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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow! awesome...👏 Swaron stuck due to bad weather... Now that's romantic!!!😳 You're truly giving us Swaron scenes as promised... I'm so happy... But you stopped at the cliffhanger..😕 Now I just hope Sharon hasn't got hypothermia...
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Posted: 12 years ago
dont make us wait till weekend plsss
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update as usual..
my swaron are back😳
loved teasing session..
swaron are so possessive yaar😳
poor that boys n girls who got the deadly glare from swaron😆
can't wait..
update soon..
thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Ahh finally everything is back to normal.
Hehe poor swayam his mom disturbed his romance session :P
U stopped it at a wrong place indeed.
Waiting for next part eagerly
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey people, Thank u thank u thank u sooo Much for all ur lovely comments... It was seriously over-whelming... So as I promised here is the update for the weekend...
NOTE: Some of the content in this upadate may not be appropriate for individuals below 16 years of age.




Chapter 10 (b)

Swayam got no response'.. he turned back'.. he thought Sharon must have fallen asleep as she was really tired and was even napping in the car on their way back'.. But to his surprise she was not there'..

Swayam was tensed but when he heard the thunder and saw raindrop making their way down, he had a smile spread on his face'.. He stepped out to the garden at the back to the cottage and saw Sharon spreading her arms and enjoying the rain'.. She was drenched already and her anarkali had stuck on to her body showing off her prefect curves'.. He got rid of his blazer and walked up to her'. He slowly hugged her from the back and she just rested herself on his lean body'. They stated like that for a moment, their eyes closed and Sharon resting her head on his shoulder'..

{Open the link and play the song while reading...}

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LtbPP3yis2A

[Both started swaying their bodies in sync with their eyes yet closed'.]

Sharon [moving her hand from his hair to his neck and then to his nape]:

Yeh saazish hai bundon ki

Koi khwaahish hai chup chup si

Yeh saazish hai buundon ki

[She starts moving away from him and looking up feeling the raindrops on her face]

Koi khwaahish hai chup chup si

Dekho na'.. dekho na'.. dekho na'. dekho na

Swayam [moving towards her]:

Hawaa kuch haule haule

Zubaan se kya kuch bole bole

[Holds her hand and lightly pulling her towards him]

Kyun duri hai ab darmiyaan

[Moving his face closer to hers]

Dekho na... dekho na'.. dekho na'. dekho na

[The rain wasn't harsh anymore'..They then have a cute ballroom dance together but, Swayam getting a bit naughty and pulls her closer, Sharon pushing him walks backward slightly nodding her head negatively'.. Her back was bare and had goose-bump due to the blowing wind'.. He moves close to her and slowly traces his hand over her back sending shivers down her spine and pulls her closer]

Swayam [facing her]:

Phir na hawaen hongi itni besharam

Phir na dagmag dagmag honge ye kadam'.. haay [lightly taps her nose with his finger]

Phir na hawaen hongi itni besharam [walking away from her but still facing her]

Phir na dag-mag dag-mag honge ye kadam

Sharon [Putting out her hand to feel the rain drops]:

Saawan yeh seedha nahin khufiyaa bada

Kuch toh baraste hue keh raha

Swayam [Holding her palm that was stretched out, looking straight into her eyes and moving closer]:

Samjho na... Samjho na... Samjho na... Samjho na...

Sharon [locks her hands around his neck]:

Hawaa kuchh haule haule

Zubaan se kya kuchh bole bole

Kyun duri hai ab darmiyaan

Dekho na... dekho na'..

Swayam: Dekho na'. dekho na

[She rested her head on his chest'. He was holding her protectively'.. Both swaying their bodies slowly'.. Sharon lifts up her head and looks up into his chocolate brown orbs'.. Both were lost in each other'.. He slowly leans forward to overcome the distance between their lips but she suddenly runs away trying to control her fluttering heart beat and panting breath]

Sharon [with one hand on her heart and the second fisted, her eyes closed]:

Jugnu jaisi chaahat dekho jale bujhe

Meethi si mushkil hai koi kya kare [looking at him with all her love and slowly walking towards him]

Jugnu jaisi chaahat dekho jale bujhe

Meethi si mushkil hai koi kya kare

Swayam [lifting her face by supporting her chin]:

ummm'.. Hothon ki arzi aisi thukarao na

Saanson ki marzi ko jhuthlaao na

Sharon [looking deep into his eyes]:

Choo lo na... Choo lo na'.. Choo lo na'.. Choo lo na

Swayam [moves his face closer to her with his one hand cupping her face and his thumb creasing her cheek ]:

Hawaa kuch haule haule

Zubaan se kya kuch bole bole

Na duri hai ab darmiyaan

[He pecks her right eye and then her left eye... Her eyes yet closed, he moves to lips and stops just an inch away]

Sharon [with her eyes yet closed]:

Dekho na'. ummm'..ummm'.. Dekho na'.

Swayam lifts her in his arms and walks them to their room'.. Sharon's eyes yet closed and her head resting on his chest right near his heart'.. He slowly puts her on the bed and keeps admiring his angle'.. The light emitted by the fire was just adding fuel to atmosphere'.. She was drenched and drops of water were trickling down from her forehead to her cheek and shamelessly kissing her lips'.. Some of them travelled down her cheeks, slid down her neck and made their way down her cleavage'.. He was looking no less'.. His hair messed up and stuck on his forehead making him looking irresistible'.. his face glowing due to the drops of water trickling down his face'.. his tee shamelessly clung onto perfect toned body and the transparency of the fabric was doing no less'..

Swayam leaned forward and without further delay claimed her lips, slowly leaning over her'.. He first gently kissed her asking her for permission'' When she felt his soft lips against hers she was completely under his spell'.. she responded and the gentle kiss turned into a passionate one'.. He slowly broke apart and looked at her who yet had her eyes closed'..

Sharon opened her eyes and looked at him with all her love'.. He slowly moved the strand of hair behind her ear'.. her eyes closed due to his touch'.. He kissed her forehead'.. her eyes'.. her cheeks'.. pecked her lips'.. kissed her chin'.. her hands travelled from his nape and found its way into his silky soft hair'..he left a trail of wet kisses on her jawline and in process sucking in the water droplets'.. He moved to her neck as his hand travelled to her back'. He moved on his side with her in his arms'.. He slowly started untying the knot of her anarkali while yet kissing her'.. She suddenly moved and now he was flat on his back and she was on him'.. He looked at her as she was leaning forward'.. She looked deep into his eyes and kissed him on his cheeks'.. He closed his eyes as he felt her lightly nibbling on his earlobe'.. She then placed a long peck on his lips'.. She started kissing him down his jawline to his neck with all her love'.. She bit him on his pulse point'.. he hssted and she planted a wet kiss soothing it'.. She continued kissing him on the exposed part of his neck and chest'.. In the mean while he slid his hands on her bare back and was massaging it'..

He took control and placed her on her back'.. She placed her hands on his waist under his tee, slowly tracing her hands from his navel to his chest and his back'.. He kissed her on her pulse point and in the process pulled down the anarkali from her shoulder'.. Swayam suddenly broke apart and got a puzzled look from Sharon'.. He bent backwards and pulled the warm and cozy comforter over them'.. No soon the sounds of moans and sighs filled up the silence'.. Both the souls lost in a world of love and passion...

In the morning'..

The birds chirping'.. The trees swaying with the wind'.. and the sun showing of its brightness, symbolizing the start of a new day'.. The love birds in bed, cuddling into one other under the comforter'.. The brightness in the room disturbed her eyes'.. She slowly opens her eyes and found her heard resting on his bare chest'.. Sharon's cheeks turned into a deep shade of red as the images of last played in her head'..

Swayam: Oye hoye, Subh subh kya nazara dekhne mil raha hai!

Sharon (surprised): Tum kab uthe?

Swayam (creasing her cheek with his thumb): Bas kuch minute pehle! By the way, Good morning my love!

Sharon (pecking his lip): Good morning!

Sharon leans over Swayam and take the silk bed-cover than was lying on the floor'.. Wrapping it around herself she gets up'..

Swayam (hold her hand): Kahan jaa rahi ho?

Sharon: Mr.Shekhawat, I guess you're forgetting'.. Par hume wapas jaana hai remember?!

Swayam (pouting): Jaana jaruri hai?

Sharon (diva attitude): Yes!

Swayam (with a naughty smile): Toh chalo, I'll help you out to freshen-up!

Sharon (playfully hitting him): No thanks! I can do that myself!

Sharon just runs away to the bathroom and locks it

before Swayam got hold of her'.. They soon got ready and left

from there'.. Heading back home'.. Resuming their

daily schedule'.. But also having their personal moments

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So how was it?
Pehli baar koi aisa koi scene likha hai... Hope you liked it!
Please do leave in you comments and hit the like button
Next Update Coming Soon...

P.S Will update the other FF tomorrow 😊


Edited by smartypantstanu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res...
here before pm...

so sorry for being so late...u know the reason...


yup...so the chap...
haha i was right...i was so damn romantic...
the beginning ...rain...wow isse zyada romantic aur kya ho sakta hai...
the song selection...yaar u always do it perfectly toh...main kya bol sakta hun...
the scene described wid the song...hands down...it was mesmerizing...really...i was lost reading that.
...and the romantically beautiful scenes...
...the morning convo...i was so cute...
so wat all i can say is...it was the best chap of this FF...
plus...how can i forget the writer...
the intimate moments very described wonderfully..
..and not making them look vulgar...
.becoz smtimes i cant stand much intimacy and den i dont like that...but this was written very very very very very nicely...grtly...
.and though being so romantic it was sweet...and a treat to read...really..
..and ur physical description of the characters was also hatss off...but..
..wat i loved the most in the sense of writing was the description of the fresh new morning.
..that was the cherry on the cake moment for me...

Rohan:)

P.S.: LOOK I WAS LATE SO I GAVE A LONG COMMENT...:P
Edited by rohanmalhotra15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
update next part quickly!
loved this update!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow
simply amazing
i loved it to the core
wow...
OMG !!!
the song
i was flowing with that song
its one of my fav.. 😳😳😳
totally romantic ☺️
this was a ☺️ update
loved it
really well written
hanks for the PM
update soon
and do PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update tanvish it was beautifully penned down the atmosphere you created the situations the rain, swayam and sharon together wet it was all very nice..😃😃
P.S specially loved the song u selected dekho naa from fanaa I love the song and the movie both it was a very apt song for the situation swayam and sharon were in..😊 ❤️
If this was your first attempt at writing something sensuos it was realli nice it was very decently written nothing very vulgar in it but you also managed to bring out the raw passion and deep emotions both swayam and sharon held for each other.. 😳 👍🏼
Swayam was being pretty naughty in the morning also wanting to help sharon a lot but sharon being sharon the diva turned down the offer and both of them returned to their work hehehe..
Great update really liked it and thanx for sending me a pm dear.. 😊
Edited by sweet16cash - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update...👏
the song sequence was awesome...☺️
just loved it..
thank for the pm...
pls update the next part soon..

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