Arshi SS: BLO(Shitall Track)#2 FINAL NOTE PG43

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#181

well i agree with you and the reader there
its right we cant just expect her to forget all this
and why should she
has he given her any reason to stay no he didnt

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Barun_Addict

@Barun_Addict

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Cupcake🤗

I dnt want Khushi to forgive Arnav this easily

I want Arnav to suffer more

cz the way he treated her was not at all acceptable...

He has to realise her importance in his life

I know u n trust u

Whatevr u'll do...

I m with you !!

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anu_j_menon

@anu_j_menon

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: Barun_Addict
Cupcake🤗
I dnt want Khushi to forgive Arnav this easily
I want Arnav to suffer more
cz the way he treated her was not at all acceptable...
He has to realise her importance in his life

I know u n trust u
Whatevr u'll do...
I m with you !!

me also agree wd ur blushypie...😉😉

me also wd u in this...😃😃

but please do update soon...😃😃

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beenish

@beenish248

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

i totaly understand khushi pov that she is scread for his child future n what happen with her in rm its totaly unforgivable We have full faith in u yarr plzz continue story as per ur wish i have issue .. Waiting ... :))

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zohakhan7

@zohakhan7

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

I totally understand khushi's fear
we all have full faith in u
do continue soon
waiting for another story also

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

First of all, I want to say, that you have done justice to the story so far, so please do not hesitate. I have FULL confidence in you as the writer of this story.

I agree with everything mz.brar wrote. The only thing I don't agree with is Kushi should not have to bear ANY onus for and on this relationship. Whether she should have said something or not, whether he asked her or not - the way he behaved with her was unacceptable. And why the hell would a husband ask what is wrong when he is making merry with is ex in front of his wife?? Is he clueless? A business tycoon with no brains? And before anyone jumps to defend him on matters of the heart and all the excuses, business is a matter of knowing people. To become a successful business person, one has to gauge people. So how could he not know what his wife is feeling? This, from a guy who could feel her, her emotions, and what her eyes spoke!

What she is doing is absolutely correct. What Arnav did was not only disgusting, it was downright criminal. He committed an emotional crime! Who the hell treats their newly wedded wife like this?

He never behaved like a husband to her. Never gave her companionship. Never stretched out the hand of friendship. Never accorded her the respect she deserved as his wife, lover, friend, bahu of the Raizadas. Didn't even treat her as a human being in her own right.

Yes, I do want them to be together. But there is no way in hell, he should get right now. He needs to go through the loss as she did, otherwise, he will never appreciate her. He needs to know what it feels like to see something and never have it, even though life depends on that. It's not that she should deny him his rights as a father, after all, as an orphan she should know how it feels. But definitely, she should deny him of herself. Physically, emotionally, mentally and spiritually.

So what if Kushi invited Sheetal to stay at RM. Does that mean he makes eyes at the guest? What does that say about him? How would any woman take it if her husband made merry with a female guest? And what if Sheetal had not turned out to be after his money. Would he still be making merry with her?? Where would his so called wife be then????????

The CVs of this show completely lost it when they changed the characters like they did. I mean, we could at least digest it, albeit with a lot of difficulty, when they changed Kushi from a character of strength and morals to an unmoral, dithering idiot. But when they started tampering with the character of ASR... Well, I could write a thesis on this!! And a lot has already been written about the CVs and their capabilities, so I won't go into that.

However, you are a different matter. And thus far, you have handled this manner in the way it should be. So just carry on, dear.

I have the utmost confidence in you.

Waiting anxiously to read the angst of ASR, further.

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Love.life2

@Love.life2

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Thnx for d pm.

This post by mz brar ws awesome cudnt put it better.

Bt love the way the story is moving.

I feel khushi is justified in her stand. yes if u think practically tht she's hving a baby so she shud go 2 arnav coz how will she handle all this on her own. bt then if arnav is repenting he shud b there for her even if she does nt wnt 2 go bck 2 him. he cn b there as the father of d kid cnt he?? after all he did a damn good job with being there for aarav who ws nt even his son.

Frankly more thn arnav i felt his family is too blame ffor encouraging shitall n also khushi for nt voicing her objection bt now tht she hs stood up for herself earlier she opposed asr bt when it came 2 emotions she melted bt now she hs 2 for her child.

Khushi shud knew better coz she is always treated like an outsider then she wud nt wnt her kid 2 grow up feeling like an outsider in his own house. if arnav again behaved the same way her kid wud b messed up too. he'd turn jus like arnav hating his father or like anjali who feels unloved.

Arnav needs to get his act together he cnt sit moping around n waiting for khushi to forgive him he hs 2 own up for his mistakes which he dint hve much too repent coz khushi always forgve him bt coz he's gonna be a father n he hs 2 prove tht he's nt arnav malik his father's son.

Worsst part abt this whole shitall track ws arnav of all people who hd 1st hand exp of wht his father did n then shyam shud hve never let another woman get into his life even if it ws ex. tho khushi invited her it ws his decision 2 let her. arnav being asr cud hve arranged for an accomdation for her n as far as shitall being alone wid her kid she managed so far n also she being a single mother is nt their responsibilty.

Most of all khushi brought this on if u see she ws curious abt aarav being similar to Arnav so she wnted Shitall 2 stay so she cud get 2 f truth which ws a whole set up coz shitall knw khushi n she played on her mind.

Neway updt soon this n ur other stories too.. waiting for them.

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kshubhangi

@kshubhangi

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

please finish this story first

give a closure

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nagina

@jeb1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#189

I love khusui

Fell bad for arnab

update soon

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Amy

@mz.brar

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#190

seriously women!! u scared the living daylight out of me!!

My policies always been quality over quantity(or time in this matter) So dont worry cuz well be here when your ready with the next chapter😃

I just realized that if im gona write that much i should make my writing bigger

Edited by mz.brar - 12 years ago

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