Arhi FF (Collab):Dire Consequences Thread 2 Pg 141

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#761

that was one very sweet update and loved the fact that it was just about them and no intruder like sheetal was included in this one!

sheetal may try as much as she wants but she ll never be able to seperate them. they are destined to be together for eternity and together with the support and love of their families they have the support of devi maiya! n before her will everyone is powerless!

really happy that they are back together in every sense of the world:)))

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rashmi

@morning_dews

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#762

wow...!!!
so well written...!!!!
loved the update...!!! Its awesome..! :))

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#763

Amazing and wonderful update, absolutely loved it.

A brilliant addition to the collaboration,

Wow, Arnav actually Khushi to the Mandir and she was so surprised, lovely idea.

Love the way Khushi kissed Arnav's hand, just to reassure him everything is fine.

Loved the Mandir part, Arnav actually joined her inside and also saw Khushi blushing, so sweet.

So Arnav wanting to take Khushi out for dinner, can't wait to read how the dinner date goes.

Nani also teasing Khushi, was nice.

Loved the last part of the update, both filling the car with laughter.

The update was so beautiful, a fantastic read.

Eagerly waiting for the next part,

Thanks for the PM and continue soon please xx

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mbbsrocks

@mbbsrocks

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#764

this was th first Happy update of thid ff till now..

loved it

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#765

beautiful chapter...that was indeed what they needed...a little time for themselves ...to get back to whatever they were for each other...the emotions were genuine and lovely... now let the storm come... nothing can part them... :)

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Abyan

@Abyan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#766

As always another wonderful update... loved the way he brings her to the one place that has put a smile in her face...and somewhere she finds comfort and solace..and he knew what the place meant to her and even though he does not share the same sentiment he brings her there for her ...for them and their togetherness that is something holds them forever ...

Loved how she understands what she means to him and will always do, and his actions spoke volumes and conveyed so effectively what he has been trying to get her to understand ..loved their simple gesture of holding hands and a well deserved kiss are so significant in their lives at this point...and that making them more meaningful than before..surely together they will face any obstacle and overcome every challenge to emerge victorious..

that was excellent collaborative writing and with your individual work and collaboration was awesomely so amazing...well done Nidhi that was a beautiful written .. loved it...

Edited by Abyan - 12 years ago

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l.savitree

@l.savitree

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#767

Such a beautiful chapter ... love anav & khushi moment

eagerly waiting to read more

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roshaan

@roshaan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#768

beautiful full of arshi happy arshi update thats the way i like them happy n lil naughty thx for pm

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Rina

@Poisoncharm

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#769

:)...I just loved dis story... .love d coordination wid which u all d writers write...:-)...loved d latest update very much...i just can't feel dat so many writers are writing.. .it feels as if all d writers have d same emotion...hope u understood what i wanted 2 convey...i some times not gud at comments...:)

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#770

nice chapter !!! so arnav took khushi to mandir.. nice gesture.. arnav is all looking forward to have time with his khushi and khushi alone.. mandir for her and dinner for him.. nice idea arnav.. loved the update...

thanks for pm 😊