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melonie

@melonie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

Hi,

Ok I really tried to keep dragging this as much as I can. Why drag?...because I didn't want to read an end to this story 😭 😭 😭 Two things I liked the best. One is the way he proposed Khushi and second is how she revealed that she is pregnant to Arnav. Such a beautiful story came to an end. I feel so sad 😭 😭 😭 You wrote it beautiful and I am glad I could be part of this beautiful journey.

Thanks for taking time to write such a wonderful story. Please do start another one soon 🤗

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zaibun un nisa

@saima4744

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#212

nice ...ss... this update is the best update of this ss.

well done.

nice ending 2.

tf pm me.

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Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#213

OMG ... WHAT WAS THAT!!!!!

ALL I CAN SAY IS ... I LOVED IT!!!

👏👏👏👏👏

Amazing ... Mind blowing ... Wonderful ... Brilliant ... Super Duper

And the list goes on!!!

I am speechless now!

But Once Again ... You Are An Amazing Writer!!!

And this ones for you ... for making my day and witing awesome stories!

Love

❤️

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#214

Awww...Such a sweet & cute SS...loved it...!!! 😳

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Farah

@LuvArnavKhushi

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal
Awww...Such a sweet & cute SS...loved it...!!! 😳

Thank you so much!! 😃

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please6

@please6

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#216

Just found this story and I'm in love with it it so nice and cute anyways loved it and Plzzz start writing a new piece of literature soon

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#217

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Edited:

What a delightful story!

I loved the journey of these two characters from hate to attraction to jealousy to affection to love to togetherness to commitment to parenthood.

It was a complete package full of wit and sarcasm. And I am a sucker for both.

I have been to Turkey and so I liked the details you included of Blue Mosque, Princes Islands, Turkish coffee, etc. It just gives a more realistic and exotic touch to the story.

One line of Arnav made me laugh really hard. When Khushi is picking up a shirt for him, he points to himself, that his body is all for her so she can select for him what she likes 😆

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#218

To be commented tomorrow :)

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Farah

@LuvArnavKhushi

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: please6
Just found this story and I'm in love with it it so nice and cute anyways loved it and Plzzz start writing a new piece of literature soon

Thank you so much for reading this! I'm glad you liked it. :D I do have my new story Unspoken if you'd like to read it.

Thank you once again for your kind comment. 😊

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Farah

@LuvArnavKhushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp
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Edited:

What a delightful story!

I loved the journey of these two characters from hate to attraction to jealousy to affection to love to togetherness to commitment to parenthood.

It was a complete package full of wit and sarcasm. And I am a sucker for both.

I have been to Turkey and so I liked the details you included of Blue Mosque, Princes Islands, Turkish coffee, etc. It just gives a more realistic and exotic touch to the story.

One line of Arnav made me laugh really hard. When Khushi is picking up a shirt for him, he points to himself, that his body is all for her so she can select for him what she likes 😆

Thank you sooo much! Aha, I had to do quite a lot of research for attractions and all.

Aha, I personally like easy going characters so Arnav had to be that as opposed to a rough and tough one we usually read about. 😊

Thanks again!