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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
nice continue soon ...hope that guy was not arjun
viloence is never justified...very painful
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey this is my ff banner created by moumi. Hope you like it.
Edited by mastmegha22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Wow megha and mumu...

Nice one...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
NIce

arye update bi de de ab!😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45



PART-1


In Mumbai
At Night


A girl is standing near the window and thinking about her fast how much she suffers. She is crying. Suddenly her phone rings and talked to someone and she is laughing and cut the call.

And she thinking that eri life main darkness hain lekin kahin koi roshni bhi hai jo mujhe hasati hain. Aaj un sab baaton ko beetain hue 5 years ho gaye hain or abh mujhe un sab cheezon ke bare main sochna nahi chahiye. Aaj main apne pairon pe khadi hu or ek acchi job hai mere pass. Itne acche dost.

I have to forgot my past life. My darkness. Abh main kamzoor nahi strong hoon. Or mujhe banna hoga.


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A far Distance
At Manali
In same Night


A man is tanding his bedroom and see a portrait and thinking about his life that he is very rich. Every girls drool over him. And he met a girl who does not have interest him but in late she has to marry him.

He dont love that girl at beginning. He always abused her. Everytime he beat her.

He always want to torture her. But she doesnt tell anything to him.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
story start
me 1st

very nice story
a rich man means arjun
n she is riya😉 👏
Edited by lizadavidmm - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
One day he believe someone and he through her to his house and his life.

Infact he also misbehaved to her parents also.

Now he was alone. Only his father was with him who hates him to his deeds. Whatever he done to his wife.

He thinking about her how she was beautiful specially her eyes, her figure and her smile. Her nature is so kind. She always help other. Whenever someone past wrong comment to her she does not respond and not even shouted somebody.

She is such a nice girl.

She is very smart girl in studies.

He was thinking about her when someone came to his room and asking him hum kab mumbai jaa rahe hai?

That man: hum kal sham ko yaha se mumbai ke liye niklenge.

Other man: kya uska kuch pata chala?

That man: nahin lekin main aapse vada karta hoon main bahut jald usse dhoondloonga.

Other man: i hope so and left that room.

That man is thinking kaha ho tum. Kaha reh rahi ho. Tum theek to hona. Agar tum theek ho fir kyun main tumhe dhoond nahi paa raha. Janta hoon maine bahut bada ghunah kiya hain. Jiske liye tum mujhe kabhi maf na karo.

But I miss you. Please comeback to my life. Nahin rehsakta main iss bojh ke saath ki tum jaise acchi insaan ke saath maine itna boora kiya.

And he brokedown.

And somewhere the girl broke there sleep and thinking kaun tha yeh jo mujhe yaad kar raha hai. Kahin ye mera vaham to nahi. Aisa lag raha hain mera koi apna bahut dhooki hain.
Edited by mastmegha22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Both are lost there thought about eachother and in sky the fairies thinking how they reunite that couple and rain stops and aso night passed.



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Next Morning

The sunrays hit one house and give a hope of new life and day.

The girl open her eyes stretched her arms and go to bathroom to freshan upd and did there daily routine. She eat her breakfast and locked her house and take taxi to go to office.

In half an hour she reached her destination her office andpaid taxi and go inside.

Everybody wish her goodmorning. She alos wished them back with her cute and lovely dimpled smile.

She reached her conferenceroom and see a curley boy who weare specks and play with his lappy sitting there.
She wished him goodmorning and he alsoe respond back.

The girl: hey shree tum apne lappy main kya kar rahe ho.

Shree: kuch nahi ri maine ek naya game download kiya hai bas vohi khel raha hoon.

Yes the girl is ri Riya Mukherjee senior officer of ETF who have dimpled smile.


Continued soon...

Precap:
1. ETF got a case
2. Friends fight

i know this part is boring but please bear me.

Next part update after 20th june. Thankyou.

Please hit like button and comment also.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
superb banner megha and mou...!!!
the update was awsum...!!!
very interesting...!!
so the girl is riya...!!!
awww feeling bad for her... but glad she has friends which help her to move on and be strong...!!
hmm whose the guy is it arjun???
so he is feeling guilty now and going mumbai in search of her...!!!
precap is interesting...!!!
continue soon...!!!
Edited by devildiva21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: devildiva21

superb banner megha and mou...!!!

the update was awsum...!!!
very interesting...!!
so the girl is riya...!!!
awww feeling bad for her... but glad she has friends which help her to move on and be strong...!!
hmm whose the guy is it arjun???
so he is feeling guilty now and going mumbai in search of her...!!!
precap is interesting...!!!
continue soon...!!!



thanx diva for liking my baneer.
And thanx for liking my story also.
Hey vo sad girl i dont know is riya or not.
But the girl who wake early in the morning is riya.
And that guy I dont know is arjun or not.
The story will tell you.

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