Arshi SS: BLO(Shitall Track)#2 FINAL NOTE PG43

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shanthiva

@shanthiva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Hi dear,

Wonderful update.. Please dont end this so soon.. I am happy that even though khushi is hurt she had the courage to voice her thoughts. Good Shot khushi making arnav think how he would feel if she ignored him..

Please give me the link of ur OS... And thanks for the PM...

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SARA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Amazing chapter …. Very nice written excellent work

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Archana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

I loved the update ,doing a great job of showing how khushie felt ,your on the rt track ,as in the show she was not allowed to develop as her own right they did not show her inner insecurities ,I glad she brought out all her feelings of how she felt by him and his fly ,I would give her a couple of years to grow and become strong then reunite them ,as he needs to change how he defines loving someone form possessing someone ,take your time ,you have lots of points and also show anjalie realizing that she needs to let go of her brother and start a life of her own ,make Mami change ,too as get Akashi to leave shantivan with payal and live independently ,

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pari_goyal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

awesome

not rude with arnav more

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Jaan_Arshi

@Jaan_Arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Excellent update... felt bad for arshi...both r suffering badly..their innocent baby too... 😭
I hope things go will soon...
Waiting for next...

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rini_kat

@rini_kat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

nice update... But Khusi and Arnav are blowing things out of proportion.In the process both r suffering...Here I understand Arnav is fault but Khusi too never demanded her rights.she just accepted things just they r...and so everyone took her as granted. I believe when one feels that he/she is not getting their rights then the person must fight and demand for rights.not to wait when anyone notices and give the rights.

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SangArshian4eva

@SangArshian4eva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

it was an emotional update

really feeling bad for arnav and khushi.

khushi's words r breaking arnav's heart more.

khushi is planning to end this relationship

I hope arnav is fine.

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

that was awesome!! and heart wrenching update
oh khushi.. she made arnav feel so small... he deserves it but he is so heartbroken now..
damn but i cant see both them in pain
i like the pace.. so continue soon
thanks for the pm

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Angel13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

fantastic update

poor Khushi

i feel bad for her

i also feel bad for Arnav

but whatever Khushi said is right

but also it's not only Arnav's fault

Khuhsi also should have voiced her rights from the start

can't be so slefless like her and then become like this

Relationship is from the both side balancing it then it becomes a relationship..if khuhsi had voiced her feelings and rights, today' she wouldn't have been taken for granted nore this would have happened

now she wants to end the relationship

but hope you make her realize her mistakes too

thanks for pm

continue soon

Edited by Angel13 - 12 years ago