE'RE THINKING ABOUT UNLESS YOU ARE PREPARED TO DISCUSS SUCH TOPICS AS FOOTBALL OR MOTOR SPORTS.

1. YOU HAVE ENOUGH CLOTHES.

1 .. YOU HAVE TOO MANY SHOES.

1. I AM IN SHAPE. ROUND IS A SHAPE!

1.. THANK YOU FOR READING THIS. YES, I KNOW, I HAVE TO SLEEP ON THE COUCH TONIGHT.. BUT DID YOU KNOW MEN REALLY DON'T MIND THAT? IT'S LIKE CAMPING...

PASS THIS TO AS MANY MEN AS YOU CAN - TO GIVE THEM A LAUGH...

PASS THIS TO AS MANY WOMEN AS YOU CAN - TO GIVE THEM A BIGGER LAUGH, BECAUSE ITS TRUE!

CREDIT GOES TO THE UP LOADER
Edited by dumas - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
It was so intense. Well written. But I would like to disagree with a few points. Yes I agree Khushi was immensely hurt and no wife deserves it. Yes Arnav has ignored her which he shouldn't have. But Arnav did ask her time and again if there is anything bothering her. He has given her the respect which he never gave to anyone. The ruthless, arrogant Arnav Singh Raizada bowed down his head infront of his wife Khushi which no one could have even dare to dream happening. He has given her the opportunity to ask anything she felt like about his past and he readily gave her all the answers. He has warned her against keeping Sheetal and her son at their house and when she did he did try to make it clear that there was nothing serious between them. But Khushi chose not to fully believe him. I hold the Raizada family more responsible than Arnav for Khushi's insecurities. Arnav who knew Khushi thought that what he said to her would have been enough for her. The comparisons that the family members made were never done in front of him. He didn't know how much Khushi was facing. Sheetal left clues ONLY to Khushi of which Arnav didn't know. The Sheetal track was a complete character assassination of Arnav and Khushi. The Arnav who felt Khushi's hurt even before they were married without even looking at her , was made not feeling her pain any more. Yes he did feel something was wrong but chose to ignore it. On the other hand Khushi who had immense trust on her Arnavji chose to not trust him and go ahead with her doubts. "Shayad wo bhool gaye honge"----was one of her dialogues to justify her actions. Arnav Singh Raizada was NEVER like that. Nor was Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada. Khushi is forgiving in her nature. Whatever may have happened one thing she can't bear is her Arnavji in pain. She has to bear a lot of pain, but she always put Arnav first. Khushi would never put herself first and ignore Arnav's painful cries and his health. I think in this story Khushi is a little bit over reacting. The purpose should be to make Buaji and Khushi's family lashing out and making the Raizadas what they r doing. Not Khushi lashing out on Arnav. It didn't go well with me that Khushi could behave in this way with anyone let alone Arnav and decide to separate their baby from one of its parents. She of all the people knows what it means to leave without a father. She could never do that to her own child and her Arnavji. Khushi will do any such thing only if it is needed to save Arnav's or their baby's life. Not otherwise.

I m extremely sorry if I have sounded rude. It was not my intention. Its what I feel. I would like to see Khushi's family against the Raizadas and Khushi protecting her family i.e. Arnav and the Raizadas. The goal should be to make them understand. Thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
woww...nice...
too emotional...😭😭😭
poor arhi both have suffered to the max......
i dnt wont it to end it in haste take ur time and give us a fabulous updte...😃
updte soon...
thankx for pm...😃
Edited by sushna - 12 years ago

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