Arshi SS: BLO(Shitall Track)#2 FINAL NOTE PG43 - Page 20

I know rt now that khushie is in a vulnerable state as a expecting mom ,women emotions during pregnancy fluctuate a lot due to the changes in their body ,and they need to feel cherished ,now more than ever ,I feel you shd give her a friend who objective is to help khushie become independent and encourage to go to college ,and study further ,and develop a skill or let her go bk to Lucknow for a couple of years ,separate Arnav from the riazadia s for sometime to realisze how dependent he was on his wife ,make him learn to appreciate what she did for all of them .,they all need to come out of the bubble they been living in ,face reality ,hope this input may help in how you want the story to go fwd ,you done a wonderful job keep on it looking fwd to your nxt update.

I agree with your view on Khushi and Arnav; that is the main reason that got me hooked to this SS.
I really feel Arnav needed to hear and know the power of words, especially negative words towards oneself by the person you love, repeatedly. Whenever Arnav is successful in keeping Khushi with him, he takes her and her love for him and his family for granted and whenever she is away from him, we have seen him to be extremely passionate and attentive toward her. It doesn't mean that I want Arnav to be a 'Joru ka Gulam'; but his negligence is hurtful.

Coming to what Arnav should do... actually I have no proper idea to that as well. Coz coming to Khushi, every promise he makes to her is broken by him later on. Trust is a huge factor twixt them. How do you trust a person who repeatedly breaks the same? Although Khushi is a very trusting and forgiving person but there's a limit to everything. Arnav needs to learn humility. His arrogance is his main culprit.

Also I wish to see Khushi self dependent. Self dependence to a woman boosts her.



These were my views. Wish you all the best for your future writing... 😊

i trust you on this it your story i just can't wait to see what you come up with

thnxxx for d note pallu...

Wow nice gud explanation i agree with al ur view
updte soon
thankx 4 pm :-)

Your ideas have always been awesome..n with story also its jus mind blowing...dont let khushi forgive arnav so easily!! What he did was totally wrong..if any1 whr in khushi's place they would never forgive him..but this is arshi...so let arnav suffer more n at the end let khushi forgive him...ur doing a great job with this story...n about your new story i ll be looking forward to that..am sure even that will be good..😊

thnx 4 the note

but enough of waiting ofr updates . do it fast.

Hey thanks for the note dear