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You guys are just amazing. This is one of the best collaborations I've read.
I will once again say that Sheetal is delusional. It seems like she was just looking for a slight in Khushi's character and stuck to it like a leech. She's created Khushi as such a villain and that assumption is going to come back to bite her in the hoo-haa. Because you know what they say about assuming? It makes an "ass" out of "u" and "me" except that it's only going to make an ass out of Sheetal.
As for Arnav running into her arms...š¤£
I loved that little detail where you made Sheetal describe Khushi's laughter as "shrill" and "ghastly." It is extremely unlikely that Sheetal will call it melodious as Arnav does. Everything is relative.
Arnav is such a romantic under that glare and 'What the!'-ing all over the place. He took Khushi to a dhaba! And it was hygenic! Only Arnav Singh Raizada can do the impossible. These two are finally, finally, finally a unit after such a long time! They're just not meant to be separate beings. Arnav is taking care of Khushi's happiness, Khushi is taking care of Arnav's happiness (no pun intended).
I was so happy when Arnav did not let go of Khushi when Sheetal found them but I do wish Khushi had returned that gesture instead of trying to separate herself from Arnav. I understand her being embarrassed at being caught in such a compromising position but she has to show Sheetal that only Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada has haq over Arnav Singh Raizada. She is the one who belongs in Arnav's arms. She has to be "I am woman. Hear me roar!" on Sheetal.
Although not outright, but she is going about handling Sheetal subtly. I am so glad she questioned Simran because now, at least, she suspects that Sheetal may have ulterior motives.
Brilliant chapter!
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