Swaron FF: The best Journey ever... *COMPLETED* - Page 25

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Posted: 12 years ago
i loved it
it was fabulous
thanks for he PM

im really sorry for the short comment
i have to study now 😔
next time pakka big
really sorry
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Posted: 12 years ago
Totally loved it
Aisa update dene k bad ab bol rae ho k weekends pe update sabr nai hoga please update soon
Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
Really sweet update...👏
loved it...
thanks for the pm...
update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
It ws amazing dear!
Swaron r just so adorable!
Loved their reactions!
Ty for PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
SORRY for the EXTREMELY late reply!!!
i just read 5 chapters in one go!!!!
i am proud of myself!!!!
but you did an awesome job!!!
i really didn't wanna stop reading and i kept coming back here to read even though i didn't have time...
and i caught up on all the chapters!!!
and i missed the main ones!!!
so much happened and im reading it now!!!
the way you wrote of swayam confusion and sharon's pain was great!!
like i could actually imagine all that happening!!!!
but i was so glad everything became ok between them!!
i was so worried!!!
and you showed sharon's trust beautifully!!!
even though she shed so much tears from all that all she wanted in return was his love!!!!
that part was soo heart touching!!!!
and i love how they always end up stuck together at night!!!
first at the farmhouse and now in the cottage!!!
and i also loved loved the line when swayam said he wasan't even thinking about canging to sharon!!
it was sooo cute!!!!
and all the swaron moments were really beautiful!!!
and especially the in the rehearsal hall when he keeps telling her that he loves her!!!!
that was sooo cute!!!!
they were awesome updates!!!
and i hope the length of my comment makes up for me missing the past few updates!!!
Sorry again!!!
CONTINUE SOON!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
how mean you gave only one part of the update😵
but jitna bhi tha kamal ka tha...amazing👏
loved bharath's dialogue...i love the way he always saya bhai log in d3 as well...😳
and the last part seems interesting...resort and all...omg i'm so waiting for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Poor Swayam,bechara har jagah gang ka shikar ban jata hai and ab toh yeh haal hai ki agar control nahi kia to mom ke hathon bhi pitega😆
Jealous Sharon is gold and even a few minutes her are enough to enliven an update😛
So they are spending the night at a super romantic resort,I like where my thoughts are going😉
Weekend's still 3 days away 😒

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey...i m late again bu**shit!!
the chap:
teasing section is so true n a birth right of all the frnds...beautifully penned down..not only in this chap in every others too...
naught swayam...yaar yeh banda romance karne ka koi chance hi nahi chodta...and ofcourse chodna bhi nahi chahiye...phir mile na mile :P
damn yaar !!!moms hamesha galat tym par hi kyun call karti hain...
the jealous but more than it possesive swaron...sho sweet
and swaron ko saath dekhkar who doesnt goes aww man...yeh koi puchne ki baat hai??
they decide to stay together at night...hmmm somethings upp...

all in all a very sweet and cute chap...wud be waiting for next update...

Rohan :)


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Posted: 12 years ago
As always awesome chapi!!
Gang's teasing session is always fun!!😛
Update soon!!

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